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''So, tonight was fun,'' Ross tries to make awkward small talk, standing in front of his door with his hands in his pockets. Laura nods quietly before breaking the silence.
''Ross, was this a date?'' Laura confronts him, fumbling her hands and looking up to him expectantly. Ross tightens his fist when hearing the uncomfortable question.
''I don't-. I mean, do you want it to be? Not-not that I want it to be! That sounded horrible,'' he walks closer to her, standing in the middle of the hallway. He sighs as he grabs his hair in frustration.
''Why didn't you just kiss me in the park?'' Laura bluntly asks him, not being able to keep it silent any longer. He swallows before looking her in the eyes, deciding it's time to be honest with her.
''I don't want to push you into doing something you might regret.''
Everything makes sense to her like that. Every time he broke the moment was just because he was afraid of hurting her by making a move. He didn't know she had been waiting for him to make a move this whole trip.
''You're thinking too much,'' she shakes her head in disbelief as she takes a step forward and tilts her head back.
''I'm really not. You said yourself that you were confused about what you felt. I don't wanna make that decision for you.''
''Don't think about it,'' she tells him before grabbing his collar to pull him down and connects her lips with his. She used the exact same sentence he used on the night they sang the song together and he refused to kiss her. It makes much more sense now, as his mind goes blank.
After he realizes what's going on, he moves his lips against hers, softly kissing her back. His arms go up to cup her cheek as her hands rest on his chest. He walks forward, pushing her against the hallway wall. The kiss is gentle as they're slowly moving their lips before letting go after a few seconds.
Her eyes flutter open, looking at him as she's smiling widely. She bites her lip while he runs his thumb over her cheek. He brings her face closer again before they get interrupted. They hear a faint sound behind Raini's door, making Ross's eyes widen. He quickly looks around before turning to Laura.
''Card! Where's your card?'' she reaches into her pocket before handing it to him, hesitating. He grabs it and opens her door, pushing her inside and pulling it shut right after. Laura faces her closed door, still in shock, trying to process what just happened. Leaning closer to the wood, she hears Ross talking to Raini.
''So how was it tonight? Did you have fun?'' Raini asks him suggestively in which Ross nervously laughs.
''Yeah, it was great. Laura already went to bed.''
''Did she really? I thought I heard you guys talking,'' of course she did, she had been eavesdropping for sure. Laura rolls her eyes as she leans closer.
''Nope, she went straight to her room,'' he assures her. ''And I'm going too. Goodnight,'' Ross ends the conversation rapidly.
''Okay, well, I'm glad you guys had fun,'' the disappointment is clearly noticeable as she walks back into her room. Ross waits for two seconds before quickly walking to Laura's door.
''Laur,'' he whispers, his mouth close to the wood. Laura sighs deeply, hesitating for a moment, before opening her door softly. Looking at him, furrowing her eyebrows, he watches her with an apologetic look in his eyes.
''What was that all about?'' Ross opens his mouth to answer before closing it again and pushes the door open to walk inside. Laura walks after him, still expecting an answer.
''We were this close to being caught by Raini. I had no other choice, sorry,'' Ross apologises, rubbing his neck. Laura shakes her head, narrowing her eyes as she sits on the bed.
''So what? What does it matter who sees us kissing?'' she zips her boots open and kicks them off before standing up again. ''Are you ashamed of being seen with me?''
''Laura, don't be ridiculous! Of course not, I just didn't think it would be a great idea for Raini to see us, you know-''
''You regret kissing me,'' Laura states, looking at him with beaming eyes, filled with tears. ''You just wanted to try it out, kissing your co-star, see how it would end. And now you're ready to forget it ever happened.''
''That's not at all why I wanted to hide it from Raini,'' he grabs her hands before she looks down and tears them loose from his grip.
''Hide it, huh?'' she laughs sarcastically before raising her voice. ''Ross, whatever excuses you have left, they better be really good, cause I'm not buying it.''
