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Hanna POVI was still outside. Everybody was now gone. I felt so weak, but that didn't stop me from drinking half a bottle of whisky. I was not THAT drunk. Ok, maybe a bit... But he wasn't going to show up. He was so mad. Come on Hanna, that was dumb. Telling him if he was A when he had helped me all the time. I could feel the pain on his damn brown perfect eyes. I was now crying.

"Please answer the call." I was talking to the phone now.

" Hello, Hanna?" His voice.

" P-Please I-I'm so so-sorry. I-I know you aren't A. Come b-back. I'm a-alone." I sobbed between the words.

" Shhh, hey. Where are you?" he asked, so soft as if he was talking to a baby.

" Going to the haunted house."

" Ok, don't come in without me. And don't cry." I could feel him smile in the other line.

" See you." I hung up. So weak.

Hey Hanny

How are you? How about move your lazy ass and help your friends find Alison before it's too late. Good idea, hun?

You know you can't hide from me. In fact, I'm seeing all your steps.

-A

Psycho bitch. I hate A so much. He just is ALWAYS screwing us.

Why didn't girls call me?

Why didn't they tell me to help them?

I didn't care right now of Caleb's orders. Let's go to the creepy little house in front of me. Were there ghosts? I HATE ghosts. They are so pale! And scary. What? I hate pale people! Not my fault.

Aria, WTF? Where r u guys? - Hanna

No answer. I entered in the house and smirked, knowing I was going to get a text from our least-favourite stalker.

FINALLY! That was pretty annoying, you know?

Hannakins, don't try to run out the house because it's only opened by the outside. The only people you can text is me! I put a bomb on your phone and only pretty Ali knows how to turn it off. Tik Tok, bitches. 1 hour.

-A

Aria's POV

Ezra. I was in top of him, with the head on his chest.

" I love you" he whispered on my ear.

" I love you." I said back. He kissed my nose and we stayed in a comfortable silence.

" The others are in danger..."

" They just have to find Alison. If not they die. And I'll keep YOU save, for the most I care about your best friends. I can't protect you all..."

" Please... I beg you. I-I would die inside if something happened to them, Ezra." a tear ran down my cheek. He wipped it away.

" Fine. But you WON'T cry."

" Ok!" I screamed. He put his finger on my lips in a pretty sexy way. Damn, this was getting hotter and hotter...

" Shh!" He said, pleading with his eyes for me to do not scream. " Fine." I said, low this time. He sighed and kissed me. Then he helped me to get up. " Come."

" You are my perfection." I admited, smiling.

" You are my Minnie." he said. I hadn't got it. He smirked. " I am the Mickey, you are the Minnie" I laughed and kissed him.

We got out of the room.

Spencer and Toby were the first ones to be found.

" Hey, Spencer."

" Don't scream! I have a back headache."

" It isn't called headache, it is called alchool after effect." I laughed.

" Shut up." Toby put his arm on her shoulders and had a serious face.

" How to find Ali?"

Don't be doubtfull. I'll give clues. 1- In the the fire or the water, you will get the next clue

-A

" This isn't time for jokes, A!" I screamed.

I heard you -.- -A

WTF, A was really kidding us. Not funny but he/she makes the rules, we are part of the dolls of the game. The barbies.

" In the middle of the fire and water... It has to be a metaphor. The fire is the side where the own of this house used to do the fire to camp and the water is the swimming pool. Aria and Ezra will go to the fire, me and Toby to the pool. Whoever finds Emily, will take her with them. " Spencer said, like a boss.

" I'M HERE!" Hanna voice echoed in the house.

" Damn Hanna, my head!" Spencer said between her teeth.

" One and two is eleven!" Hanna yelled.

Ezra looked at me with a Is-she-that-dumb face mixed with the What-The-Hell face. I shrug.

" She is a bit wasted."

" No I'm not!" Hanna smiled to me. " I'm just more intelligent than you one and two is... ok, I made a mistake. I was going to say twelve, because putting the two next to the..."

"OKAY HANNA, we've understood." Spencer pouted.

" Come Ezra to the fire. Hanna go with Spence and Toby. Em will stay with us. "

Spencer POV

Hanna was giving me a headache from Hell. She just didn't stop TALKING.

