Finally I had summited this , i had made a chapter but this is only a part of it, the next part i had writen it but im not realy sure so I'll need some suggestions on what is going to happen, i purposely made as a cliffhanger i hope it was
Continueing...
''Booom!"
''Get down! Magic Winx, Sirenix! I call upon to the element of water,water,dome shield."
In a second later the winx came in through a hole, that Aisha created in the wall with a blast .All where transformed into Bloomix, ready to fight.
''Ms. Faragonda, Daphne, are you two okay", Stella said
"What happened?"
''Girls thank you for your concern, but that doesn't mean you can blast a whole in the wall"
"Opps, I think I over reacted when I heard the explosion''
''I believe that too"' Stella looking at Aisha
'' Well,with all due respect I believe that it was 50% acceptable, because the Trix might have plan an explosion''
"anyways I don't see fire or anything burning"
"That is true Musa , it sounded like if it came right here in the office, right Daphne?''Faragonda wondering and examining all around her office
Blooms pov
I still remembered I saw the last bit of light, before I was swallowed in complete darkness. I couldn't see anything even the floors everything was pure dark black. I was scared to walk I wouldn't know what I would cross paths with or...what. in the heavy fog I didn't want to think about it. When I thought again about everyone I loved,and cared about. For a while I was still wrapped in my thoughts, I don't want to be alone I tried my best to put tat aside . Now it has been three days or truth is that I had a no idea how many days has passed all that I know is that it is always dark, I'm guessing that time is different in here anyways I'm weak and hungry. I couldn't sleep I know I would wake up every hour and have nightmares,and this place could be unpredictable. I think I already know my destiny I would die in happiness of having friends,
then I relize that I again started to think about the people I love trying to not think about what happened to me before,but then my heart broke...Selina my friend...you were my best friend when I was happened you.I remembered the first time I saw Stella, the time I was adopted, my missions with the girls,the day I met Daphne in the lake,the time when I finally found my birth parents, the day I took lessons from my dad, such when he and Mom taught me how to swim and others more, my pets , my selki friend and Sky...
"Daphne had saved me and the dragon flame, now it is my turn to save it to help the others. " With the last energy I had, I made a dragon. "Dragon, go find Daphne and the others just find the path of the most pure hearted ones and you will find your destination. The dragon seems to hesitate from leaving the holder (or the master).
"Please go, you will be needed from your previous holder, to help the Dimension from evil. Please... just go." I said with a final weak breath. I saw the dragon leave with a glowing light from his source, and disappeared. My vision seems to be fuzzy the .last thing I noticed was me sort of shrinking ; I saw another light to seem to be familiar, but I never summoned it .I heard voices they sounded like whispers as if they were ghostly and everything went blackā¦..
(This Pov is from a new character in the story)
''Who had you brought?''
''She is special , I know that for sure''
A girl was still almost lifeless, one bad blast or a simple hit could easily kill her.
''She is in pain, her destiny is not writen, she could die this minute''
''but we cannot look inside the future''
''i could see she is very capable of many things ''
''She is not only physically strong with magic but mentally strong too''
''She has a strong spirit''
''I believe there might be a way to maybe save her...
''No, not that if that doesn't heel or help her, her body will dissolve''
''and if she does make it, that will cost a price ...a big one...she might be different ..."
'' yes ... what should should all of us do? We Shall-oh NO!''
SO THis isn't the final product later on tell me what I should write later and tomarrow or so i will post it . so pleaz private message me or post it on the reviews for a suggestions and happy early summer ..
continueing
''THE VOICES"
''The girl, it's too soon''
''What shall we do?''
''We have to take her to the river, lets just hope she will she'll be ok...''
''I agree, lets leave before she is-''
[all the voices] With the- (character unable to listen to the rest)
In a flash 'they' left and I stayed behind
Another POV
We had arrived to Fluvius via known in English as River of Life {translated from Latin}
''This River has been.. how should we say this?"
''Very nuaghtey''
''We just have to take the chance she is going to die''
''I agree, we have nothing to loose the same thing might accure''
''She... is..very young, and this is very devistating''
''We must hurrey, she is very hurt "
The young red head girl was laid , floating in the river but being held barely in order to severe her from drowning or floating away.
''We must have hope even though this river was piosoned, that this girl is going to be ok.''
'Yes ,but this would be murder we know what this river is capable to do''
''and you would also trying and watching her die is also murder, if you think about it ''
''We help protect we don't watch pain and misery''
They all turned to the girl
''but how can it be...''
''she didn't, she didn't-''
''vaporize''
''yes, but remember ...everything comes with a price..''
''She had unbelievably turned into a child''
''Have you seemed this before''
''No, I have not''
''Yet she isn't pale, but I thought this would-''
''I know, but she is cold,remember she is still weak''
''agree''
Daphne's Pov
Even after a few minutes we couldn't detect what made that boom sound.
''Aachoo''
I remember that noise, I heard that sneeze before...
''Girls, do you know what I am thinking?" Stella said
''Daphne, remember that the cafeteria cook said, that he was baking chocolate cupcakes, strawberry and raspberry smoothies, and vanilla shake as our dessert?''Musa said looking at me.
''Yum-Y''
We heard another voice,than I remembered what Bloom had said before.
Kiko's POV
I was trying to pull back the pixies from there temptation. We were still hiding, because we had did something very bad, the pixies were unable to resist to all the good foods they enjoy. They all looked as a pair of flying zombies.
Then Daphne turned me just like them,''We also have carrot cake ''
My whole mouth was watering, I started to daydream that I was in bunny alot of yummy carrot foods,such as carrot cake or carrot juice, and there was lettice, all of those were piled in mountains .I could easily make a carrot angel, like the times I did with when I woke up from daydreaming I saw six pairs of eyes looking at me.
''mm'' I tried to do my bunny face,but I knew it wouldn't work.
Hello readers, so I have more cliffhangers and i slightly answered most of the ones I did, I don't have ideas if you write an idea i will post it on the next boom like who are the new characters or they might not be so new after all what will happen to bloom, why was the lake poison and why kiko and pixies made or caused the sound IF they caused it or why they think they will be in trouble so bye...
-theTyping Rookie
