Hey guys! I'm SO SO SO sorry I haven't updated in a couple days! My mom was limiting my computer time until I finished my summer homework, which I finished yesterday. I was gonna update yesterday, but once I started writing a huge thunderstorm started and I had to get off of the computer. So now I'm writing again. And I HAVE to give credit to my friend Zoe because she is helping me write this chapter and has essentially taken it over. Tell me if you guys like this chapter and maybe Zoe will become a full time co-writer with me! Also, sorry for any typos. The y button on my keyboard isn't working well.

***Tris's POV***

Was that an engagement ring in his pocket!? Oh my God… I don't know if I'm ready for this. I mean, I love Tobias, but the thought of marriage, the thought of droning on, and on, and on about my wedding, like Christina does, disturbs me. A thought that doesn't disturb me though, is being tied to Tobias in every way, him being mine forever, me becoming Mrs. Tobias Eaton... I've never been the girly type, but imagining Tobias and me on a honeymoon somewhere beautiful, together alone lulls me to sleep.

***Tobias's POV***

As I walk out of the hospital, and in to the crisp, cool fall air, I touch the ring box in my pocket. I shake my head. Tris would never marry me. I know she loves me, and I know that she wants to be with me, but she's not the marriage type. She has so much ahead of her. Who even knows if she would want to be with me? I catch the train back to our apartment, but when it goes past our apartment, I don't jump off. I just sit and think. The sound of the whirring train provokes my thought process. I pull the ring box out of my pocket, and open it slowly, flinching when I look at it. It suddenly disgusts me. The thought that she would actually want to marry me. Was I out of my mind? Tris has her priorities straight. She knows what she wants, and she will always get it. But thinking of how moody she was just when I tried to give her a cute (I thought it was cute at least) Pet name, she threatened to slice my neck open. What would she do if I proposed to her? I close the ring box with the engagement ring in it and chuck it out of the train car. What was I even thinking? I need to get my head together.

***Tris's POV***

I got out of the hospital a few hours ago. I've gone over what I saw in Tobias's pocket in my head over, and over. I decided to walk home from the hospital. I walked the back way for more time to think. If he was going to propose, I was excited, and I would say yes, but I just needed to think. I started to walk back on the train tracks, knowing that the train had looped around by now and wouldn't be back by for a little while. I watched the ground with every step; saw the bugs scurrying around, carrying crumbs of food. The Ants eating their dead family members made me wrinkle my nose in disgust. I kept walking. A little box caught my eye. It looked just like the one that had been in Tobias's pocket. I laughed at myself. Maybe I was delusional and going insane. I bent down and grabbed the box, opening it. I gasped and flung it down. Inside, was an engagement ring. I covered my face with my hands and rubbed my eyes. Okay, now I was definitely crazy. I picked the box up again, shutting it and shoving it in my pocket with haste. Engagement rings were expensive; I could probably take it to the jewelry shop nearby and try to return it or something. I broke in to a run, I ran as fast as I could shutting out my thoughts until I reached the little jewelry shop in the town that was rundown, but it was a town because after the war, we tried to get things to go back to normal so people set up shops. I ran in to the Jewelry shop and slammed the box down on the counter, not meaning to be so rough, but wanting answers.

"Tris, it's so nice to see you!" the cheerful, slim, birdlike woman, Mrs. Faulk greeted me with her smile that was too big for her face, but suited her. Her bright blue eyes were large and always cheerful. "What's this?" she asked, picking up the box with lanky fingers, she opened it and peered in at the ring. "I don't understand" she said, her smile fading for a moment before looking back up at me and smiling again. "I don't understand" she repeated. "Tobias came in here last week, all cheerful." She said, peering at the ring "I've never seen him like that before"

She interjected. "And he asked for the most beautiful ring because he said it was for the most beautiful woman he'd ever seen. I suspected it was for you"

My hand went to my throat, ran up to my mouth. "Is that? Did he? Is that the ring he bought?" I asked, my voice shaking

"Well, yes. It is the most beautiful ring in all of Chicago," she droned on.

I quickly collected the box from the counter "Thank you" I blurted before walking out hastily. I heard Mrs. Faulk Saying something about me glowing, and adding a congratulations. So I walked out of the town, back to the apartment, my thoughts consuming me.

***Tobias's POV***

What the hell? What did I just do? I launched myself out of the train car, stumbling, but landing firmly on my feet. What was I doing? I loved Tris and she loved me, and if two people loved each other, then they had every right to be married. I ran along the tracks, desperately searching the ground for the little box.

"Please, please, please, please" I mumbled to myself, I ran until I realized I was back at the apartment. I grabbed the back of my neck, gritting my teeth yelling and leaning forward. "Damnit! Damnit! DAMNIT!" I screamed. I stood back up and tried to compose myself, telling myself it didn't matter, that she wouldn't have said yes anyway.

