sorry i was late. last friday i got a massage from my class represntative that monday the teacher will do a test, and the exam material consist of first until sixth chapter. so i must study first and hold the story again and my plan to write the sory at saturday and sunday failed. fortunetly today i was free and i finally can publish ne chapter! yay.
ok then let's talk about polling. right now the highest is rinnegan (45%) and rinnegan (32%) and the rest only 10% and less. now about rinnegan, if i remember correctly to obtain rinnegan someone need to combine ashura and indra chakra, or in madara's case he combine the uchiha and senju DNA so he can awaken the rinnegan. if baron want to wake the rinnegan naturally he will need senju and uchiha DNA, and if he have both of them it means he will have the mokuton and sharingan right? isn't it make him bit Over power. also don't forget that rinnegan is an over power eyes. here is the list of what a rinnegan can do (credit to naruto wikia)
1. able to see chakra, it's flow and tenketsu
2. the wielder can master five nature element with ease
3. can make a chakra reciver
4. grant the six path tehnique
-Deva path(control gravity)
-Animal path (summon animal)
-Preta path (absorb ninjutsu)
-Human path (control human soul)
-Asura path (make a mechanisation weapon like rocket or maybe a gun?)
-Naraka path(control the king of hell)
-Outer path (can revive the dead, can use chakra chain)
that's why if baron have rinnegan he will be OP since he will able to use mokuton(thanks to his senju DNA), sharingan(thanks to his uchiha DNA) and last the rinnegan.
at first i want to make baron have an iconic deadly attack like naruto's rasengan or goku's kamehameha. that's why i put wood, bone and crystal release. so he can make a big dril and shouted "my drill is the drill that will pierce Heavens!" then he shoot the drill into his enemy. just kidding i want to make him have an armor like kamen rider so with bone or wood or crystal release he will make an armor while he fight with swords, but it will depend on the poll, and the poll will end after i post another 2-3 chapter.
Now let's go into review corner
1. from iSuLtAn
thank you for reading my story and for your suggestion i have considered it but the problem is if baron have the rinnegan he will be OP just like what i said before. since i want him strong but not over power or at maximum in the end he will a bit equal to naruto kyuubi mode.
2. from LordXeenTheGreat
thank you for reading my story
3. from TheMysteriousOtaku
thank you for reading my story and for your suggestion. i agree with you that's why i want him to able made an armor from wood or crystal or bone. another option is by having a body like suigetsu.
4. from shugokage
thank you for reading my story
5. from Kamikaze Warrior
thank you for reading my story and i hope i won't dissapoint you. Also HAPPY BIRTH DAY!
6. from davycrockett100
thank you for reading my story, sorry but only one vote per person. and right now rinnegan at the top
Now before the sory start as usual sorry for my bad gramar and my inconsistent. hope you enjoy the story
Hokage office
Inside the room naruto was sitting in a chair in front of hokage's desk, looking exhausted and about to fall asleep, he was kept from sleeping all night due to hokage's question. The hokage himself was sitting behind his desk, his eyes looking intensely on naruto. There was no conversation between them for a few minutes. It took all naruto have to stay awake, even so naruto was growing frustrated as there is nothing else he can do to make the hokage believe him.
"DAMN IT, old man! I told you everything, why can't you believe me I'm really Naruto! Please let me go home and sleep!" naruto yelled having enough of the silence between them and the old man eyes.
The old man sighed "I'm sorry, naruto. I need absolutely sure you weren't taken over by the kyuubi. Even though you believe the story it-"
"SHE… it's not it but she" naruto said with a smirk.
'Oi! I'm not a female!' Kurama yelled from inside naruto's mind.
'HAH! Finally show up huh? Thanks a lot for bailing on me' naruto smirked mentally at kurama grumbling.
"y-you mean kyuubi is a female?" the hokage surprised.
"nah, I'm just kidding. The fox is male."
"I see… now, we have to be wary since he is a demon after all. However, I am interested about how you will become if you allow him to become your sensei." Said the hokage while rubbed his chin.
After a few moments, the hokage sighed and retrieve some papers to start writing. "Ok… I will allow this but you must keep this a secret. As you know most people in the village will not take kindly the thought of you trained by the kyuubi and they will do anything they can to get rid of you from this village."
