Hey you guys! Thank ya to all who suggested names. I seriously was going to add all of them, but soon had a 25 member pack! WAAAYYY to big. The biggest pack can be up to 15, 16, and I ended up with 21 members!!! So, three of them are eventually will have to leave the pack. ;(
At the end of this chapter there are the Pack Status, plus description, and wolf terms. Some of your names that you suggested are combined, because I ended up making them have a first name last name type name-thing, because there was so many, and all were soooo good! I confuse myself. Don't worry! ;)
I might've changed some of the siblings/ages a little bit. I really do hope you don't mind!
Replies:
ReadingFan14: Yes. I remember your strange obsession with death. Die Daisy, DIE!
Spiritwind: I think I used practically all of your names, although I changed Luka to Lika because it was the name of my grandfather's German Shepherd, and you reminded me of her!
Blue Pelt: I loved ALL of your names!! Why did they have to be so good! Now I feel heart broken when I can use them all. But, Thank you!!!
Chakrastrings: I know you do.
Starlight of Thunderclan: I know! But, this might be better than he thought.
Crowfeather's Loyalty: It actually has been quite fun:P
Blaze ocean dragon: This is a really good character! Thank you for the descriptive paragraph! I think he will be a important character.
Crazyhorsegirl3: Blizzard is like assistant beta. She's the mate of the actual deputy. I also liked River. Plus, I'm gonna use those awesome Inuit names for some special stuff! ;)
Softkit of Polarclan: I used the name Luna/Star. So she is called both, although she is basically your character. I like Fang. He sounds evil.
Cinderfoot: I LOVE the name Renegade. I think I am going to name the rat I am going to get tomorrow Renegade. I hope I'm not freaking you out…I really hope Sparks can live up to your expectations. He will be Silverpaw's good first friend…
Spottedstar: Remember your other review? Was that you? The fast talking leader of Windclan? Well, if it was, you suggested he like a German Shepherd…well, read on!
Oceanwind: I will!
Disclaimer: I guess I will have to write this, because so many people actually read it. I do not own warriors…
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The next morning Silverpaw awoke to a growl from his stomach, and he let out a whimper. That rabbit he had ate before the battle was long gone, and he felt a wave of dizziness force him to his paws.
He had always been hungry in the clan; in fact, he never had been completely full. Ever since he had started eating meat, he always wanted to eat more than many thought necessary or possible .The one rabbit he might've eaten only was a snack, and he felt like he could eat almost 2 more, and still be hungry. Now, without eating for almost three days, he felt like he was going to die.
The ground seemed to move from underneath his feet, and his injuries were hurting him mercilessly. A long scratch had swollen one of his eyes shut, and now more than never he wanted to curl up into his mother's side, if he had mother. More than ever, he wanted to burry his head in Sorreltail's fur.
He was dozing in the shade when the scent of an animal he had never smelt before reached his nose. Standing, he swiveled his ear around to try to find the direction it had come from, and ran. Saliva started forming, and his eyes seemed to turn red with anticipation. Turning a bend, he stopped at the sight before him.
An animal stood in front of him, circled by animals he had only heard of in his dreams.
The circled animal was limping, looking a escape route, occasionally giving off wails of helplessness and defeat. Circling the brown creature was dog-like animals, snarling and snapping at the wounded beast. Silverpaw felt a tingling rise withing him, and instinct to join in almost overwhelmed him, but somehow he managed to stay put.
The wolves were humongous, and all of them were working together without effort, almost as if they were ment to. The sight was something the dog had never witnessed in his short life with the clan cats, something even better than fighting.
As the creature finally let out a brawl that even Silverpaw could understand was a sound of defeat, the wolves then launched themselves in the air, their snarls racking Silverpaw's entire form.
He saw an almost completely black wolf leap for the throat, one of the largest of the pack, and helped pull the creature down. A white wolf then jumped on its back, using her weight to help. A muscular wolf snapped and tore at the pelt with unusually long fangs, and another large wolf snapped at the legs. A smaller, slender wolf stayed of to the side, her hackles raised, her teeth showing, kept darting in and out, her white splotches becoming stained red.
