Author's Notes:
I'm really, really happy that Tenno in Tengu has quite the small traffic coming from both Warframe fans and DAL fans alike, I hope I'll be able to keep this story up to date monthly. So happy, thanks guys. And I've decided that I'll make the story line flow to Date-A-Live II, with the Yamai arc onwards
Disclaimer: Alpha HD does not own Warframe or Date-A-Live, they are owned by their respective owners, and the only thing I own is Takumi Kaguya.
Warning: This chapter has very graphic scenes, be warned, and out of character elements will happen for development of the story
Additional Notes: I would normally update a latest/current chapter for reviewer(guest) responses, so to sate their curiosity as early as now.
Chapter Edited as of 8:46 PM, Philippines Time May 17 2014
Thanks to Seeker213 for pointing out a small mistake on my part.
-TNT-
Chapter 1: New World, New Nightmare.
Play: TRUST IN YOU by Sweet Arms - Piano
-TNT-
Location: Unknown
Takumi groaned in pain as he slowly roused, waking up in a blinding field of white, "Ugh… Where… am I?" He asked himself, turning around only seeing streaks of gold once every few seconds that whizzed through his vision. "Reminds me of the Orokin Towers…"
He started walking until he stopped dead on his feet, as he saw himself, in his Nekros Exo-Armor, in it's deathly glory positioned in their traditional seiza-styled seat. The Nekros' head turned up and it stared at it's owner.
"Accept who you are…" the Exo-Armor's 'said' with Takumi's own, Nekros-induced voice. "You are a killer…"
Takumi's heart skipped a beat from the fear he felt from his own voice, much more his Nekros self.
"I wanted freedom, not endless murder for balance!" Takumi yelled out, his pupils shrinking as he started to shake.
"It is what we are… What we are born to be." A handsome version of Takumi's voice rang out to the 'Spirit''s right, where he saw another male Warframe Exo-Armor, that had four antlers for it's helmet and it's armor looking that of an agile Paladin's. "I heal, I protect, but also kill, you have to accept."
"NO! NO!" Takumi gripped his head as panic started to invade his mind. And then to his left, another Warframe, a feminine one with Orokin ornaments worn around her head and it's visor pulsing energy inward to the center of said visor appeared.
"Accept." It said in a feminine voice.
"For…"
"We are…"
"You."
-TNT-
"Aaaah!" Takumi screamed as he bolted up in cold sweat. He blinked and looked around, judging by his surroundings he realized he's in an infirmary of sorts. "…Infirmary? That means… I'm alive…" he raised the blanket that revealed his more humanoid legs. "… My armor? It never disappeared like that…"
"It's because your Mana has been depleted after you were rescued." Takumi turned his head to the side and saw Kotori with a lollipop on her hand and her commander cloak worn like a cape. "I'm still shocked at the fact that a Spirit, a male gendered Spirit no less..."
"Mana? Don't you mean Energy?" Takumi questioned.
"It's the same concept." Kotori replied. "Kotori Itsuka. Commander of the Fraxinus and Ratatoskr."
Takumi blinked at the name, and realized she introduced herself. "My apologies, ally." Takumi replied formally. "I am Takumi, Takumi Kaguya of the Tenno." He clasped his right fist with his hand as a sign of respect.
Kotori smiled. "I like this guy, he doesn't seem dangerous, unlike the Nightmare herself... No need to be formal." She responded. "So, let's get to business." She sat down on a chair beside the bed and looked at him with a straight face. "I'm not putting it against you Kaguya-san, but I want answers, who exactly are you? How, and why? You mentioned the Tenno? What are they as well?" Kotori bombarded Takumi with questions to the point that the Tenno himself had a bead of sweat rolling beside his head.
Takumi nodded in understanding, seeing she is confused as much as he is. "In turn, tell me about this… Rahtahtohsker?"
"Ratatoskr." She corrected
"Right… So… here goes." Takumi took a deep breath and he began to explain to Kotori what the Tenno are, their culture, their ways and not missing out on details, some of it causing the red-head spirit to cringe herself. "How I went here is something pretty complicated."