Naruto looked at the Hokage "d-does it mean I can't tell baron?" he was scared since he didn't want hide anything from his first friend.
"of course you can, but you must be selective. Also you must know that not everyone can comprehend a big secret like that."
"I see…" naruto said, with a hint of sadness in his eyes.
"I know that you have been training taijutsu and kenjutsu with baron. So I suggest you add chakra control in your training menu. Though I wonder why both of you not learning ninjutsu and genjutsu?" the hokage said while rub his shin.
"Baron said since we are a kid it will be better to train our physical condition rather than train to use ninjutsu since we have small chakra reserve. He also thinks that we need a teacher so we won't have an accident" Naruto explained
'I see he is right about the accident since a person who doesn't know anything about a jutsu tend to have an accident when they learn a jutsu. However, he is wrong about naruto have small chakra reserve in fact he have the biggest chakra reserve in konoha, since he is an uzumaki and the jinchuriki of the kyuubi.' the hokage thought, then his expression turned serious.
"about your training, I allowed you to trained by kyuubi but you are not allowed to draw any kyuubi chakra anywhere near or within the village. Unless you have my permission. Understood?"
"Hai!" naruto saluted.
Konoha Hospital
"ugh…" baron grumbled while opening his eyes.
'damn looks like I'm at hospital again. I must learn more strategy so every times big quest come I won't end up in hospital.' Baron thought, suddenly a pain come to his head. 'looks like I haven't completely recover.' He realized that for some reason his right hand couldn't be moved. When he look at it he saw that ayame is sleeping in while holding his hand.
"hey ayame… wake up" baron said
"ng…" ayame started to awake and looked at baron's face for a moment. "BARON!" ayame shouted "you're awake" she said while hugged baron.
"ouch" baron was feeling pain from his head again.
"s-sorry." Ayame released her hug when she look baron was in pain
"it's ok. Now can you tell me how long I have been at hospital?"
Ayame pointed her forefinger to her chin "hmm… I don't know maybe some hours." Ayame replied "I heard from naruto this morning that since last night you were hospitalized, so after my shift over I come over."
' I see it hasn't been a day since the incident. I hope this incident can make naruto and hinata relationship become better, since I don't want to hinata become stutter in the future. also about neji I hope that he won't become a jerk.'
"ron"
'wait a minute I don't know what happened with the kumo ninja, did he killed by hisashi again or not? Damn I can't get my answer right now. That aside at least I won the bet, it means I will have kage bunshin and a personal training ground. Wait a minutes since I win the bet isn't the hokage will suspicious of my ability? Since he is the god of shinobi I'm sure he will try to find out about my ability, more over I'm sure naruto also suspicious of me since he saw me opening and closing the quest window a few times. Luckily he can't see the window, but it means he saw doing something and suddenly found the kidnapper. Damn looks like I'm scre-'
"baron!" ayame shouted pulling baron back from his deep thought.
"eh .. what?" baron was confused when he look at ayame who glare at him intensely
"I've been calling you few times but you didn't hear me."
"Sorry about that looks like I was lost in thought" baron said while rubbing his head.
"It's ok." Ayame said with smile "so… is your body okay?" ayame asked worried about baron.
"I think it's fine, only small head ache when I move my head."
Ayame relieved and smiled at baron "good then" then she looked at clock and realized that right now is at 5 pm. "I'm sorry my shift is already start so I need to go."
" it's ok. Thank you for coming ayame." Baron said with smile.
"alright then, see you late." Ayame said while walking to the door. Before she reaches the door suddenly, it opened
"Ah hokage-sama, naruto. Good afternoon." Ayame said while bowing
"Good afternoon ayame. Why so hurry?" the hokage asked
"Yeah ayame where are you going?" naruto asked
"I'm sorry my shift already started and I need to go back."
"Ok then, see you later." Naruto said.
"See you later hokage sama, naruto." Ayame said while bowing again and started to run.
"Now then." The hokage and naruto walk closer to baron's bed."Baron Don't pretend to sleep." The hokage said looking at baron
"Damn" baron said
"Baron! You are awake." Naruto said happily "How is your body? Is there any place that hurt?" naruto asked worry
"I'm fine naruto." Baron tried to convince naruto. Then he saw a serious look at the hokage face and sighed. "Looks like I need to give you some explanation right?"