''Keep it down, Laura, they could hear us,'' he shushes her before realizing what he just said. He looks her mouth hanging open. ''I didn't mean it like-''
''Out.'' Laura points at her door with a stretched arm, looking at him angrily with a shivering lip. He shakes his head, trying to make it better but he knows it's pointless. ''I want you do get out. Now.''
He walks towards the exit, turning his head to give her one last glance as he grabs the handle. Her hands shake as she wraps one over her mouth, trying to muffle a sob as she sits back down on the bed. After doubting one more time if he should get back, he opens the door and walks straight to his room to slam the door closed.
The next day, everyone comes together in the lobby. The following scene would be shot in Ross's room as the prop guys were making it 'Austin' ready during the meeting.
''This will be an important scene for the movie, Austin shows Ally his room, expecting for Stacy and Toby to still be there, but they already left. He proceeds to try and convince Ally about what he saw. Got it?'' Ross nods as he glances over at Laura, who's discreetly avoiding his eyes. Sighing, he stands up as everyone walks towards the elevator. When it comes, everyone steps in, filling the small compartment almost entirely.
''Where are Ross and Laura?'' Calum asks as he notices the absence of his cast mates.
''I think they had something to work out,'' Raini smiles as the doors close. ''How's your headache?''
''Better, thanks. I noticed, this morning, that the last day of your prediction in our bet was yesterday. I have a feeling I'm winning,'' Calum smirks at her before the Latina shakes her head.
''We'll see about that.''
''What the hell, Ross?'' as the rest of them were walking inside the elevator, Ross took the opportunity to pull Laura into the one beside it, which doors were just opening too. This went by unnoticed by the others, making them share an elevator with just the two of them.
''I just wanted to tell you how sorry I am about last night. That was definitely not the way to handle things,'' he apologises in a fast tempo before looking at her expectantly.
''Really,'' Laura questions with a hint of sarcasm. Her eyes stay on the growing numbers above the silver doors.
''Can you please forgive me, I'd like for us to forget it happened. Like, the part after the kiss.'' Ross adds as he brushes her hair from the side over her shoulder. Her hand grabs his pulse midway as she leads it down, to drop it next to them.
''Can we not do this right now? I wanna focus on filming. Thanks,'' she smiles at him when a ding tells them they arrived at the twelfth floor. Laura practically sprints out, walking to Ross's room as she leaves him there, stunned.
Camera's ready? Scene twelve, argument over stolen song, take one.''
Ross looks at Laura as she rolls her head, changing into her role before he takes a deep breath.
''Action!''
''What you're about to see is something very shocking, okay?'' Austin warns Ally, putting two hands on her shoulders. She rolls her eyes, laughing as she steps closer to Austin's door.
''Just show me already,'' Austin unlocks his door, pushes it open while closing his eyes. He awaits a shocked gasp but it stays silent.
''You're right, your room is shockingly messy,'' Ally comments sarcastically. Walking inside, she inspects the room, trying to figure out what he means. After a few seconds, she looks at him confused. ''What were you trying to show me?''
''They're not here anymore?'' he runs into his room, opening all doors as he tries to find the two criminals. His girlfriend looks at him, waiting for him to explain himself. ''Stacy and Toby, they were in my room.''
''Why would they be in your room?'' Ally starts picking up the music sheets on the floor, not being able to resist her urge to keep rooms tidy. Her book! Austin runs towards his desk, opening every drawer. The last on he opens reveals the missing object. He hold it up proudly as she still looks confused. ''My book? I know it's in your room, I left it here when we wrote a few days ago. What are you trying to tell me, Austin?''
''When I went to my room to pick up our jackets, I saw them, Stacy and Toby, in my room. They were taking photos of our stuff and… Your book,'' Ally takes it from his grip, looking through it. ''They didn't take anything. I think they were stealing ideas you wrote down.''
''Why would they steal ideas for their song we came up with together? That makes no sense,'' she closes the book while shaking her head.
''Don't you understand? They want to steal our ideas. Your ideas. Your songs. They never cared about us for who we are, they're here to take our ideas, record our lyrics and make them into their own songs!'' Austin desperately tries to explain. Ally covers his hand with her own as she pushes his hands down.