The brown animal let out one last racking breath, and its eyes glazed over and he stopped breathing. The largest of them all stepped forward, the air around him giving off a commanding aura. All wolves steeped back respectfully, and he was the one who took the first bite. As his teeth met the flesh of their prey, the wolves around him lot lose a howl, and Silverpaw felt like he wanted to join in.
Some wolves joined the alpha, but more than half the pack watched them eat. When one tried to step forward to claim some meat, the wolf was kept at bay by snarls.
Comet told me about that. The omega doesn't eat until after the wolf above him is finished.
What seemed like a young wolf crept forward on his haunches, and gradually managed to get up to the carcass. The wolf that was in the space above the younger one moved away, and eagerly the younger wolf started to tear away remaining flesh.
Silverpaw felt the need to look away, as if he was unworthy to see this image.
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Renegade glanced up as a new smell reached his nose, a scent like the wolf's, but mixed with cat. Curious, he backed away, and let the young gangly wolf Sparks take his place. Umbra, his brother, looked up, his cold eyes glancing over the beta with indifference, before going back to his share. Rolling his eyes, Renegade darted towards his mate, Blizzard, a completely white wolf, and whispered what he smelled into her ear. Having the best nose, Blizzard confirmed his suspicion, but filled with the blood lust, she snarled at him to leave.
Renegade looked up at the hill, but wind changed direction, and the wolf cursed. With the lust still upon him, he was in no mood to chase after this foul smelling creature.
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Silverpaw returned at twilight, seeing if the carcass held any meat left. He had caught a rabbit earlier, but that was about all he could find, and he wanted to stop the ache in his stomach once and for all.
As he rounded the corner once more, his heart skipped a beat when he saw the creature still had some nutrition, and ran clumsily down the small hill. He approached the remains that were edible, and was about to take a bite when a snarl shook him, and he was knocked to the ground.
The wolf Silverpaw now recognized as the young one that had crept up behind the larger wolf was standing over the dog, his hackles raised, his teeth at Silverpaw's throat. Silverpaw froze, but as his senses came back to him, he rolled onto his back and thrust his hind legs across the wolf's stomach, forgetting about his blunt claws and thick fur. Pushing the heavy wolf off him, he regained his composure and snarled.
Two more wolves emerged, and together they circled the dog.
"Watch out, Sparks. This dog actually might have a minute's chance," the reddish wolf growled, and the first wolf Silverpaw recognized was Sparks nodded.
The third, a she-wolf, acknowledged the comment as well, glaring at Silverpaw all the while.
"Why do you smell like a cat?" The reddish wolf growled.
"Why do you smell like a wolf?" Silverpaw retaliated.
The she-wolf let lose a howl that held laughter in it, and the red wolf replied, "Maybe because I am one. But you are not a cat; that much is certain, thank Shila."
Silverpaw perked his ears, glad he could understand wolf, and thanked Starclan that Comet had taught him in his dreams.
"What is your name, lesser?" asked the she-wolf.
Confused by the name lesser, he answered, "Silverpaw."
"Why?" asked Sparks. "All of you is silver. Not just your paws."
Silverpaw panted laughter, wagging his tail, but not loosening his battle ready stance.
"It's not really my name," Silverpaw said, trying to explain clan customs to these wild wolves.
"Then you must be given a new one!" Sparks proclaimed. "Deathmoon would know. Do we take him?"
"Renegade told me to find out if he was a threat, and we did. He obviously wasn't a lesser kindred, but is still a lesser," the red-wolf snarled.
"Lesser as in a dog?" Silverpaw growled the good feeling about these animals gone.
"Yes, as in dog," the she-wolf snapped, and Silverpaw was oddly reminded of Squirrelflight.
"I can fight, you know," Silverpaw growled.
"The sad thing is, I can believe it," the she-wolf growled. Silverpaw snarled in response.
"Hey, Shadow. Lighten up! You aren't completely a Kayuh." Sparks pointed out.
"I'm as much as a Kayuh as any of you!" Shadow snarled.
