Goodness gracious! Calm down people, i am just adding things in. Seriously, if you don't like it don't read! AMERICA IS NOT WITH ZEKE PEOPLE! SHE IS WITH MAXON GET THAT INTO YOUR MINDS! :) The guest who made the distasteful review, i respect your opinion, but like i said BEFORE no heavy language in the reviews please, AND READ MY NOTES! You might understand why i did the things i did! America is going to go back to Maxon, OF COURSE, but there has to be some heartbreak and struggle. If you want a happy-go-lucky story, please write one yourself, and I will gladly read it! :) Thank you for the constructive criticism! I am not good at Evil, heehee, so i just threw that in there! Thank you and next time i will try to do better! Ok let me just explain some MORE things!
1. Clarkson is evil right? I mean, he whips his own son, so yeah, i think he is. Thus I am gonna make him do evil things. LIKE attempt to ruin his son's happiness!
2. The reason America is hiding away from Clarkson & Maxon is because is Clarkson finds her BEFORE Maxon does, he WILL KILL HER or seriously injure her! Then Maxon will never know the truth. I am saving her return for one of the best parts of the story! So please don't get your panties in a wad over it! :)
3. Guy's ZEKE IS JUST AN ASPEN REPLACEMENT! NOTHING MORE! :)
There now I have said my peace. :)