I turned the doorknob to our apartment, the apartment I shared with Tris, The girl I wanted to marry, but lost the ring in a moment of mental despair. I wonder if she'd even care if there was a ring. I doubt she would. I think the only person who would care is Christina. I walk in the house and see Tris, sitting on the couch holding the engagement ring.

***Tris's POV***

I get home, fully prepared to talk to Tobias, to realize that he's not home. I sit on the couch and think about everything for a while. I think about how much I love him. I think about what a great husband he would be. I also think about the fact that I'm ready to start a family. I know I'm young, only 21, but in this world, you can get killed at any second without warning or cause. I want to be a mom. I want to start a family. I have never been so certain of anything, until now. Just then Tobias walks in and his eyes look at me, then instantly fall to the little box in my hand.

"Where did you find that?" he asks, his eyes never leaving the box.

"Well," I begin, "I saw it in your pocket when you were leaving the hospital. Then when I got released from the hospital I decided to walk home so I could think about this and clear my head. As I was walking, I came across a small black box. I opened up to find the most beautiful ring I have ever seen. I decided to go to the jewelry store to sell it because I knew some extra money wouldn't hurt, plus it wasn't mine so I had no right to keep it. When I got to the jewelry store and showed Mrs. Faulk the ring, she told me that you had bought it. She also said you were the happiest she's ever seen you." By now I am tearing up. I hate crying in front of people, but I know Tobias won't judge.

He walks over to me, sits down next to me, and pulls me onto his lap. He cradles me like I'm a baby and I don't mind it at all, for once. I softly cry for a few minutes. Tobias breaks the silence by saying, "Does this mean you want me to ask you?"

I sheepishly nod.

He then sets me back on the couch, grabs the box from my hands, and kneels down in front of me. I can't believe this is finally happening. I'm going to hide it from Christina until after all the plans are made because this is my wedding, and I want it my way.

"Beatrice Prior, ever since the day you came to Dauntless, I knew you were the one for me. I once said that you weren't beautiful, but I lied. You are the most beautiful woman I've ever met. I love you so much. I know we've had our issues, but every couple does. I want to be with you for the rest of my life. I want to hold you in my arms every night, knowing that you'll always be mine. I want to be the person you depend on for everything. Basically what I'm trying to say is, Tris, will you marry me?"

Yes," I barely manage to say between my tears. This is the best moment of my life. Tobias slips the ring onto my finger then softly kisses me.

***Tobias's POV***

Where did you find that?" I ask, my eyes never leaving the box.

"Well," she begins, "I saw it in your pocket when you were leaving the hospital. Then when I got released from the hospital I decided to walk home so I could think about this and clear my head. As I was walking, I came across a small black box. I opened up to find the most beautiful ring I have ever seen. I decided to go to the jewelry store to sell it because I knew some extra money wouldn't hurt, plus it wasn't mine so I had no right to keep it. When I got to the jewelry store and showed Mrs. Faulk the ring, she told me that you had bought it. She also said you were the happiest she's ever seen you." By now I am tearing up. I know she hates crying in front of people, but she knows I love her and won't judge her.

I walk over to her, sit down next to her, and pull her onto my lap. I cradle her in my arms, much like I would to a baby, and for once, she doesn't stop me. She cries for a few minutes and it breaks my heart to see her like this. I break the long, slightly awkward silence by saying, "Does this mean you want me to ask you?"

She weakly nods.

I then set her back on the couch, grab the box from her hands, and kneel down in front of her. I can't believe this is finally happening.
"Beatrice Prior, ever since the day you came to Dauntless, I knew you were the one for me. I once said that you weren't beautiful, but I lied. You are the most beautiful woman I've ever met. I love you so much. I know we've had our issues, but every couple does. I want to be with you for the rest of my life. I want to hold you in my arms every night, knowing that you'll always be mine. I want to be the person you depend on for everything. Basically what I'm trying to say is, Tris, will you marry me?" I am struggling not to cry as I say this all. It's all I've ever wanted to say to her.

Yes," she says between her tears. This is the best moment of my life; I finally get to say Tris and I are getting married. I slip the ring onto my finger then softly kiss her. The kiss quickly escalates and before I know it, we are in our bed, tangled in each other's arms.

Ta da! The longest chapter I've ever written and I just barely wrote more than half! So what do you guys think of this combined writing style? Would you like to see more of it? And OMG! FourTris engagement and…uh…ya know… Anyways, I hope you liked it! I might not update tomorrow because my best friend is moving and we're going to some beach/park thing. Goodnight guys! And Thank you again, Zoe!