Snow the Winged Girl

by katzapped

So, basically when I read Maximum Ride, I loved it but I freaking wish I had been there because they made some pretty bad decisions. So I basically made myself into a bird kid. It basically follows the usual story but there are some changes because of "Snow's" decisions for the flock.

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Hey yo peoples,

I just felt like I should put this note in here in case anyone's confused, and you probably are:

Okay so when Snow wakes up from this, she's going to have a giant gash in her side that's bleeding. This is because of the whitecoats, whenever she overuses her powers, they hurt her with machines that are controlling her from far away. Snow had that freaky dream, where she got punched at the end by Ella. That was actually Max in real life, just in case you were confused, but that voice on the phone was real in the dream, and it gave her a real warning. Something's going to happen about that later(FORSHADOWING!) but for now, Snow might keep getting hurt, but after awhile, as they get farther away and Snow gets stronger, she will stop getting hurt so much. Here's one more foreshadowing word for the future:

MILKSHAKE.

Okay so fly on guys,

Kate