"Humor me."
"An experimental dimensional jump using the Orokin Solar Rails, I didn't expect this 'space quake' to happen though." Kotori blinked for a bit until she sunk it in.
'I see… so that confirms that the Spirits do come from another world… His story doesn't sound so farfetched from the origin of the Spirits.' Kotori mused. "That answers that… I'll keep that on the database, it'll be useful incase more of your kind suddenly just … pop in here."
"I doubt that will happen Itsuka-san." Takumi said with a small smile. "Remember, it was experimental, I'm just glad the Grineer or Corpus do not exist in this world…" He mumbled out the last part. "… So… About Ratatoskr, I've told my part, now tell me yours." He said.
'He dodged the why, now that's something pretty suspicious.' Kotori's eyes narrowed but moved on with her answers.
"Ratatoskr is an organization that is formed to rescue Spirits by peaceful means, by giving them a chance to live normal lives and never be targeted by the AST, or the Anti-Spirit Team, which is a secret organization of the JSDF, or Japanese Self-Defence Forces, where in turn most of their equipment is provided by the company Deus-Ex Machina, or DEM Industries." Kotori explained to Takumi which he easily understood.
"Shady companies never cease to leave eh…" the male Spirit muttered but nodded, he grabbed an available glass of water provided by one of the personnel which he dutifully thanked. "So, rescue Spirits… like myself?" Kotori nods. "How?"
Kotori took a deep breath and replied, "By making them fall in love with a certain individual through dates, and sealing their powers."
Takumi's left eye twitched. "Fall in love? Are you serious?" Kotori nods again. "With who?"
"I'm sure you know him already. My brother, Shido." The red-head loli had to put a hand to cover her mouth as he stifled her laughs
Takumi waved his arms in a panic. "WHOA, WHOA, WHOA, STAND DOWN THERE COMMANDER!" He yelled out. "Are you expecting ME, a GUY, to fall in love with a GUY?!" Kotori began to laugh. "I'm sorry but I do NOT swing that way, there has to be another way Itsuka-san!"
After a few minutes of laughing, Kotori's laughs died down and gave him an assuring smile. "Well, I'm sure we'll find a way, but for now, rest, we'll somehow work on a temporary solution to keep you from trouble."
Takumi palmed his face and rubbed his scalp from frustration. "I guess that will do."
"I'll have Yoshino watch over you for now, I hope you don't mind the company." Kotori said as she stood up and slowly walked out of the infirmary. "For the record she's also a Spirit, but more or less a human as long as you don't make her cry."
"Much appreciated." He replied with a smile, but deep inside he sighed in relief. "No one needs to know… They shouldn't." he thought as the guilt of countless murders still played on his head and gripped the sheets. "No more of those Takumi… you're probably safer here on this Earth, no more killings."
Suddenly, a voice on Takumi's side rang out "Ara? So does this mean that you're a murde- UGRKK!" Takumi visibly flinched at the last word.
"Murderer…"
"Y-Yoshinon! Don't say such things!" A blue-haired girl stuttered out, whose hand is shutting up a rabbit puppet's mouth which is worn on her other hand. "I-I'm sorry… Yoshinon d-didn't mean to say something like that." She apologized, staring at the green eyed Tenno with her quivering blue ones.
Takumi shook his head and waved the child off. "If that's Yoshinon… so I assume you're Yoshino that Itsuka-san sent?" Yoshino nods and he smiles at her. "I'm Takumi, nice to meet you." 'For the love of Lotus she's adorable!' he added as an afterthought.
"Nice to meet you too… Takumi…san…" Yoshino replied while looking down, a small smile showing her features.
Takumi slightly blushed. 'I return my remark, SHE'S ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!'
"Yo! And I'm Yoshinon, nice to meet ya Takumi-kun!" The pupped waved it's hand at him. "And are you blushing, yes, indeed! So you've taken liking to cute little Yoshino here eh?"
"Y-Y-Y-Y-Yoshinon! S-s-stop!" Yoshino's face started to heat up and proceeded to faint.
