So I haven't really got into the story really just an intro if i'm honest, hopefully this should tell you more what will happen.. and i'm in school a lot now rehearsing for Fame the musical so i'm a bit busy so updating will take a while.. Enjoy:)
Applejack was in her room in Sweet Apple Acres deciding what she wanted to wear for tonight she wanted to look good in front of her date Thunderlane, she wasn't really the one for fashion and fancy things but tonight is different. Applejack looked in her wardrobe as she found the dress she wore for the Fall Formal she smiled at the memory she had when she met Twilight. She heard a knock on her door, it was Rarity holding 3 hangers. "Howdy Rar what can ah do for ya?" Aj asked, "It's not what you can do for me darling it's what I can do for you." Rarity replied showing Applejack 3 dresses, one was a long green dress with 3 apples designed on it, the other was a shortened red dress that didn't even go other her knees and it had white strands coming from the top and finally she showed a blue dress similar to her fall formal dress but it has golden designs on instead when Applejack seen the blue one she knew that was the one she wanted. "There all really nice, ah think ah'll pick the blue one please Rarity tanks for this it means ah lot to me." Rarity smiled. "Right go get that dress on we still have hair and make-up to do yet." Rarity spoke up, Applejack didn't think of just standing around or arguing about make-up and hair styling it was different, tonight was going to be a night to remember. As Applejack came out with her new dress she sighed, Rarity was confused "What's wrong Applejack don't you like the dress?" Aj head shot up "Ah love the dress it's just what if tonight ah mess something up and Thunderlane won't like me anymore, why would he like me anyway ah ain't no pretty apple. What's the point." her head went back down, Rarity hugged Applejack "Oh darling don't be thinking like that just be yourself, and the reason Thunderlane likes you is because your a pretty, smart, kind and strong girl and if any other boy's don't see that well they clearly can't see beauty when they see it." Rarity said and she saw a small smile from Applejack "Thanks Rarity y'all sure one good friend, oh ah need to ask ya something do y'all know what wrong with Rainbow she been ignoring my text missing my calls is she upset with me or somethin?" Rarity answered "Oh Rainbow just in one of her moods she get over what ever she bothered about, but you don't need to worry about that, now sit hair and make-up time!" Applejack just sat down and faced her mirror.
Time to face Big Mac
It was time to tell Big Macintosh where Applejack was going she wasn't looking forward to this as she knew how protective her big brother was, she saw him in the kitchen searching through the cupboards, "Howdy Big Mac, ah'm going out with a friend so ah will be home at 10 okay so see ye later." Applejack was just about to walk out the kitchen until she heard Big Mac slam the cupboard door shut "Get back here young missy, what kind of friend better not be ah boy!" Big Mac asked with his arms crossed, Applejack knew she couldn't lie to her family so she had to speak up "Yes it is with a boy a friend of mine named Thunderlane ah met him today he's new at CHS so ah'll be heading off" she said trying to walk off again until Big Mac had pulled her back she knew she was going to give him a big speech again on how she old enough now to make her own decisions she remembered the last time she had to talk with him it was when Caramel invited her to go to the movies. She sat in the front room with her brother as she began to speak "Big Mac ah know y'all looking afta me because ah'm ya lil sis but ah'm a big girl now remember ah'm old enough to make my own choices and tonight ah chose to go out with Thunderlane for a nice meal because that's what a date all about, and yes ah said he was a friend but no me and Thunderlane are going on a date and ah'll appreciate it if ya let ya lil sis go out and enjoy herself since it's her day off. It's nice to know y'all care and ah'm sure when Applebloom my age she'll be a'vin the same conversation with me like ah am with you but y'all need to accept that ah'm not 7 now Mac." *Gives him a peck on the cheek* "Ah know ya old enough Aj, ah just can't stand y'all getting hurt by some boy ya my lil sis and ah love ya." Big Mac said, Applejack smiled "Ah love ya to Big Mac, and ah'm touched that ya care about me so much, but ah got to get going. See ya oh and tell Granny Smith where a'm going.. Bye.." Big Mac waved and shouted "Have fun but not to much fun girl."