The Hokage only smiled hearing baron. "Good if you know." Naruto look at hokage and baron confused. He didn't understand what is happening.
"Um… is baron in trouble?" naruto asked worry.
"Of course not, hokage-sama only upset since he lost our bet."
"naruto, I think you should be careful around this boy." Kyuubi said from naruto's head
'What do you mean?'
"What do you feel when he answer old man question?"
'Hmm I think it feels like he tried to hide something. But why baron try to hide something from me?'
"I don't know yet. But for now you should listened their conversation and tried find out which one he lied and which one he not,"
'… I understand' naruto replied. He can't believed that his first and also his best friend hiding something more over lied to him.
"Now now baron, don't make me looks like the bad guy here." The Hokage said with smile.
"But it's true isn't it. Since I win the bet it mean you won't have the secret to beat the pa-"before he finished he saw the intense glare from the hokage that said he didn't come to play. Baron sighed again. "Okay then just ask everything and I will try to answer it."
"Does it means there is some question that you won't answer?"
"It's not like I won't answer, but It's more like there some that even I don't know the answer."
"Do you feel it?" kyuubi asked. 'Yeah but it's weird. It feels like he said the truth but at the same time he didn't' "you were right. This is what you feel when someone tried to cover his lied with some truth." Naruto only mentally nodded.
"Alright then my first question is how you can locate hinata when she was kidnapped?" the hokage asked he can't get any assumptions from naruto's testimony. How can he get the answer when naruto only told him that baron only moving his hands weirdly then suddenly BAM they found the culprit. More over after naruto pointed at several locations where they stopped move when searching hinata, hokage realized that according to Ibiki the leader of torture and interrogation division report, all of the location was a place where the kidnapper pass by. Then when he asked naruto to show how is baron movement he know that it is not a hand seal. So the question is what that movement is and how baron can found hinata? More importantly is it a coincidence that baron knows when hinata was kidnapped.
"Will you believe if I said that I only trust my feeling?" baron answered awkwardly while looking at serious face of the hokage. "Fine then, before I answer your question, can you tell me how an artist found an inspiration for their art?"
"So you mean that your ability is like an inspiration that come to an artist?"the hokage said, of course he didn't believe it. But he also know that baron is not hundred present lied, basically baron was saying the truth since by reread the quest he will got an inspiration about hinata location.
"That's right that's why I can't answer the question."
"I understand. Then I want you to tell me every single detail of your abilities about bad feeling you told me last time."
'So it comes to this question' baron thought, "Just like I told you before. It's cannot be called an ability since it's not like it come occasionally, it more like suddenly it come." Baron said, both of the hokage and baron was not realized the shocked face that naruto made when he know that baron lied. "And when it comes I will feel bad and weird or something likes that, it comes when I see something or I heard about something. Then mostly something that will happened will always have some connection with the thing I saw or heard." again none of them realized a shock expression that naruto made when he know baron was lie.
"What do you mean mostly?" hokage asked
"For examples in this incident, I have a bad feeling when I heard kumo ninja will come to konoha, and then I feel a bad feeling when I saw hinata and hisashi or hizashi. From there I assumed that something will happen and it will involve kumo ninja that will come to konoha, hinata and hisashi or hizashi. That is for specific case but if we look it more general will become something will happened to the clan heirs and clan head or their family and it will involve kumo. But after incident we know that kumo ninja kidnapped hinata right?" hokage only nodded to answer baron's question "at the same times nothing bad happened with hisashi or hizashi right? Or did something happened while I was asleep?"
"You are right, there is nothing bad happened with both of them" the hokage said, but he know that if baron and naruto didn't stop the kidnapper one of them will accidently kill the kidnapper and since the one who they killed is the delegation of kumogakure, they will ask the head of their delegation killer. It means one of them will die.
Baron relieved after know that he can prevent the dead of hizashi. He just hoped that neji won't be a jerk like what he know. "Alright then what is the next question hokage sama?"
While glaring at baron the hokage said "…. For now that is all, I hope you get better soon." Hokage knows that what baron said was only half of the truth but he think that the reason why baron can't tell him was because baron also didn't know the answer. Therefore, he decides to drop the topic and continue another time. "Alright then I will leave you both since I have so many enemies that I must defeat in my office." Hokage said with smile.