"Save for the fact that you are part lesser," Sparks retaliated.
"Shut up, Sparks," Shadow hissed.
Silverpaw widened his eyes in surprise, only now noticing the obvious differences between Shadow and Sparks. While Sparks had a stronger build, Shadow was smaller, her ears different shapes, her eyes dark brown. Shadow wasn't fully wolf.
"Rust, let's just drive him out now. He's just some dumb dog, a lesser. He wouldn't last a week in the pack," Shadow growled, clearly not wanting to bring back up the subject of her heritage.
The red wolf, Rust, nodded in agreement, but Sparks stepped forward.
"At least let Deathmoon meet him. He doesn't even have a proper name, for Shila's sake!" Sparks cried, not understanding clan ways.
Silverpaw opened his mouth to try to explain what he had meant about his name, but was cut off by Shadow.
"He wouldn't be able to beat Snip. Let's drive him out!" Rust growled coldly. The cold eyes of the grey and red wolf seemed to not actually see Silverpaw, instead looking through him like he was mist.
"Even I could beat Snip! And that's saying something," Sparks growled.
"You don't even enjoy fighting, are a coward, and never try to prove yourself," Rust counted off coldly.
"Don't I have a say in this?" Silverpaw asked. Rust and Shadow responded with a curt no, while Sparks nodded.
"Deathmoon is who decides. He's the leader," Sparks snarled. "Renegade may be betta, but not even he can order us about."
Rust scowled. "Deathmoon is becoming very old, and Umbra should be the next leader."
"Umbra thinks Renegade is a traitor," Shadow said without any particular interest. Yawning, she added, "Can we fight later? I'm actually quite hungry, and it is really annoying listening to you two bickering. I've changed my mind. Let's take him to Deathmoon."
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It might be a good idea to read this, even if it might seem boring.
Pack Status:
Alpha: Deathmoon, formerly known as Death Strike. A grey wolf with darker shades of grey on the back, the top of the back being the darkest. Light yellow, almost white, eyes, because of fading eyesight. 9 seasons old.
Beta: Renegade, full name Renegade Heart, Dirty-white wolf, almost light brown, with black and dark grey shades on the back and face, with brownish-reddish ears. Handsome, strong wolf. Successor to Deathmoon, brother to Umbra, 4 seasons old. Nephew of Deathmoon
Beta's Mate: Blizzard, full name Blizzard Winds, a white wolf with yellow eyes, darker shades of bushy white fur is mixed with light, yellow-ish fur. Assistant to Renegade. 3 and a half seasons old.
Remedy Wolf: Rocky- Full name Rocky Sage, but called either. Luna/Star's sister, and a long-haired wolf. She has a light tan stripe
along her muzzle, and honey-gold eyes. Ash grey and dark brown fur around the ears that spills on to her back, with dirty tan legs and underbelly.
Members:
Umbra- full name Umbra Wary, Black wolf with piercing, cold yellow eyes and white legs and tail. Although handsome, has not taken a mate, and has no intention of leaving the pack. Cold demeanor and considers many wolves to be traitors. Strong in the pecking order. Brother to Renegade, 4 seasons old.
Lika- Full name Lichen Spray. Umbra and Renegade's sister. Dark brown muzzle and ears, and a cinnamon red and light brown mix of fur along the body, but a patch of dark brown on the back. Took a loner as a mate, although it is against the pack code. Friendly, although a bit solitary, and angry if roused. 4 season's old.
Fang- Full name Shredding Fang. Grey and brown wolf that is merciless in battle, and has unusually long fangs. River's brother, and exactly the opposite, and would kill an outsider without thought. Came to the pack one season ago.
Aemoi- Full name Aemoi Rouse. Small, shy light red wolf, and was teased when was young. Is quiet, but an excellent hunter. 2 and a half seasons old, sister to Luna.
Tracker: Full name is Black Tracker. An energetic wolf that can occasionally be serious, and is an excellent tracker. Was a loner, when really young, but now is a full member of the pack. Doesn't share his past with anyone, but was found with many injuries.
