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sarai yes it will be my personal, so it would be the first time I show my face here in fanfiction ;)
Lexx same here, I don't really understand why but it just seems so exciting XD
Dracoya thanks for the offer, I would like you to become my editor! I'll think it through, but if I do accept I should sent you the chapter, next week ( possibly) due to the fact that school just got out for me.
MAYA WUZ HERE thank you so much, it really means a lot to me! And here is the new chapter!
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Chapter 2:
If a child had walked into the Guys of White Headquarters, he/she would be traumatized by the entire experience. The place reeked of cleaning supplies and bleach, with a hint of death. Everything; from the walls and floors, to books and pens; were drenched in a pure white color. The air felt extremely thin, as if you were on top of Mount Everest. The reason for this could be the fact the there was no windows, so air could only escape through the cracks of the foundation and the double doors that were kept closed shut.
I do my best to avoid the GIW, knowing that they truly have a dark side, and seem to fool society with their "safe" experiments, and "respect" for both humane and ghost civilization. Of course, here I was forced to come. Vladimir Plausimas/ Mayor Vlad Masters sent me here on a mission to find Danny Phantom, a ghost that hasn't been seen in a year. After walking into that conference room, I had believed that I would have been delighted to see my enemy weak and fragile but instead I felt full of remorse. The only question that ran through my head was, "What did they do to him."
Bruises and cuts literally covered him head to toe. Phantom was so skinny, and pale. I never notice that ghost did gain/lose weight, but what surprised me that most was that he looked that he trouble breathing. His entire body move up as if he was inhaling air, then slowly exhaling as his body moved down. Then he stops, struggling to get a few bits of air into his lungs, and repeat.
Inhale, exhale, struggle and repeat.
Inhale, exhale, struggle and repeat.
Inhale, exhale, struggle and repeat.
"Valarie Gray." He said. It surprised me of how weak he sound, yet how lively he presumes to have spoken.
"Danny Phantom." I replied, realizing that it was the first time I called him by "Danny."
"You are probably enjoying this. Seeing me, so lifeless and in so much pain. Probably thinking this is what I deserve." He closed his eyes, "Probably."
Before I got a chance to say how I wasn't enjoying this or how I wanted him to heal and become strong again, he interrupt me, "So what exactly do you want?"
"Excuse me?" I replied confused.
"What's the reason you came here?" he answered.
"I came here looking for you."
He began fake laughing. "Red, no one comes looking for me."
"Well, I did. And I am willing, "I said rising my voice, "to offer quite a large amount for the ghost." I passed a paper to one of the GIW agents. "Vlad Master's appreciates."
"Not accepted." One of the agents said, passing back the paper without even looking at the amount.
"Okay," I said "How about half of this, and we would forget the fact that GIW headquarters, physical and mentally abuse a 14-"
"I'm 15 now."
"-um a now 15 year old ghost teenager, keeping him captive and lying to us the people, of your so called respect for quote "both humane and ghost civilizations.""
The GIW agents look at each other with worried expressions.
"I wonder how long it would take for each one of you to get arrested, charged for life, and have your entire company fall to the ground, especially with the mayor fighting against you." I added.
After dead silent and staring, one of them finally spoke: "When do you want the boy?"
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