BAYREL'S SONATA

Hello! Here's the first chapter of my first Fantasy fic!

Chapter 1

Redemption

I had wandered for days in the forest outside my village.A mere child who had set out to redeem himself(A/N:Bayrel is 10)I had no idea where I was. I sat down to rest. I almost fell asleep,when a loud growling sound startled me.

I looked up to see a vicious looking lion-creature,looking at me with a look of hunger in it's eyes. I whimpered in fear as it lunged at me.

"AAAAAHHHH!!!"I screamed

In a few seconds,I didn't feel any thing. I opened my eyes slowly,to see the lion on the ground,unconciouss.

"What the--"

"You okay kid?"

The one who spoke to me was a blue hedgehog. The very one that saved my village when I was younger. As soon I realized this,I pulle him into an embrace.

"I...I can't believe it's you!"I told him.

"You...know me?"He asked,a little creeped out at my hug."Yes,you were the one that saved my village from that evil,metal,creature!"

"Hmm...Wait! I remember that! You were that little kid."He said back as I released him,"What are you doing here? You're a bit young to be out here alone at night."

"I know...but,I was...banned from my village..."I said,scratching the back of my head

"Why? What could you have possibly done that would get you kicked out of your own village?"He said playfully.

"Because of this..."

I held out the 3 broken pieces of the "Sonata Trigger" "My entire village depended on this very artifact..."I said.

"Wait,isn't that the thing that Robotnik tried to steal?"He held up the shards and looked at them in wonder.

"Yes...Some other kids shattered it for no reason..."I said in a quivering voice.

"Hey,don't cry bud. I know who can fix this!",he started,"He'll have it fixed in no time! Follow me!"He then grabbed my arm and sped off at high speed.

We stopped at a large workshop in the middle of some ancient ruins.Before we knocked,the door opened to reveal a yellow fox with 2 tails. He seemed excited to see the hedgehog.

"Sonic! I was hoping you would come by."the fox said

"Hey Tails.Can we come in?" the hedgehog,"Sonic"said.

"Sure!",Tails said as he looked at me"Who's this?"

"My name is Bayrel."I said shyly.

"Turns out that this is the same kid from that village Eggman tried to destroy."Sonic explained."Anyway,we need your help with something. This kid's uuhhhh...Sona--something broke and he can't fix it. Can you?"

"Of course!"Tails said proudly.

The kitsune went to the basement to fix the broken trinket. Sonic and I went and sat down on a couch in another room.

"So Bayrel,what exactly was that thing that you had?"Sonic said.

"It's called the "Sonata Trigger""I started,"When it is played,a wave of beautiful sound causes all anger and fighting to cease. Every one just stands there and enjoys it's music. And when it's over,there is no more hate or violence."

"Sounds cool."He said."Cough,cough."

"What's wrong? Are you sick or some thing?"I asked worried.

"Kinda. Tails ran some tests,but we're still not sure what it is."

That's when it hit me. He was the "Blue one" that my dreams told me about. This is why he was close to dying. His illness.

I had to help him somehow.

"So now that your Sonata thing will be fixed,you can go home right?"Sonic asked me.

"No. Fixing the S.T. won't redeem me. I need to do something that will change lives forever before I can go back..."

That's the first chapter! Hope you liked it. Please reveiw! Much Luv!