"Ara?" was only Yoshinon's reply as Takumi palmed his face at the strange display of the two in front of him, he turned to the side of the bed and manage to stand up in 165cm, the muscles of his slightly stocky build stretched out properly from lying down for too long, managed to carry Yoshino to the bed where he laid and smiled.
'So this is… what it looks like to… be a sealed Spirit… how… Peaceful..' Takumi mused to himself and smiled, he might actually enjoy being a normal human, not a Tenno, not a murderer –cue flinching- this time.
"I can't wait." Takumi muttered as he smiled to himself, excited to stop his Tenno Persona and experience the world.
-TNT-
Location: Itsuka Residence
Two days later after Takumi's recovery, Kotori managed to find a way to temporarily 'seal' his powers without Shidou's intervention (And said intervention freaks out the Tenno) and they are now in the Itsuka residence.
"These clothes… are strangely comfortable…" Takumi's voice rang out from the door, where Kotori, Shidou, Tohka and Yoshino (plus Yoshinon) are waiting on the other side. "… I like it!" his voice brightened as he opened the door and he stood in one of Shidou's Raizen School uniforms (thankfully he and Shidou share the same body type… almost) but the white polo is opened, his hair was not fixed so it looked like Tohka's.
Yoshinon was first to react. "I gotta say, Takumi-kun! I can't tell whether you're a guy or a girl with that hair and body!"
Takumi blinked. "What? What's wrong with my hair?" he was thoroughly confused, since Tenno's normally have long hair, male or female because their Exo-Armors disintegrates them while their helmets are on.
"Nothing really, but you look like a boy version of Tohka!" Yoshinon replied and Yoshino agreed by nodding her head slightly.
Now that they thought about it, he almost looks like her. The only difference is the black hair and green eyes.
Tohka's eyes gleamed, "A-Are you my twin?! Takumi-san?!" she asked with a bright smile.
"W-W-Wha?!" Takumi blinked, "We are not!" Takumi said but paused, and had a mischievous grin. "If there's one thing I enjoy, that's mischief and trolling. And you'll be my ally for this cause!" he finished, his personality switching for a moment.
Shidou's forehead dropped a bead of sweat. "Pretty sure you're not gonna pin it on me I hope?"
Takumi shook his forehead. "Tell me, ally, your full name?"
Tohka gave a salute. "Yatogami Tohka!"
The Tenno grinned and gave back a salute. "That means I'll be Yatogami Takumi then!" he laughed. "Please guide me in this new world, my twin sister!"
Everyone laughed as the atmosphere became lighter than it originally was. Kotori though, thought differently. 'He acts like Tohka… so I'm sure it'll be easy for him to adapt, but damn it, I need to find out why he left..' While Kotori isn't all knowing, it's slightly pressing for her to not complete what data she has on the Tenno to help him.
Amidst the laughter, Takumi smiled inwardly. 'I can forget about the murders with people like these… I just hope nothing happens that'll make me kill again.' He looked at the bracer he received from the red-head with intent.
-TNT-
Flashback, 1 day ago
"Here, we managed to come up with something that'll let you roam outside of the Fraxinus safely." Kotori told Takumi as she handed him a bracer. "Why I haven't thought of this earlier I'll never know. We call this the Seal Bracer."
"Seal Bracer?" He asked as he wore it, feeling his Energy being sucked into the accessory and nods in understanding. "I see, the technology on this equipment is pretty unique, reminds me of some of the Mods I used to bring on my Frames."
Kotori placed a finger on her chin in thought, "If you think of it that way… I guess helping you won't be so difficult." Those words made the Tenno smile sincerely, causing the red-head to slightly blush. 'He looks cuter than onii-chan… WHAT AM I THINKING?' she mentally slapped herself so she won't lose composure.
"Thank you, Itsuka-san." His green eyes gleamed with emotions he was never able to experience before. "I'm grateful to your efforts in saving people, or Spirits, as you call them."
"Just be careful." Kotori said in a serious voice, her early blush fading faster. "Negative emotions can break the suppression and short circuit the bracer."
