I am redoing this story. I have already posted the new version of chapter 1 and will be editing it more over time. I will redo Chapter 2 if you guys want, but you will need to review or PM me if you want to. The newer version of each will be edited over time.
My sister and I do the stories together and I haven't had her look over the new chapter 1 so once she looks over it I will make the changes that we both agree on. It will take time for me to get the second chapter edited and up; it took me about 2 months to redo the first one. Sorry if it still isn't that good I am still learning. - Luna