Sorry guys if this came out late, I accidentally ate part of a rotten smoky and it came back and bit me in the ass, so because of that I got hardly any sleep, barfed quite a few times, and still feel sick to my stomach, so to make up for it being late I may or may not write a longer chapter, it all depends.
Also I am still looking for OC's
Okay so, reviews:
Xena13a (Reviewed both Chapters!)
Ah, such infamous references. Also, I have an Idea what the S stands for. It stands for Sa- wait. you said not to tell anyone. should I PM you? . . . . Anyways, Good story Bro. (Any particular nicknames?) Will follow!
Yeah, I can already tell that you got it right, anyways, what I meant was to not tell anyone the spoiler, because, well let's be honest even with the full name it still doesn't give enough of the fanfic away.
The word was "Sacrificed"; think about it for a sec' and it'll dawn on everyone.
(Get it? "Dawn"("Dawnables") I'm so lame, aren't I?)
Yeah, my nickname pretty much is Bro, in fact Bro is a shortening of my name (I share the same first name as the pro-wrestler Brock Lesnar)
OC! Well, if you can't have any Ender OCs, that's a shame, I'm ender-hybrid. I know! You can use one of my characters from my story. Legend of Hybrid. Since your story has a mob-talker theme to it, they would fit perfectly. You can choose from my Albino Sleleton, or my split-personallity Blaze. My idea inputHerobrine is good. 'nuff said.
Eh, I skimmed through your fic, it's okay, I'm actually quite decent at thinking up my own OC's and I'd rather not use OC's that other people gave you… (When I say your fic is okay, I mean it's quite good, just not PlatinumSabr level (PlatinumSabr writes R+V fics (Mainly))) Oh also, you'll be surprised who Herobrine is in this fanfic, trust me… He actually plays a pretty important role, all while behind the scenes, basically, he's the headmaster of the high-school, though, be warned, this guy is quite the trickster…
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Noobypro12
If your not getting reviews but a lot of views it means that people are enjoying your story too much to have time for reviews
I had actually said that I wasn't getting too many views yet (Probably because there was only 1 chapter when I said that, but still) It usually takes about 6 or so chapters to get the views coming in (Though if you ever saw the stats on my Rosario+Vampire fanfics you'd probably have your jaw drop if your still new to the fanfiction thing) And now I must try really hard not to correct your usage of your because it's supposed to be you're (See what I did there?)
Anyways, lets get onto more and more stupid references to shitty kids tv shows like magic school bus (I just cannot watch cartoons (Well it depends on if it's a marvel cartoon or not) because stuff like Magic School Bus make me cringe more than the person in the grade above me who's shorter than me with his cringe-worthy rapping. Mind you, I'm not the one you want to ask about cringy stuff, a ton of my friends are youtubers who all got way further up than I ever did on youtube and my first fanfic, which isn't even on this site, is so cringe-worthy that I should probably be trying to erase all evidence of it (Not that you'll ever find it to begin with))
Oh god, I think my ginger ale just went straight to my lung, it hurts a bit too.
Oh, anyways, since the secret is out now about what the word was I might as well say that you can review and tell me which mob hybrid you want Lynn to turn into, if I don't get enough votes though it will automatically be a human-creeper hybrid. You have about maybe four-five more fight scenes until he turns so get voting! (Also the name will change with it too.) Also, this kinda-sorta gives away half of the spoiler (Not the whole thing, not even the person to guess it right got the whole spoiler) Oh also, you can also vote for character's to be paired with Lynn but there are not going to be any harem votes, especially after everything in "that" one section ends with a harem… Also some characters are still waiting to be introduced, so, maybe wait a bit to vote, especially since none of his "Harem" have really spent much time with him yet.
Whew, 789 words of Authors Note, geez…
I do not own Minecraft, also I don't have that much money either (Basically you'd spend more on suing me then you'd get from me)
When Lynn woke from his near-death-induced-unconsciousness he found himself inside the schools infirmary, which would have been nice had he not been in an Ender-Skeleton sandwich. He quickly tried to get out of the "sandwich" but quickly found himself trapped in the arms of the two girls. He struggled and struggled until finally he gave up. He wasn't going anywhere anytime soon.
