Ok, well, my stomach is much; much better now, mind you I still feel a little sick but still much better.
Anyways, I plan on introducing the spider girl this chapter cause that one is my favorite. (Well, technically the cave spider, but the cave spider will be introduced much later (Like, dozens of chapters later, like probs somewhere around thirty chapters (Hopefully, but who really knows)))
Okay, Reviews:
Xena13a
I ship it. OTP. And I cast my vote for Lynn being part Ender.
I'm going to assume you ship Lynn x Endr? If so then yeah, 1 vote for that.
And then also 1 vote for Human/Ender Hybrid
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Beemstar
Chapter 1
Hey I just finished reading chapter 1! I am confused how it got from entrance exams to a magical bus. Also why is he being called 'human' isn't leaf human? If not what is he? I think the S stands for... Sacri... (oh right I have to PM you about it.) So is this a school for monsters because then it will make more sense and I think this is based of Rosario Vampire well I am going to check out the next chapter.
Yeah, you got it right too.
Yeah, it's based off of R+V, it's kinda obvious, in fact, in one of my R+V fanfics I called the bus, "A magic school bus" And no, Leaf isn't human, he's a creeper mob from Minecraft. Again, even from our PMing (We're working together on something for all of you who are absolutely clueless), you should really check the Minecraft Wiki, and then also find out what the Mob talker mod is.
Chapter 2
I don't play minecraft so what is a 'Endergirl?' And where did the jealous skeleton come from? Where did leaf head off to? What was they fighting about? And what energy healed Lynn? Your spelling and Grammar are good because I haven't spotted a single mistake yet. Next is chapter 3.
Enderman: A Minecraft mob based off Slenderman, they teleport around and deal heavy amounts of damage and sort of live up to the horror game their based off of, mind you unlike slender there aren't any pages to find.
I'll be getting into the energy that healed Lynn later, since you know what R+V is, you might already know what's going on (If you got to book 6 in the manga yet, I've already read the whole thing so I know everything)
They were fighting over Lynn, FYI
The skeleton was a classmate, when the skeleton saw Lynn and Endr together she got jealous, and so because of that she tried to kill Endr so she could "take" her place. Mind you an enderman is pretty useless against a skeleton and a skeleton is also pretty useless against an enderman, so it would have ended in a stalemate, Lynn was an idiot…
Chapter 3
Lol this is so confusing you do some strange timeskips. I really feel sorry for those dudes being the squids food bar couldn't leave or someone of helped them I hope they get their revenge. Hybrid... Well if this a monster fic then how about a triple hybrid(I don't know that will work though...) Human/creeper/Endoman but I also think just Human/Creeper is good. I am not sure what a creeper is but from reading this I think I can deduce they have some sort of fire powers and they can light things with their hands. Anyways keep up the great work!
Yeah, I know, actually my timeskip was going to be a bit different and then I just sort of tried to get things through what I'm not used to (Which is a filler chapter, I still am not used to writing filler, I mean I can do it, but It's so weird, especially with me being such a fan of action movies where everything is about shooting people to bits (Especially with me being a Arnold fan (Y'know, the terminator guy)
Also, I'd like you to wait a bit before immediately casting a vote for creeper hybrid because well, not a lot of the main characters have been introduced yet, I still have two or three to introduce still, (well for now) and then there will still be a bit of time to make a decision.
I do not own Minecraft
As Lynn woke up after his dream he found what had to be a spider peeking through his window. She had blood red eyes with slit pupils as well as very sharp I teeth. She had a headband on with ruby red beads on top and a black and grey striped sweater on just like Lynn, she also had on a black mini skirt and black stockings that fit her just right. Next she had on black sneakers that only seemed to reinforce her liking of the color black and she had a decent "pair" on her, not too big, not too small. After Lynn had gotten a good look at her she jumped off his windowsill onto the ground below and she was seemingly perfectly fine, even after the three story drop. After seeing her fall Lynn quickly ran out of his dorm and started looking for the spider that had been in his window; it would be especially troubling if she found out what he was, a human.
As he got to the other side of the male dorms he found the spider climbing on top of a tree and he quickly shouted,
"Hey!"