"Ok good see ya jiji" naruto said with smile
"See you later hokage sama." baron said.
After hokage left the room, naruto look at baron intensely
"… What happened naruto? Why you look at me like that?"
"I was wondering why you lied to hokage jiji?" baron was shocked "and how can you lied to me?" naruto said with anger.
"I-I don't know what you mean?" baron said awkwardly
"C'mon baron no more lies! I know when a person is lying."
Baron was shocked 'how can he know I was lying? Can he detect if someone is lying or not? Wait if that so does it means he had meet kyuubi?' baron thought
"Okay I will answer your question if you answer my question first."
"Fine I will answer it." Naruto answered
"How can you detect someone is lying or not?"
Naruto's body stiffened he didn't expect that baron will ask this question also he didn't know how to answer it without telling him about kyuubi.
"Just tell him that you have met me and I give you the ability."
'But what if when he know he won't be my friend again?' naruto was scared, all this time he was alone. When he meet baron his life start to change, he meets many friend and he don't have to worry about food since baron always cook for him.
"Huh if he can't even accept you for what you are. It means he become your friend because he want something from you."
'No! it can't be true'
"Then just tell him, and from his answer and emotion we can know which one is he"
Naruto nodded mentally and said "last night I've met the kyuubi inside my head and he gave me ability to feel emotion, from there I can know when someone is lying or not."
Baron was shocked how can naruto meet the kyuubi right now, since as far as he know the first time he know about kyuubi was when he steal the forbidden scroll and it was still six year in the future. "… I see"
"Weird"
'What do you mean?'
"I mean his reaction is weird, how can someone stay relaxed when he know that you meet me? Let's stop wondering first and let him asked his question then we can ask him everything."
'I understand.'
"So what's your next question?" naruto asked
"Hmm since you can detect emotion can you detect if kyuubi was lying or not?" baron asked
"What the hell!" kyuubi shouted inside naruto's head. 'What happened kurama?'
"How can a kid like him think that far?" 'I'm sorry, but I'm not understand also even his body is a kid his mind is seventeen years old' "I know about that, now I want you to think and answer my question. First what do you know about us bijuu?" 'Hmm you are a giant beast created from chakra?'
"That's right now next question if last night we didn't meet, do you know that a bijuu like me can talk to you?" 'Of course not, even hokage didn't know that you can talk' "that's what I mean everyone know that a bijuu is a mass of chakra that gathered and become a giant beast, what they don't know is that even we made of chakra we can talk and also.. We have emotion. Now how do you think he asked a question about could you sense I was lying or not?"
'Hmmm does it means he know that you have emotion?' "Exactly it if last night we didn't even you or the hokage will know that I have emotion like you. so the question is how come a kid like him know about us more than a hokage? For now let's just focus on answering his question and we can ask everything later, and the answer is yes you can know when I was lying or not" 'ok then'
Baron who look at naruto know that right now naruto is having conversation with kyuubi, since it's been almost two minutes after he asked the question. It also means that naruto is trusting kyuubi. Now the question that comes to baron head is the kyuubi a trustworthy person or just a liar who wants to used naruto so he can escape.
"Mm I think I can know if he was lying or not" naruto said
"I see, did you say it because kyuubi said so?"
Naruto's body stiffened and nodded his head to answer baron question.
"… now my next question is not for you but for kyuubi, but I hope you can detect if kyuubi was lying or not." Naruto only nodded "good, kyuubi did you want to used naruto for something bad?"
"Of course not! I have made a deal with naruto and we bijuu always fulfill our promises" kyuubi roared inside naruto head
"he said no." naruto said to baron
"Did you know he was not lying?" naruto nodded "then my last question, is kyuubi know about your parent?"
naruto was shocked. 'Does it means he know about my parent? If he know about my parents does it means kyuubi and hokage jiji know about it too? Is this the reason the reason he was lying?' naruto thought. 'Damn, how can a kid like him can think like this. This question is a question that if I answer the truth it will make he won, since it will make naruto hate hokage since he was lying to him about naruto's parent. And if I lied to him it will make him not believed in me again since he will know that I was lying.' Kyuubi thought
Then he asked the kyuubi 'so? What's your answer kyuubi?'