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As both Leaf and Lynn walked down the hallways together they started to talk about the new skeleton girl who had joined their "Team",
"What was the skeleton's name anyways?" Leaf asked; a hint of curiosity in his voice.
"I believe it was Skelle" "Though, I could be wrong, I always was terrible with names"
Nobody knew this but Lynn was terrible around girls, he was so shy usually that even though he overcame his shyness there was one thing he would always be shy around, and that was people of the female variety, not to mention the fact that "they" weren't exactly human. It was especially difficult when the girls were as pretty as can be; not to mention that one of them was shyer than him; which turned him on, as scared as he was to admit that.
"Nah, you were right about her name, I was just messing with you"
"Hey!" Lynn said as he turned his head to the side and let his face turn red with anger, hoping that Leaf wouldn't mistake it for a blush.
"You're not blushing are you?"
"No…just angry"
"You're blushing; aren't you!"
"No"
"Is someone a Tsun-Tsun?"
"Stop teasing me!"
"And why should I?" "Tell you what, you keep coming up with ideas for fighting techniques and I'll think about it."
"No you won't!"
"Maybe, maybe not…"
It was times like this that Lynn wished he wasn't so gullible.
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Lynn vowed to himself that he would spend a good bit of his time with the two girls who had become attracted to him before he made a decision on who he wanted to be with, heartbreak wasn't his forte, not that it wouldn't hurt them more but he had trouble comprehending feelings as it was, so he most likely hadn't thought that far just yet.
Upon coming across the swim club Lynn made sure not to even think about the water, after all, what fun would it be for an enderman, or rather endergirl, to go in water? When Lynn got close enough to the swimming club he noticed that the pool was filled with a bunch of squid girls who were draining the life force out of the guys.
Yikes.
Lynn never wanted to see another squid in his life, even if it meant avoiding tap-water. As he got closer and closer to the meeting place with Endr; he started to wonder if she was even affected by water, after all sunlight didn't do anything to her so who's to say that water would still have that effect?
When Lynn finally reached the meeting place Endr was already there and the first thing that came to mind was,
"Hey did you see what's going on at the swim club? A bunch of squids are draining all the life-force out of the guys"
Upon hearing this Endr became more frightened of water than she had before.
"Well, um-"
"Don't worry about it, I'm not going to force you to go near water, it's like acid to you, right?"
"Well, a-actually, I can go in water just fine, I-I'm just afraid of it."
One to nothing for the hydrophobic endergirl; rang in Lynn's mind.
"W-well, how about we go to the mall?"
A date? Just wonderful…
"O-okay…"
As the two walked over to the mall, Lynn noticed that they had food stores,
And I thought we had to subsist on what they gave us…
As the two walked around the mall they came upon a romantic little restaurant that had candles and a fireplace and naturally Endr chose it, hoping that she could get closer to Lynn.
As the two ate, all that surrounded them was an awkward silence when Lynn finally got enough of the awkwardness,
"Sooooooooo, tell me, what's up?"
"U-Um, well, n-not much, I mean you were only in the infirmary over night so nothing really happened, w-well, o-other than L-Leaf saying he would m-murder Skelle, if you d-died"
"Wow, I-I didn't think he was that protective of me."
"W-well, what's u-up w-with y-you?" Endr began to blush a bit, she was hoping he would say that he liked her back but she was prepared for a rejection too.
"N-Not much, r-really, just, y'know, wasn't e-expecting to get, well, y-know, a harem of all things." If Lynn wasn't blushing already he definitely was now.
The two of them both finished their food at the same time and left the restaurant. Lynn wanted to hold the endergirls hand if not to at least calm her down a bit, but he was afraid she wasn't ready for that just yet…
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While Lynn slept for the night all that came to his head were very erotic mental images of Endr doing very inappropriate things with him...
Well, that's that, but yeah, whatever hybrid you vote for Lynn to turn into (as long as it gets enough votes) could possibly happen, just make sure to vote in the reviews, even guests can review since I usually just leave the guest review moderating off so that everyone can review… (Also because I'm too lazy)
Also I already am shipping Lynn and Endr, because, well, that's not for you to know…
Also, Leaf is not a viable option to vote for. I really am not into the whole Yaoi thing (Especially since I'm a guy)