-TNT-
Takumi had fun as Shidou and Tohka showed him around the city, the way Shidou explained how the world works, and Tohka showing him some of the delicious food she encountered, to the point that Takumi was acting like her.
"Soy bread!"
"Ice Cream Mochi!"
Shidou sighed, but he was happy that his Tohka is happy. "Kotori, what do you have on his affection readings?" he asked his younger sister as he placed his fingers on his earpiece.
"Well, he's as normal as the average happy guy can be. Don't worry about sealing for now, we have it covered." Kotori replied. "Although the readings are interesting…"
"What do you mean?"
"I'll explain once I get you and Tohka back here in the Fraxinus. I'll make a distraction for now so he won't notice."
Right on cue, a sudden crowd of people ran between Tohka and Takumi, parting the impromptu twins.
"Hey! What gives?!" Takumi yelled out as he tried to look for his new friends through the crowd. He groaned as the two disappeared the moment the crowd dispersed and scratched his head. "Oh well, I hope they don't mind me travelling, as long as I have this ultimate hacker card." He flipped a black credit card from his hand and grins silly. "Time to eat~!" He trotted off to the nearest Mochi shop and sold the place clean.
-TNT-
It was sundown and he went to the park and walked to the forest like area as he sat down and started munching on the Ice Cream Mochi, and looked up at the trees, their leaves dancing with the wind, giving him a sense of peace.
"I love this place… this Earth…" Takumi said to himself. "There's no way I'm going back to that horrible war… I'd rather live here until my life-span ends."
Don't run away from who you are…
We are Tenno, we are killers. We. Are. You.
The voices of his Exo-Armored selves rang through his mind and he gripped his head in pain. "Damn it… Not again…" The voices plagued him endlessly until a set of voices was heard, causing his attention to shift suddenly.
"Hey, you should be careful where you're walking girl." An adult, male voice said arrogantly. "You should pay the price for it, if you know where I'm drifting."
"Ara Ara? Quite forward aren't we?" An alluring female voice replied, causing Takumi to blush.
'That voice is… very calming… Wow…'
His thoughts were broken as the female continued. "Interesting as it sounds, I might have to… pass on the offer."
"Why you!" Another male voice growled and a thud was heard, and sounds of choking were heard, and that's where Takumi suddenly stood up and his senses went haywire, and started running to their location. "You're going to enjoy it whether you like it or not you little whore!"
Suddenly, thoughts of rage and indignation filled the Tenno's mind. "Even rape exists here in this Earth?!" he asked himself rhetorically. "Filthy humans!" unknowingly, his Seal Bracer started to leak his Energy to his right arm, encroaching it into parts of his now dubbed Astral Suit, the Nekros.
The black-haired girl started to cough from the choking. 'I sense another Spirit… Ack!' her thoughts were broken as she felt her clothes getting torn apart by the two men who was apparently stronger and caught her off guard, her concentration broken. 'No! Don't you dare! It's only for Shidou-san!' despite being calm and collected at most times, she felt a slight amount of panic as the other man took off his pants and his penis was hanging out, and her panties was ripped out. 'Bastard! I bought this for Shidou-san!'
"You're going to enjoy this you little bitch…" the stripped man said as he aimed his penis to the girl's vagina, and he was about to plunge it in when suddenly he felt something hit him on the back, it was nothing at first, until, excruciating pain coursed throughout his body. "AAHHHH!" he screamed, falling down on the ground and squirming in pain.
The other man who was choking the semi-naked girl let dropped her, causing the girl to cough and breathe. "Aoi! What the hell happene-" he felt the air go cold and he froze, his eyes darting left and right. "W-W-Who's there?! Show yourself!"
"To see such hideous acts in this world… Despicable… no matter where, no matter when, rape exists…" Takumi's voice, rang around the area. "People like you… deserve more than just death…" the Tenno's eyes gleam a very poisonous green as he appeared in front of the man.
"A-A kid?! H-how are you…" The would-be-rapist stuttered out in fear. And Takumi laughed in a very insane manner. The girl who was watching the scene unfold had her eyes widen at the killer aura.
