After some MAJOR editing, here is the revamped version.

Until Death do us Part.

After the iris from gods knows who, the teenage trio decided what to do next.
"I suppose we should go back to camp." Said Annabeth
" I agree. But Chiron and Mr. D are going to be really mad after what we did…." said percy

"Stop being such a wimp, seaweed brain." Said Annabeth
"Yeah, I'm still here…." Said Thalia
"What, oh hey Thalia, when did you get there?"wonderd percy out loud.
Thalia punched Percy square in the face."
"So, what did you guys do to get Chiron mad?" asked thalia

Annabeth answerd "well, Percy and I ran away from camp, to come rescue you."

"Oh, I can't thank you guys enough for that." said Thalia reluctantly.
Percy looked shocked and yelled "we rescued you?!?!"
Annabeth turned away from Percy.

"Anyway, what are we going to do?"
"Hobey ho- I am is a pirate!" said percy wearily.
"If you weren't our ticket back, I would punch you're lights out.."
Percy looked scared.
"well. I guess we better get back then..." And they set off for camp half blood.

Along the way, Percy was trying to get Thalia to listen to his new "Gwen Stefani" album Poor, album, it got thrown over the boat, and when that didn't work, she zapped it with lightning and THEN threw it overboard.
When they arrived at camp half blood they went out to go see Chiron.
Except for Percy. He went to go hide under his covers from the "big scary blob that was-going-to-eat-him."

When Annabeth and Thalia had "Convinced" Percy to come with them Chiron saw them, his eyes widened," WHERE THE $&! HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!"
"Are you having PMS again Chiron?" whimpered Percy"
NO!" Yelled Chiron" I'm not a girl! I am not even human!"
"Anyway, where have you guys been?" Chiron said imapatiently.
"Rescuing thalia of course" what did you think?" replied Annabeth.
"oh, nothing.. but what has become of Luke"Chiron saide nervously.
"well, we beat him but I don't know how long he will be gone"
"Hmm" Chiron mused "I have some news to tell you guys..."
"Grover is dead" Chiron said solemnly.

The news shocked all three heroes, especially Percy. his eye's began to tear up, as did thalia's and Annabeth's. "
When…when is the funeral?" Percy asked. "Tomorrow" said Chiron
Percy nodded and walked off to his cabin.
"I hope he's okay, I'm going to go make sure" said Thalia She walked off to his cabin, Annabeth glaring sharply at her.

Thalia entered cabin three, and saw Percy sitting on his bed crying. "It's okay "said thalia trying to comfort him. NO IT'S NOT" screeched Percy, obviously in an emotional state. Thalia turned Percy's head to her "it's okay" she said, and leaned in to kiss him, When she was a bout to graze his lips, Annabeth walked in.

"Percy?"She said "oh... I'm obviously interrupting something here. She turned to leave, but Percy yelled "wait!" "You still don't love me?" asked Annabeth with venom "No, wait… well yes, but this isn't what it seems!" cried Percy "Right and I have an elfish grandmother who's younger than I am!" screamed Annabeth, storming off. Thalia continued, but Percy backed off. "No! I don't want to choose between you and Annabeth!

"It's okay Percy, Annabeth will be fine she's just jealous" Thalia said. "Well I care about her!" with that he walked out and searched for Annabeth "Annabeth! Wait up!" Percy called "Percy, I thought that maybe you would love me if I went with you to rescue Thalia," "And it worked." Replied Percy "But I saw you with thalia.. You were going to kiss."

"Percy smiled. I love her." Annabeth looked down. "But I love you too" "And I don't want to have to choose. It's hard enough, with Grover and all…"sighed Percy "It's okay. Go sleep maybe it will help. "Said Annabeth leaving "Alright, but one more thing." "What?"Questioned Annabeth

percy pulled her into a tight embrace. he leaned in, and kissed her passionatly.

Thanks for reading I'll update soon.

deathhawk