The First World

by csezka

Baron Hart was just a normal high school student, who tragically died in an accident. Unfortunately, the gods already have plans for him, and rather than sending him to the afterlife, Baron was sent to the elemental nation. How will he survive in a world of shinobi? Naruto x the gamer

6. Author's note

I'm REALLY SORRY...

so many things happened in the last 7 month so i can't write the story and only read FF from my phone. but fortunately IT'S DONE! Now i can continue write. I will try to post the new chapter at sunday.

a bit spoiler, my original is to give naruto all uzumaki kakkei genkai like chakra chain, sensor, longevity, big chakra reserve. but i'm not sure about the rinnegan yet, since the only uzumaki that have rinnegan is nagato however according to original story of naruto nagato's rinnegan is a gift from madara. i think it means the rinnegan is not an uzumaki kakkei genkai. now about baron, i don't if i want to give him a kakkei genkai or not, so i decide to make a vote in my profile.

next about the pairing, first is a harem for naruto with naruxhinax?x?x?x?x?x? since he is the last of uzumaki clan. Baron also have a harem with baronxayamex?x?x?x?x? but in the end of the story baron will be paired with one girl from his harem.

now into the review corner.

1. from guest, thank you for your suggestion. but i plan to make a good kurama, so make it like that.

2. from Fuyutaro son

about the smoke bomb. this is only from my way of think. if i was a weapon seller and suddenly at night a seven years old kid come to me with a thousand ryo to buy a basic ninja set where he would get 10 shuriken, 5 kunai, 5 smoke bomb, 5 explosive notes. i will be really suspicous of him, rather than let him buy the ninja set, i will introgate him like for what reason he buy it, and where is his parens and etc then i will took him to the authority. so i make baron to buy only smoke bomb to make the shopkeeper believe that he only need the smoke bomb for helping naruto. that's is the reason, sorry if you think it's a bit weird.

thank you for the correction i will try to make the story better in the next chapter. and sorry for the very very bad grammar at the kyuubi scene.

Dedicated4reading and yuki

thanks for reading and as i said before i will post the new chapter next sunday.

thank you for every one who read my story and again SORRY...