O. K. E
[Operation Kill Everything]
+ "Thoughts/Flashbacks"
+"Talking"
+ "Altered/Demonic/Summon"
Chapter Six: The More They Stay The Same…
"Okay, and what about your rule about not instigating trouble with shinobi villages, this could bring down a lot of heat on you and Naruto?" Saeko warned.
"Hold up, hold up...hold up!"
Author's Note: This is Haru Ran here, A.K.A, ah...who cares! So, Operation Kill Everything huh? Yeah. -Goes back to chapter one and reads it over, then begins to shake his head sadly.- It's there, but not quite. Like my buddy Orpheus told me, it's good, but it ain't centered. I couldn't continue to write this knowing it could be twice as better...and believe me, if you saw some of my notes; you would agree too. Still, the likes and faves are there...the reviews, few though they may be, encouraging. Sin Kurokami, unique? Saeko Busujima, appreciated.
I hate to say it, but Hitomi's arc is presenting problems and so is my decision to resurrect Kushina Uzumaki. I mean, she can be in this story, but she is misplaced. The Uchiha, can definitely be in this story, but are also misplaced.
Yes, I'm hitting the drawing board...it's back to basics on this and I got so many good, original ideas for Naruto that I can't act on until this is hammered out.
So, as much as I hate to say it, as hard as I tried to keep this story on track from chapter three to five, and as long as I put it off for...It's going to undergo rewriting status. Now, it won't take me months to get this going again and I'm not going to delete this original O.K.E, it'll remain uploaded on . If anything I hope to have a 'remix' uploaded, chapters one to six by March, if not before.
So, I'm outchea to get started on that. Holla!