Eerie: Full name is Eerie Aura. Is a joking and mischievous wolf, brother of Kairu and Gem. Has a midnight, almost blue tint to his fur, with bright eyes and a devious mind. Always is playing around and lightens up the pack. Was loner before joining the pack, and had only his two pups Kichi and Virgo.
Blaze: Formerly known as Bane, then named Blazing Darja, called Blaze or Darja. Unusual pack member, not a wolf. Used to be part of Darkdeath's pack, and is a German shepherd. Father of Shadow and is over protective of his daughter, but kind of a loner. Has amber-brown eyes. Mated with Deathmoon's daughter, Light, who died when giving birth, as did his other two pups.
River: Full name Rushing River. Dark Gray/black she-wolf with a white streak on one side. A shy wolf in the middle of the pecking order, and can be fierce in battle. Loyal, and if any of her pack mates are in danger, would do anything to save them. Came to the pack one season ago. Sister of Fang.
Omega: Snip-Full name Snipped Ear. Skinny, lanky wolf with a cut ear. Mostly dark grey with lighter grey belly fur. Was once a loner, and then joined Deathmoon's pack. Jumpy, and is easily annoyed, especially by pups. Scared of many different things, mainly shiny objects. Lowest in the pecking order.
This season's litter that will soon be considered members of the pack.
Shadow: Full name is Shadow Flight. Is the granddaughter of Deathmoon, daughter of Stran. Is very touchy about her half dog heritage, and is very hostile to all outsiders. Loves to imagine, and is part German shepherd. Although part dog, she is in no way tame, and the only survivor of her litter. Many of the pack members view her as incapable of living in the pack. She is gark brown, smaller in build, and has dark brown eyes. If she had not been larger than a normal dog, she might've been mistaken for a German Shepherd.
Sparks: Full name is Lightning Sparks. Is a yellow-ish wolf with a brown front paw, and a light brown mask around his face and ears and a tan-ish back. Brother of Rust, son of a loner and Lika. Was not a permissible mating, and is looked upon with scorn from some of the wolves, mainly Umbra. Outgoing and joking personality.
Rust: Full name is Fleeting Rust. Reddish colored wolf, slightly larger than Sparks. He is cinnamon red and dark brown, darker than his mother, Lika, and without her grace. He is muscular and cold, and seems to follow Umbra. He is always trying to prove his worth, because many wolves look down on him with scorn as well, excluding Umbra. His is easily angered, and always trying to be the tough one who loves fighting.
Virgo: Full name is Inertia Virgo. Wants to become a Remedy Wolf. Solid grey with one blue eye, one green. Has a bold yet caring personality. Sister to Kichi. Daughter of Eerie. She and her brother were brought to the pack when they were very young.
Kichi: Full name is Kichi Phoenix. Known as either Phoenix or Kichi. Playful and cute, takes after his father. Thoughtful but meddlesome, Kichi is a grey and black furred wolf with white paws. Son of Eerie.
Members who will soon leave and create a new pack…(last season's litter who want to leave the pack soon.)
Luna: Full name Luna's Star, but called both Star and Luna. Mother's name was Luna, and is a completely black wolf except for a white muzzle and blotches of white here and there. She is ferocious, but only in battle. She does have a soft side towards pups. She is slender, and a lot of male wolves are after her.
Kairu: Full name Karma Chastise, but called Kairu. Eerie's sister, and is outgoing and cheerful, but wants to start her own pack with a mate.
Gem: Full name Glossy Gem. A wolf that always seems to have a glow about her, and is a tan-ish red color. Wants to help Kairu with her pack, and although more cautious, is always making wolves smile.
Terms:
Kayuh: The wolf word for "wolf." Wolves believe they are made from the mountains. More will be explained by Sparks.
Shila: The Alpha Wolf that lives on the moon. More will be explained by Sparks.
Alpha: Like the leader.
Beta: Like the deputy.
Remedy Wolf: Like the medicine cat.
More words may be added.
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YEY!! I finished this chapter!! Tell me if you want me to change some of your characters, although I don't know if I will. It might change the plot. But, I think I have enough names! ;)
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