Forbidden

by Nightsongx

Moonpaw, a ThunderClan apprentice, has fallen deeply in love with a RiverClan apprentice named Mintpaw. They secretly meet every night, but that eventually leads to trouble. Find out about the struggles Moonpaw goes through and the heart-breaking decisions she must make. Will she chose love over clan loyalty? Takes place in Midnight. Rated T for romance and minor violence.

6. Update on Forbidden and it's future

Hey, all. I know it's been ages since I've updated this story, and you're all probably dying to know what happens next. But the truth is, this story is absolutely awful. A very stereotypical plot, undeveloped and 2-dimensional characters, confusing dialogue and chapter construction, etc. My writing skills were awful at the time I wrote this, and I knew little about creating interesting characters. I still cringe looking back on this.

But, I've been overwhelmed by the amount of support this story has gotten, and I feel like I owe everyone more than just leaving the story where it is. Therefore, I've decided to rewrite Forbidden. The characters, plot, and just everything will be so much better, especially since I have much more writing skills now. I'm very excited to be doing this, and I can't wait to release this new and improved version.

Thank you for your patience everyone, and stay tuned for Forbidden: Revised!