She quickly turned and fell flat on her ass from the sudden movement. Now on the ground he started to talk to her,
"Why exactly we're you in my room?"
She began to blush
"W-Well, I li-um no never mind, I don't like you baka!"
Lynn face-palmed, not only did he have a dandere that liked him; he also had a tsundere that liked him.
Plus one to the harem, oh wait! I have a date with Skelle later, plus two for harem.
Lynn sighed, now he literally was not too far off from having a harem, there was only one member of it left before it was the literal definition of a harem. Sure, Lynn knew he was attractive but nobody really seemed to like him before, well, that is if you don't count the creepy stalker girl from when he had gone to day-care when he was younger.
He then patted the girls head a bit and ruffled her hair a bit, she was two heads shorter than him but she was the same age as him, for that he was sure; he was also sure that he would pay dearly for that later. He then walked off to his room to close the windowsill and take a nap, his date was quite late, and of course Minecraft mobs were usually the nocturnal type so there was no curfew.
As he slept he had a very disturbing dream…
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He felt a dark entity inside of him. He felt it force its way out as he desperately tried to keep it in or destroy, but it fought with enough force that he wasn't able to fight it off.
"What are you?"
"Ah, but I am you, aren't I?"
"But you can't be, if you were me than you would look like me, you look nothing like me…"
"And how am I so different? I am simply your will to live combined with that which has saved you once so far, that Energy…"
"No you aren't, you feel so evil, what are you really?"
"That is for me to know and you to find out, weaker me"
"Ugh, not only do I hate this sort of plot convenience but I also hate waiting…"
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When Lynn woke from his sleep he had no clue of the dream he had and felt oddly refreshed and ready to go. Something he hadn't felt since getting to the insanely difficult to believe school. He quickly got dressed, combed his unruly hair, making sure that the hair was over his left eye, something not exactly smart for a left-handed person but still, it gave him his attractiveness. He then made sure he had everything and also made sure not to bring his phone which would be an awful distraction, though he also made sure to hide his phone well since he was always paranoid about people trying to take it.
For Lynn's date with Skelle he was going to go for a walk through the forest and eventually have a picnic at a clearing that Skelle had found earlier on.
He soon met up with Skelle at the border of the forest and she took three minutes to just let him look at her in all her glory, mind you she still had her clothes on of course.
Lynn looked at her, she had D cups and a very; very skimpy grey t-shirt that just barely covered her cleavage and completely left her stomach exposed, Lynn hadn't gotten a good look at her before but she was hot. Her hair was completely loose and hung off of her; reaching all the way down to the middle of her back and she also wore the shortest of short-shorts. In fact her shorts were so short that they were like pant-less pants. Finally she wore grey sandals and her toe nails were painted the same grey as the color of her eyes. For a skeleton she was quite the opposite.
As the two began to walk through the leafless forest they held hands so as not to get separated; naturally Skelle took the lead. She slowly led the two through the forest; or rather, quite the opposite of slow and Lynn had to do everything he was capable of just to keep up. As the girl ducked and weaved; Lynn got hit by the branches that Skelle was ducking and weaving from in the first place.
Eventually Lynn and Skelle came upon the little pond that Skelle had wanted them to find and she rolled out a red and white checkered blanket customary of any "self-respecting picnic" or so Skelle had said.
Lynn immediately began to blush when he saw all the sweets that Skelle had baked, there were tons and tons of cookies, a few chocolates, and a pastry or two.
"Umm, aren't we supposed to eat, l-like, healthy food?"
"Silly, this is supposed to be romantic"
* giggle *
"Um, how is this romantic?"
Lynn began to blush more.
"I don't know, it just is."
Lynn sighed and buckled down for the long night.
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When Lynn woke he found himself in a very grey looking room; the room was also very dark and there were two round fleshy orbs squishing up against Lynn.
"Waiiiiit a minu-"
"Well, look who's up…"
"Eek"
Lynn quickly got out of Skelle's room and ran back to the boys dorm to get ready for school.
Okay, well, next chapter is going to have some more of the Spider Girl which was introduced in this chapter.
Still haven't thought of a name for the spider girl, if you have a good name for her then go ahead and tell me in the reviews...