I want to make this interesting, with dark storms and Ember's next spell.


The dark storm had already cover Galloping Valley and Maren Tone. The wind blow strong as the trees are about to fall. Thundering sounds roar through the skies and lightning strikes down, making a lot of damage.

The ponies are now panicking and screaming, as the storm grow bigger.

Twilight and her friends run at of the library, to see what's going on and shocking to see the dark storm.

"I never a black cloud like that before." said Rainbow Dash.

"But it was supposed to be sunny." exclaimed Shooting Star, when the thunder roars.

"What's happen Gloria?" cried Sweet Stuff in fear.

"I don't know." Gloria replied looking at the storm. "But whatever it is, it's bad. I can sense that."

"You're right." Twilight agreed with Gloria, "This is not an ordinary storm clouds."

"You're right. I think it's made of dark magic."

It brings fear to the ponies.

Wind Whistler the head of the pegasus ponies of Galloping Valley and also Shooting Star's mum, flew down and warn Gloria about the weather.

"Gloria," she warned, "we're not sure about this storm, this not any storm clouds I know, but this is a wild one. It came out of no way and its bolts and wind are making a lot of damage.

"But there's something that worst, some of the fillies are in trouble in the valley and couldn't get back. Even the animals are in danger."

Fluttershy was shock to hear some animals are in danger, even the fillies. "What do we do?" she cried.

"Where's Corn Flour?" ask Gloria.

"She is in the valley to save them." Said Wind Whistler.

"Alright then, you better get many pegasi as you can and see what you can do the stop the storm."

"I'm on it. Shooting Star, Melody I need you."

"Let me help." suggested Rainbow Dash. "I know how to handle storm cloud and I am the fastest flyer."

"Lucky to hear that," Wind Whistler agreed, "we need all the help we can get."

The four pegasi flew to the storm clouds.

"Corn Flour need some help in the valley," Suggest Gloria, "and the ponies in Maren Tone need to get inside, so I need some volunteers."

Ember suggest "I'll go help Corn Flour, she needs a lot of help."

Jasmine volunteer, so does Twilight and Applejack she strong enough to get through the wind. Fluttershy wants to help, she need to save the animals knowing some of them may get hurt.

"O.K, then." Said Gloria, "Once you find Corn Flour, she let you know what to do."

"Sweet Stuff and I will go and help around Maren Tone." Buttons suggested.

"I'll help too." agreed Rarity.

"Me two." Said Spike.

"Me three." Whaled Pinkie Pie.

"We'll meet back here when we're done." Twilight suggest.

"Good plan." Gloria agreed, "Now hurry, the storm is getting wild. So be careful."

Twilight, Fluttershy, Applejack, Ember and Jasmine hurry off to the valley, with Ember and Jasmine lead the way.

While the rest stays and hurry around Maren Tone.


Just in the valley, the five ponies had mange to get through the wind of the storm, but it's getting stronger by the minute and a sleet began to fall. Until they meet up with Corn Flour, an apple green earth pony with sunshine blond hair and corn cutie mark. She really Jasmine auntie and the head of the earth ponies, always been so strong and knows how to take care of things.

"Corn Flour!" Ember cried to get her attention.

Corn Flour notice hear and called out. "Ember, this a good thing you're here and I'm glad you brought some help!

"The animals are panicking and they need to get in to shelter."

"Let me take care of them!" suggest Jasmine loudly, "I can get to the den for shelter."

"I'll gave you a helping hoof." Said Fluttershy getting tough to save some animals.

"There's also some fillies had got lost and trapped in the wind." Corn Flour continued, "They may be in trouble and they're too young to get through."

"How many fillies are there?" ask Applejack.

"Three."

"Then we better get them now!" suggest Twilight, "It looks like the wind is getting strong!"

"You're right Twilight." Ember agreed. "Let's go."

Twilight, Ember, Applejack and Corn Flour rush of two found the lost fillies. While Fluttershy and Jasmine went off to help the animals.

Just as the four ponies march through the storm, they can hear the cry of the scared fillies.

They can see two earth pony fillies haggle together beside a rock. And where is the third one?

"Help us!" cried the first filly.

"We lost our friend Mimic!" said the second one, "She maybe in trouble."

"Don't worry," said Ember knowing the fillies fear, "We'll help her."

"But how do we suppose to find her?" ask Applejack.

"Let me go on ahead, you'll take those two back to meet up with Fluttershy and Jasmine."

Twilight could not let Ember on her own, when she suggested. "What Ember, I'll go with you. Applejack and Corn Flour we'll take the young ones."