"I'm sorry naruto. I know about your parent but I cannot tell you about it yet."
'What do you mean you cannot tell me about my parent?' naruto shouted inside his head
"For your own protection, your parent was a famous and strong ninja, so if someone knows that they have a kid they will do anything to kill you or make you a breeding stock. When that happened they will treat as a slave where you only live an isolated room, and you can't do anything besides doing whatever they want."
'But what is the difference with my live before I meet baron? Every look at with disgust and no one care for me. I was treated like a trash every store throws me out or over priced everything I bought. And all of it was because of you! If you hadn't sealed inside my body I won't be treated like a trash'
"YOU THINK I WANT TO BE SEALED? I was a victim just like you, used as a weapon for war without asked if I want it or not. YOU HUMANS used us as a tool, thinking that you own us." Kyuubi roared inside naruto head
'I-I'm sorry. It's just I was angry because people that I trust the most turned have been lying to me.' After hearing kyuubi naruto realized that he was treating kyuubi like what other people treat him that's why he decided to apologized
"HUH! Now just answer the question" 'ok'
"kyuubi said he know about it."
'Looks like kyuubi decide to tell the truth, it means I can't test if naruto really can detect kyubi's lie or not. Let just hope naruto really can detect it' baron thought.
"Is that so? Then ask me question, since it's my turn to answer your question"
"Why did you lie to hokage jiji and… to me?"
"It's for my protection."
"What do you mean?"
"What would happen if people know I have a great power maybe like ability to stop time?"
"I think it will make you strong and famous" naruto said
"Then?"
"What do you mean by then?"
"What will happened if I become strong and famous?"
"mmmmm" naruto try to think
"I see" kyuubi said 'did you know what will happen kyuubi?'
"if that happened some people will become jealous of him and tried to get his power event if it means they must hurt people around him, and at worst he will become a guinea pig so they can get his power."
'I see…'
"So do you know what will happened?" baron asked
Naruto nodded "yes people around you will be targeted and at worst you will be a guinea pig for your power."
"That's right that's why I don't want to use my ability. I don't want people to know that I have it. Now what is your next question?"
"Ask him what is his ability, and how can he know a lot about bijuu"
"What is your ability?" naruto asked
"I'm sorry naruto I can't answer that question. Since I promise someone to not tell anyone about my ability and about her."
"I understand… now how can you know a lot about bijuu?"
"I'm sorry again but I can't answer that question too. Since If I answered the question it will reveal something about her."
"Is that person important to you?"naruto asked while ignoring kyuubi who roar inside his head because angry all of his question is not answered
"Yes, she was the reason I still alive."
"Now my last question is become a friend of me also a lie?" naruto asked while clench his fist
"Of course not, even I need a friend and I think you are the person who needs a friend the most." Baron said with smile
Naruto know that baron is not lying when he answer the entire question, and he was glad that baron was sincerely become his friend. He thinks that it was enough
"I see then, I hope you get better soon." Naruto said and start walk to the door.
"Wait naruto!" baron called naruto who after opening the door. "I know you must be hate me for lying but, no matter what happened I will always help you to reach your dream."
Both naruto an kyuubi was shocked. Even after naruto did not trust him, he still believed in naruto. Also both of them know that when baron said that he was feeling happy and proud.
"Thank you" naruto said and closed the door
Baron Hart Stat's
Lv :4
STR : 41(-10)
AGI: 44(-5)[-5]
VIT: 40
INT: 24
WIS:30
CHA:36
LUCK: 26
POINT: 10
Money: 28160
Skill List
1. Gamer's Mind (passive) LV max
2. Gamer's Body (passive) LV max
3. Chakra reserve (passive) LV 4
4. Chakra Control (passive) LV 3
5. Observe (active) LV 7
6. Physical resistance (passive) LV 4
7. Ninjutsu (passive) LV 1
8. Taijutsu (passive LV 3
9. Kenjutsu (passive) LV 3
10. Fuinjutsu (passive) LV 4
11. Cooking (passive) LV 4
12. Stealth (passive) LV 4
Thank you fo reading my story hope you like it