''You're crazy, I know Stacy, she would never do that to me,'' she stands up for her new friend. ''Stacy is totally harmless, she loves us!''
''You think you know Stacy. The Stacy I saw, was manipulative and deceitful. Like a weasel! Can't you see she's putting on an act to fool us?'' Austin raises his voice, making wild arm gestures. Ally looks at him worried before putting a hand on his cheek.
''You need to calm down, I think your eyes were playing tricks on you.'' Austin grabs her hand while looking at her seriously.
''Ally, I'm going to stop them and I need to know; Are you with me?" he's not getting the answer he expected as he hears her giggle.
''You're acting silly, I'm not gonna participate in your ridiculous plan. They did nothing wrong, period,'' she crosses her arms, not wanting to continue the argument. He bluntly drops her hand as he narrows his eyes.
''You made me ruin my own career before, I'm not letting you do it again,'' he states. Ally freezes her actions before slowly turning around.
''What did you just say?'' she whispers as she walks up to him.
''I'm serious, Ally. If I don't do anything, this could ruin my music career. Again. I'm not letting you stop me just cause you don't believe me,'' he refuses to look her in the eyes as he zips his backpack closed. ''If we don't support each other in situations like these, what are doing anyway?''
''I can't believe you. Are you telling me you're breaking up with me because I'm not with you as you're trying to bust two of our fans for a crime they didn't commit?" Ally tears up as she backs up, shaking her head.
The hurt in Laura's eyes looks painfully real as she covers her mouth with one hand, like she did last night. In the script it said Austin would grab his backpack and walk out the door, leaving Ally. But at this exact moment, he couldn't care less what he was supposed to do. He had to do what was right and this was the only chance he had.
Breaking character, he walks up to Laura who's leaning against the wall, close to the door. As soon she sees him walk closer, she understands he's not acting anymore. The hurt look in her eyes doesn't disappear, though, telling him she wasn't acting at all.
He stands in front of her and grabs her face to crash his lips on hers roughly. She gasps while putting her hands on his chest, hitting his chest with her fists, which causes him to step closer to her. Her fists gradually start come down on his slower before grabbing his shirt tightly, pulling him closer. She opens her lips, asking for more and more, but are stopped quickly.
''Cut!'' the director yells before turning to the writers next to him. ''What the hell is going on?''
''Okay, everyone, just… Take five or something,'' Laura releases Ross's shirt as Ross steps back to watch Laura's reaction. She opens her eyes to see everyone looking at them and looks Ross in the eyes, shocked. Heath puts one hand in his side and covers his forehead with the other, shaking his head. Calum and Raini look at the two actors in awe before exchanging a look. Panicking, Laura uses the break they get to run out of the room, entering her own across the hall.
''I'll go talk to her,'' Raini offers as she starts walking, but Ross stops her.
''No, I should.''
He knocks once. Twice. Once more before he hears a muffled voice telling him to leave. But he's not gonna give up that easily, leaning against the door frame with two stretched arms he tries to think of a way for her to open. He knocks one more time before he feels a smooth, rectangle object in his pocket. He knows it doesn't belong to his own room, so it has to be… Without hesitation, he swipes it over the black scanner.
Hands in her hair, Laura paces through her room. How could he do that? Why did he do that? Breaking character, ruining the take to kiss her, just like that. It felt so real even though she knew for sure he wasn't serious. Not about her, not about last night and not about last night's kiss. What was he trying to pull here? She touches her tingling lips, still slightly swollen from the sudden, rough kiss.
She takes a seat on her bed, covering her forehead with her two palms. She rises almost immediately when hearing a short knock. Ignoring it, she hopes it'll go away soon. She figures it must be Raini, since she's always the one to comfort her in a rough time and has been pushing her about last night since this morning. Another knock follows and Laura falls back on her bed in frustration, releasing a groan. Raini wouldn't leave, knocking on the door another time.