" HANNA SHUT UP! My head is tired of your voice and words and whatever that comes out from a mouth!" I snapped. She faked a pout.

" Sorry. But did you know Nina Dobrev..."

" SHUT UP!" Toby and I screamed at the same time, looking at her.

" Okay, sorry, God" she muttered under her breath.

Finally she shut up. I thought, angrily.

When we got to the pool, the door closed and Hanna's face got pale.

" God, God, God!" she mumbled.

" We're in the wrong place. What will now happen to us, Han?" I asked, nervous.

" Now you say ME to be smart!" We didn't take long to figure out, the room started to get filled in water. A was going to drown us!

Toby got to me and hugged me, holding me closer. Hanna was trying to figure out how to get out of there. Yes, Hanna Marin. The blonde one.

" Why are you trying so hard, Han?" Toby asked.

" My 1000 $ clothes will be ruined. And my Chanel MAKEUP!" He rolled his eyes and so did I.

" But you didn't buy it, you stole it! "

" And so what?! It's still worth the money!" She argued.

" Whatever. At least, you have a reason to not wanting to be drown." I laughed. She smirked.

" Yeah... Hope that Ezra and Aria (EZRIA) are having more luck..." Hanna sighed at Toby's sentense.

" Yup."

Hanna looked at everywhere, looking for a way out. But she didn't want to swim UNDER water, because of her Chanel makeup and clothes, really?

I got under water and tried to swim, with the wet dress sticking in my legs.

Hey pretty liars! How r you? Having fun trying to survive. You have to find the key.

This hour is just to complete this 1rst challenge or die! This is gonna be so much fun.

No rules to know, no fair play. -A

No fair play. What did she meant? Oh, no, maybe Ezra and Aria were not having luck.

A got us trapped.

Emily's POV

I was now trying to find them after the chat with Alison. I choose them. They are my best friends. I need Maya. I heard the door opening and then closing.

" Hanna?" I heard someone calling. Caleb.

I got downstairs.

" I just got one text and I bet they got other one."

Don't be doubtfull. I'll give clues. 1- In the the fire or the water, you will get the next clue -A

" I don't know who got in what place... I just know the water must be the swimming pool I used to play with Ali in here."

He sighed and ran a hand through his brown long hair.

" I'm worried."

" I know, Caleb."

Well well, finally decided to join the party. I'll get you to be next to Han in her death. Fire fire in there. -A

" Bluff. She is in the water. I know A's game. " I whispered in his hear. He nodded and got on his way.

I had to find out where was fire. And quickly.

" The garden of the barbacue" I smiled and ran to there. No one was there just me. And then I figured out I was on the right place, because everything started burning. And where were my friends? I didn't know. I just had to get out of there. The faster possible.

I was circled by the flames, the warm and the smoke were uncomfortable to my nose. My head was aching from the orange.

You just have to survive to win the first challenge. -A

10 minutes later:

I had been trying to find a way out. Nothing. The flames were closer. The trees were now falling, almost in my head.

Before everything went black, I thought in her. Maya.

In the moment we first met, in our first kiss in Kahn's party. When everyone found out I loved girls. When my parent accepted it and Maya was in our first dinner.

Our first date in cinema (we really didn't see much movie)

How Maya was dead.

How Maya said she loved me.

The most clear moment in my head was when she made me a surprise : " If the sharks don't let you in the water, I'll bring the water to you." then our kisses. All them. All the promises and all the lies. And all the love.

That was before everything went black.

Ezra's POV

We had been trying to find the place. And we didn't till we saw a field burning, smoke everywhere. I hugged Aria when she saw we couldn't come in. When she thought Em was dead. When she cried hard.

Then we saw it had been all a trap. We didn't even notice that we had just been kidnapped.

After waking up...

I woke up with my arms and legs tied up in a cold stone floor. Aria was unconscious by me side. She looked an angle. A messed up, beautiful angle. The love of my life.

But we were locked, I guess. I saw someone coming in. Someone of the A team. The winner of the game. He/she was wearing a creepy mask.

" Hello." American and female, for sure.

" LET US OUT! She's hurt!" I shouted, trying to fight against the hunger.

" What would be the fun of that?"

" It isn't all about fun."

" Oh, that's for you. I like a cute little game with my bff." She laughed and it was the most annoying sound in the earth.

To be continued...

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