The two fillies followed the two earth ponies to the den for cover, while Twilight and Ember went ahead to find Mimic as the sleet became heavier.

They can't see through and they don't stand a chance ageist the strong cold wind.

"This is the work of dark magic!" Twilight cried, "I wish had a spell to get through!"

"But I do!" Ember replied, "And is a good chance to use it!"

She began to use her magic to summon a shield spell, which is a big bright force field bubble. Strong enough to protect and able to get through. Twilight was amazed again, this is the third time Ember can use some great spells.

"We should be save in here." Said Ember, "But I need to keep it steady."

As they march through with the shield spell, they can hear somepony crying. It was Mimic, a young white unicorn. She was scared and all alone.

"Mimic!" Twilight call out, "Don't be afraid, we're here to help you! Get in the shield quickly and get close to us!"

The little unicorn got in to Ember's shield, Twilight hold her close with her wing and let Ember lead the way, as she try very hard to keep the shield will. If she let loose of it, then they won't get through.


Rainbow Dash is helping the pegasi to clear off the storm, but no matter how they try, the storm is getting tough. Rainbow Dash did learn from Twilight that it is the work of dark magic, not from Discord's clouds. But someone else.

Bolts of lightning keep the pegasi from coming near and some of them got zapped by them.

Wind Whistler is the wisest pegasus that ever fly. She was trying to work out a plan. Until, her wing got zapped by one of the lightning bolts.

"Mum!" Screamed Shooting Star in terror, seeing her mother get hit.

"Wind Whistler!" cried Melody with horror.

Wind Whistler fell with a damage wing, Shooting Star hurry down to save her. As she got her, Rainbow Dash flew in to help.

"What can we do?" cried Melody in fear, "We can't hold much longer, the storm is about to destroy the valley.

"Unless we had a secret weapon." said Shooting Star holding Wind Whistler.

Rainbow Dash think that Shooting Star is right, the only secret weapon she had is…, then the gears in her head is now turning.

"I know had a secret weapon." She suggested, "I'll use the sonic rainboom. Get Wind Whistler some help and get as many pegasi to clear the way.

"Trust me, I know what to do."

Shooting Star and Melody had just met Rainbow Dash, they do heard of the sonic rainboom and they heard the Rainbow Dash is the one who can to it. They quickly agreed, as Melody get the pegasi out of the skies, while Shooting Star hurry to get Wind Whistler save on the ground.

Rainbow Dash began her speed, as she zoom along through the clouds and dodging the lightning bolts. In a few moment, as she got higher. She zoom down as fast as she could, she went faster, faster and faster, until a big explosion bust through the sky and clearing off the storm clouds with of the rainbow.

Rainbow Dash had unleash the sonic rainboom, which it is her secret weapon and she save the valley.

The ponies of Galloping valley were amazed, they have weakness something they have never seen before for.

Ember had her shield off, after knowing the sonic rainboom. It was the first time she seen it.

"This must be Rainbow Dash's work." Said Twilight with delight, "All right."

"Let's find Corn Flour and the others," suggest Ember, "then head back to Maren Tone."


Back in Maren Tone, as the sun begins to set, Twilight and her friends meet up with Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Spike, Rainbow Dash and the other ponies.

Gloria empress Ember with a hug. "Thank goodness you're alright and able to get through the storm safely." The she turn to Twilight and her Ponyville friends. "Thanks to your new friends here and to Rainbow Dash using her sonic rainboom. We would had been save."

The ponies in Maren Tone are cheering for Rainbow Dash, but it was a tragic victory. Maren Tone had been damage from the storm, Galloping Valley was now a miss and many for the ponies had been hurt.

"What kind of evil could do such sorcery?" Gloria continued with a sigh.

"I bet it could be the work of this Merissa." Said Applejack reminding the new villain.

"It could be." agreed Twilight, "She must have known we're searching for the golden heart and she was trying to stop us, so she can get it first."

"Then better keep searching for it." Suggest Rarity, "There no telling what she'll done next."

"I agreed to you, Rarity." said Ember, "But I am getting tired right now. My shield had drain a lot of my energy. I can hardly left my head."

"Yes," agreed Gloria, "You better get some rest. You had a big day and you need a lot of straight to carry on. You can stay at the library and we'll see what we can do later."

Twilight understand, her friends need to rest and she was surprise that Ember take a lot of energy doing he shield spell. She likes to look at some new spell books at The Heaven Leaf Library.

But seeing what happen to Ember's home, Twilight wonder what will happen next. Like what Rarity said.


Will I forget Rainbow Dash's sonic rainboom, like the time I think of Fluttershy's stare?