Walk and Talk
Thunderlane was waiting for Applejack at the bottom gates, he saw Applejack coming from a distance but when she came close his mouth dropped "Wow you look amazing." Applejack blushed "Thanks you do to" the two walked to a fancy restaurant and sat down, they got talking about there family friends and what they did "Wow you own your own apple farm? That's impressive" Thunderlane said. "Yeah been running it for quiet along time now since Granny Smith tach to old to do it all by herself. Sure she helps out a lot she's even one of the cooks for CHS!" Applejack replied. There meal came it looked delicious "If ya want we can go near this meadow it's really nice their, ah used to go their when me and Rainbow Dash were little we used to play football hang about and stuff, huh she always used to beat me still does." Applejack chuckled. "Sure that be great let's just finish off this meal." The two finished up paid for their meals and headed off to the meadow, they found a great spot right on top of the hill where they saw Rainbow training kids like Applebloom's age for the football team. They sat there just watching Rainbow team play "She really good isn't she." Thunderlane started the conversation "Well duh if she wasn't she wouldn't be the school's football captain would she, her dream is to go onto the WonderSports team she better and faster than all of them but unfortunately there to stupid to see that." Applejack replied. They laid on the green grass as the sun set, Thunderlane had pulled Applejack closer to him by touching her waste Applejack giggled and then went red "Oh someone ticklish are they." Thunderlane said as he grinned "Uh-m no Gahaahahahahah" Applejack busted out laughing as Thunderlane had started tickling her, when he's stop Applejack spoke up "Hey Thunderlane there's one thing ah forgot to mention about me*She said as she lifted him off her and pinned him down.* Ah'm pretty strong!" She said tickling him back they laughed until they heard a shout "Oi love birds I've got a team to train here keep it down!" It was Rainbow Dash with her arms crossed as the team started giggling. A little voice spoke up "Hey Applejack I thought you and Caramel were together, he never shut's up about you. He's always tells me the story on how he's had a crush on you since you met in Manhatten." that little voice was Caramel's little brother Toffee sweet. Applejack had looked confused "C-Caramel has a crush on me since w-we met in Manhatten that was ages ago? Why has he never told me? she looked at Thunderlane "Ah see you tomorrow ah need to talk to Caramel." Thunderlane looked worried "But we're still together right?" Applejack didn't speak she just kissed him on the lips "That answer your question" She smirked as she hugged him goodbye. Applejack quickly went to talk to Rainbow but that girl was having none of it she just turned her back avoiding her so called friend Aj's face frowned as she went to find Caramel.
Finds out everything
Thunderlane was on his way home not knowing he was being followed, by a girl with rainbow hair. Rainbow Dash didn't trust him and she had to find out why. She seen him walk through a passage way she went the same way making sure she couldn't been seen. As she came into the place it looked like a cave, she heard a familiar laugh "Oh-uh" she thought she peeked and seen her the enemy of the 6 friends. Why she here and Why is Thunderlane with her. "Soon Thunderlane Equestria will be ours, remember though just get Applejack away from her friends and to fall in love with you. Then I can feed off the love and get stronger to be positive that I will defeat Princess Celestia and have all the magic in Equestria Mwuahahahaha." Chrysalis shouted "Yes, my Queen I won't fail you I think Applejack is falling for me but now something gone on with that Caramel boy but I think Applejack will sort that out herself. Soon my Queen you shall rule Equestria and have all the magic you deserve." Thunderlane replied with a evil grin. Rainbow didn't know how to feel, she felt angry of what Thunderlane was doing to Applejack, Chrysalis is back and poor Twilight. Rainbow knew she had to get in touch with Twilight and tell the others about this plan. She ran out of cave to tell them all now. "Sure she get her friends to believe her but Applejack won't believe that for a second. Mwuahaha" The queen had laughed as she saw Rainbow leave. Everything going her way and she could not wait for more.
That's it for now, WonderSports not best name but oh well and Toffee Sweet made up character thought this be a good way to let Aj know about Caramel's feelings. So won't be updating for while to give you a little detail about next chapter it's about when Applejack talks to Caramel, Rainbow tells everyone everything and Rainbow speaks to Caramel. So comment in review on what you thought ;)