''Raini, leave me alone! I'm coming in a minute, just let me be!'' Raini ignores her request with another bonk. Laura rises from the bed angrily before she stomps to the door. She's done with Raini's annoying behaviour and she's gonna tell her right now. In a few seconds she's in front of the door, to find it open. In the opening stands Ross, in his hand a white pass, his other hand on her door frame, looking at her from under his full eyelashes with dark eyes.
''Ro-'' she gulps as he takes big steps in her direction. With his large arms, he pulls her body close to his while closing the gap between them with no hesitation. She gasps in the kiss as she brings her hands up to wrap them around his neck, her hands pushing his head down. He lifts her body up, making stand on her toes and turns his head to get better access.
Ross walks forward, pushing her with him, making her stumble backwards as she squeaks in surprise. After a few feet Ross moves his hands to the back of her thighs, lifting her small frame easily, while she pulls herself up with her hands around his neck. He drops her gently on top of the empty desk, making her wrap her legs around his hips.
She feels him carefully trying to deepen the kiss as he shyly opens his lips. Always the one to leave the other to make the decision, she thinks giggly. She answers his request by biting his lower lip, making him hiss as he moves his hands to her hips, his thumbs disappearing under her shirt and rubbing her bare skin.
His tongue plunges in her mouth for the first time and takes full control as she sighs contently, running her hands through his locks, finger tops rubbing his scalp while pushing him closer with her legs. With a final kiss on her lips, Ross releases them finally. Laura keeps her eyes closed while leaning her forehead against his.
''I've been dying to do that ever since I saw you sing in that booth,'' he bites his lip as he admits his desire. ''And even more since yesterday, when you started singing. You have no idea what you do to me.''
''I know,'' she admits while brushing her nose against his and plays with the hair in his neck. Laughing when he gives her a look of disbelief, she shrugs. ''I'm not an idiot, Ross. You should've seen yourself when we were singing that duet. You couldn't keep your eyes off of me.''
''Can't deny that.'' Ross smirks before capturing her lips again. Looking at her in all seriousness, he brushes a strand of hair behind her ear. ''I don't wanna hide anything I have with you.''
''Yeah, you made it pretty obvious when you attacked me in front of everybody,'' she rubs her hands over his chest absentmindedly. ''I'm glad you feel that way.''
He puts his hands on her hips to pull her off the desk. Intertwining their hands, he walks backwards, pulling her with him.
''I think the five minutes are over by now,'' Laura catches up with him before laying one hand over his butt. Ross jumps in surprise as he looks at her with wide eyes. Shoving her index finger and thumb in his back pocket, she finds what she was looking for.
''You still have my room key?'' she waves the white pass in front of his face. He snatches it from her loose grip before putting it back in his pocket quickly.
''I'm gonna return it, I promise,'' Ross tells her as he pats the pass through his jeans. Laura looks at him unsure. ''I am!''
Am not.
Well, that was that
It's not as long as the last two chapters but double the Raura am I right
Well if you don't mind, I'm going back to voting
A quick update, Debby caught up to Laura with 100k INBETWEEN
Laura needs everyone's help, please help us
The EWW fandom is catching up quickly too, we need to step up
A quick shoutout to Kristen for being the 200th reviewer and Pickles-and-Pancakes-R5 for being the 100th follower. Great username btw
I was extremely scared I wouldn't reach the 200 with last chapter since I wanted to update this one when I did, but luckily you're all amazing and I got 20 new reviews
chapter 20
That was beyond perfect! I don't have words to describe how much I loved it, but I'm going to try anyway. I loved it more than Ally loves pickles, more than Austin loves pancakes and even more than they love each other (and that is A LOT).
Update soon,
Amn - I'm so glad you loved it! Damn, that IS a lot. You know your stuff
Lauren24642 chapter 20
GREAT CHAPTER! WHY DID THEY HAVE TO GET INTERRUPTED! HAHA I THINK THIS CHAPTER IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE ONES SO FAR! AND I HOPE AUSTIN AND ALLY WITH AT THE KCAs AND ROSS AND LAURA BECAUSE WE ARE SO FAR AHEAD THE MOMENT BUT I DON'T WANT TO JINX IT HAHA! :) CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER! ! :D - That's so cool, it's one of my favourites too! Well don't jinx it, cause Laura's far behind. We need each and every one of you!
chapter 20
so freaking amazing i really love it, thank you for writing this, and also thanks for telling us about the app, i'm going to use it right now - Yay, I'm so glad you're helping us! Have you gotten the hang of it yet?
