Literati and naley I just got your message and decided to repost it correcting most of my mistakes. Sorry if I suck at spelling.
Well, hey guys, first I wanna say a special thank you toSandy Murrayperfectharmony22 and literati and naley forever for your amazing reviews (the ones sent so far). Iii…I'm sooo sorry if there's mistakes but hey! I'm no saint, no dictionary and French writer…But thank you so much for the reviews. I was so happy with them that I decided to update ASAP. Here's chapter 2. Hope you'll like it. Oh and ya sandy, it's a lot about brotherly love because I love the chemistry they have. It's one of the best parts of the show. So here's the update. Enjoy.
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The five desperate students were sitting in the middle of the room on the cold floor. Jimmy just sat on the teacher's desk finishing another cigarette. He just brought the yellowish end of his smoke to his lips and inhaled deeply. Lucas just looked as the red end just got his gray colour back. Nobody dared to talk or move. Cell phones were starting to ring. Lucas felt his in his pocket. He dove is hand to grab it when Jimmy stopped him.
"Don't answer it!" he screamed.
Lucas stopped moving and raised his hand above his head. Brooke felt her phone ring has done Haley's and then Rachel's and finally Mouth had it ringing too. Jimmy stood up from the desk and put his smoke in a paper clip box.
"I want them all! You don't move from your place and you slide them to me!"
"Slide what" Haley asked confused.
"Haley! I thought you were smatter than that…COME ON! Send me all of your phones!"
Nathan noticed that Haley didn't get out of the school. Coach Durham was busy sending the students back home or to the Ravens' gym. He made huge waves to the bus driver. "LEAVE!"
Nathan just walked passed Peyton. She didn't see Brooke when the shot was fired. When their eyes met, they knew there was only one question to ask:
"Where's Brooke…"
"Where's Haley…"
"I don't know" they both said in a worried tone.
"Last time I saw Haley she was with Lucas" Nathan said scratching his nose.
"Brooke was with Haley this morning…" Peyton added with fear and worry in her voice.
Nathan just played with is sleeves trying to avoid his growing fear. "At least we know they're all together right…" he said not even sure if it was true.
"We have to tell the security that they're missing…"
"Do it…I gotta go find Haley" he said backing away from her.
"Are you crazy!?" she screamed almost breaking down.
"I'll never let anything happen to her! She's way too important to me! She's my life! She's all I got…" he said keeping his own tears from falling all over his cheeks. Peyton looked down and then looked him in the eyes with a fighter look on her face.
"Then I'm coming with you!" she said.
"Come on, let's go!" he said starting to run to the other side of the school where no one could see them enter the empty hallways.
Jimmy finally managed to get all of the cell phones. Lucas was the last person to give up. Jim could see the name "Skills" on the caller ID. The kid probably got out of the school safe and now he was trying to know if his best friend was fine. He put it down in a drawer from the desk. When he finally thought he had all the cell phones, he realised there was only four. Haley seemed to be hiding something. She stared at him and then started talking to him.
"Jimmy what are you doing? You take us in hostage in the literature classroom…Five students!! What is that? You are a good guy…"
Jimmy sighed and looked at Haley with anger in his eyes. "Haley what are you hiding?"
"Nothing…why?"
"What are you hiding in your pocket?" he screamed pulling out his gun and pointing it at her.
"Don't point the gun on her" Lucas said angry.
"What are you hiding HALEY!!"
"Put it down" Lucas said starting to yell.
"Nothing…" Haley said panicked.
"HALEY FOR GOD'S SAKE!!"
"DON'T POINT THE GUN AT HER!!!" Lucas yelled out of his lungs.
"Just my phone, okay…" she said taking the plastic object out from behind her back.
"Give it to me…" Jimmy said still pointing the threatening object that could end the life of one of them just by the pull of a single, damn trigger.
Jimmy looked at the screen of her phone and noticed to one she called. "9-1-1 EMERGENCY CALL", he read. He looked back at Haley with disgust in is eyes. He started yelling on the phone.
"9-1-1, here's one of the shooter. Don't you fuckin let anyone in. If there's one soul crossing the school's door, we shoot all of them! You hear me. You come in, they're all DEAD!" he screamed almost spitting on the phone.
He just stared at all of the scared faces turned up to him before he threw the phone with the four other ones. Rachel kept looking suspicious.
"You said one of the shooters…Is there others like you?" she asked.
"Anyone else has a weapon Jim…" Haley asked almost in a whisper.
He sighed and scratched the back of his head. "God they're choked" he thought to him self.
"You denounced me!! Did you actually think I was gonna take all the blame on my ass?"
"So YOU ARE the only one" Mouth said rising is voice.
Jimmy looked disgusted. "They really think I'm the only one don't they" he said to himself. "What a bunch of crap…"
"Do you think I'M the only one!? Do you really think I'm the only person at school to be treated like crap? I'm just the only one who's tired of it and actually did something to make it stop…"
Nathan stopped in front of the coach's office. He went in and searched for a decent thing to protect him self. He searched through all of the sports equipment he could find. Peyton stayed behind trying to look over his shoulder. "What are you doing??" she asked in almost a whisper.
Nathan didn't answer that one. He just took two base-ball bats and handed one to Peyton.
"What do you want me to do with that!?" she asked confused.
"Protect yourself! I won't always be there to watch your back…"
"But I never used something like that before…hey! Make love not war!! I'm for the peace in this world man! No hurt…" she said almost laughing at her own innocence.
"Just fake…you saw movie right! find something…I know it won't be really stopping a bullet but we can at least hit the shooter in the back…"
Since the very beginning, Brooke didn't speak. She was just crying and scared to death. Lucas took her hand in his. She placed a fake smile on her face. He could just see how she was scared by the look in her eyes. To cheer her up a little, he pulled her in a tight hug. "It's gonna be okay baby…" he whispered in her ear. She cried harder. "But I'm scared Luke…" she answered. "I know but I'm here for you…you'll see! It's gonna be okay!"
So how was that? I hope you like it and if you don't, well it's ok. You can say it so I can improve it. Thanks for reading.