Pinkiecuddles chapter 20
I love this chapter. Upload more soon. I love this story.I really want Raura to end up together an I also sorta want Trez to end up together. - Trez hm? I don't have any plans but I'll take it into consideration
missmia10 chapter 20
WHAT IS WRONG WITH THESE PEOPLE LAST CHAPTER WAS AWESOME AND THEY BETTER REVIEW ON THIS ONE OR I WILL GET MORE PISSED THAN YOU! This chapter was just as good DAT CHEEK KISS DOE! You are awesome and i hope the big chapter is next! Love yaaaa! - ahahahaha thanks girl, but it's okay! They probably had better things to do or didn't like it and I can't make them review, if they don't wanna. I'm not pissed I know can you imagine Ross giving Laura one? I know we've seen the other way around already, which was great, but THIS needs to happen. LOVE YOU 222222
MirandaAnnette144 chapter 20
This story is awesome! I can't wait for the next ch. One thing I was reading this sentence "it's okay to hit with your body an opponent" and I think you worded it wrong or missed a word. I just thought I'd let you know. Stuff like that happens to me all the time. Oh and I couldn't help but laugh at the ending because it reminded me of an r5 interview (I think it was Clevertv not sure though) and the interviewer asked them what are their turn offs and turn ons and both Riker and Ross said and I quote "grabbage of the hair" lol so when I read Laura playing with Ross's hair and he closed his eyes I immediately thought of that haha. Is that where that came from or did you just write it that way? Anyways, love your story! I think it's the best Raura story I've read! Btw sorry this review is so long lol - Thank you darling. Oops, that was a stupid typo.. Hope people at least understood what I was saying..? YOU MADE ME LAUGH SO LOUD WITH THIS I CAN'T EVEN. I'm sorry, I'm not laughing at you, your theory is actually very well thought and I tots understand where you're coming from. First thing: I'm gonna ignore that thing about Ross hating for his hair to get grabbed cause I think that's hella sexy and I'm planning on using it more, sorry. Second: Nope, it wasn't cause of that (it could've been, I get ya), he was just forcing himself not to kiss her and closed his eyes so he wouldn't get lost in her eyes. WOW that sounded cheesy. True tho. Omg you serious, that's a huge compliment thaaaanks! Girl I love long reviews, they're my fav, sorry for this long ass reply
LoveShipper chapter 20
Dancing under the moonlight. So romantic. Once I heard there was a hockey game I was hoping for a kiss cam, thanks for making it come true - it's like you can read my miiiiiiind. Or I can read yours. Or we both just have amazing imagination hahahah
Guest chapter 20
Ahw, that chapter was so sweet! I was hoping that they would kiss haha. But yeah, I was wrong (just like always but who cares). Hope the big chap comes soon, but for now I think it's good that you not moving on to fast with te whole raura thing. This was btw a really good chap (just like the others haha)
Loves from the same girl from the Netherlands without an account (ja ik ben weer terug haha en ik ben nog nooit naar een r5 concert geweest want ik kwam er pas later achter dat ze naar nederland kwamen haha) btw sorry for the ones that are confused now haha - HEY YOU AGAIN! Nope, but now they did. Not once, not twice but trice (trice?) that's not a word. Thank you! I'm glad people don't actually get bored cause it took this long. I made the most of it. (heeeey welkom terug! Aawww echt waar? Beter dat je wel dit jaar komt, ik ben er ook! Houd de site in de gaten en ik zal het ook hier schrijven als een datum bekend is!)
Sorry for the freakishy long replies, your reviews just make me so happy and I wanna reply to EVERY ONE OF EM. Sadly I can't
Till next time mates