'Mmm… So you're that Spirit I've been sensing around lately… and much more potent than Shidou-san himself…' she thought, slightly getting aroused from the cold, deathly aura. 'Who are you… you… interest me…'
The enraged Tenno grinned savagely as he swung his clawed hand between the man's legs and grabbed it hard, and ripped his member out, causing the now castrated man to scream in pain as blood gushed out between his legs. "How does it feel? To have a taste of your own medicine? Keke…" he force fed the man his own penis and testicles, whose face was already tear stained from the pain. "THAT FACE! YES! BEAUTIFUL! Ahahaha!" he kicked the man down to the ground then picked him up again by the neck with his normal hand.
"Mmphh! Mssh! Nnnn! (PLEASE! STOP! NO!)" The man muffled out as he was picked up.
"Begging for mercy?" Takumi grinned, the clawed, Nekros-induced arm reared back. "I DON'T THINK SO YOU LITTLE SHIT! SOUL PUNCH!" with a powerful punch to the chest, the man's eyes lost its shine as he felt his life fade away and his soul which appeared as a mist of purple, flew to the sky and faded. He laughed and tossed the dead body away, and walks to the downed man.
"H-Haru!" He gasped out to the dead man, and he saw Takumi staring at him with wide eyes, and a psychotic smile. "A-Ahh!"
"Your eyes, I can see you've been doing this for quite some time… and failed… you were close to cutting it with that woman there didn't you?" he started creepily and smiled wider, "Have I ever told you, the definition…" he stood up and raised his foot which was also encroached with his Nekros frame and purple flames started to envelop it, "… Of insanity?" he gently stepped on the man's head, causing the purple flames to touch the man's eyes and started screaming as well. "OHOH! Yes! Scream for me you little pig! Now, where was I? It was said… that insanity, is doing the exact, same, fucking thing, over and over again…" he slowly increased the weight of his foot, making the man scream more. "Expecting shit to change…" He started to laugh harder as the man's screams died out from having a hoarse throat, and took out his foot, his eyes melted inwards and blood leaking from his eye sockets.
"Please… don't kill me…" the man pathetically begged. "Please…"
"It's kill or be killed you pig. You should have been aware...!" He raised his foot again and stomped on the now dead man's head, brain matter and blood spilling all over his offending leg and some spraying on his face. "That the life you chose, is certain death!" he swiped the blood from his cheek and licked it. "…Delicious." He turned around to look at the woman who was watching him and walked to her to check up on her to see if she was defiled in any form or manner
"Ara ara…" The woman smiled. "That was a very fascinating show… Quite the murderer, aren't you big boy?"
"M-Murderer?" he stuttered as his poisonous green eyes returned to a gentle, emerald like color, he looked at his leg and his eyes start to widen, and his pupils began to shrink. "I… I… No…" his body shut down from extreme shock, causing the semi-naked woman to be surprised and catch the male, his Nekros features reverting into the Seal Bracer again.
'Strange, he looks like that Princess, Yatogami.' She thought. 'I'll save those thoughts for later, first Shidou-san saves me from Efreet, now this fine piece of male exudes the same aura as him… fascinating. I wasn't even able to consume their time… very fascinating indeed.' With her concentration returned, a black pool spread around her and the comatose Tenno and both sunk to the ground. 'You interest me…'
-TNT-
"Takumi's signature disappeared! Along with Nightmare!" members of the Fraxinus began to panic and type faster.
"Damn it, Kurumi took him!" Kotori bit on her lollipop in frustration. "I shouldn't have called you two suddenly, Shidou, Tohka. Sorry."
Shidou was catatonic; he stared at the monitor and remembered how that black haired girl killed three men in the past. 'Kurumi… why are you back…?' Shidou asked himself, he was shaking, now that he knows that Takumi is exactly like Shidou, he feared for his new friend's life.
Takumi Kaguya it seems, is just like you, Shido. Kotori's voice rang out in his mind as he repeated her words. He's not just a spirit, he's a spirit who can seal spirits as well…
Tohka was angry, and scared at the same time, scared at the fact her friend-slash-twin was taken, and angry she wasn't able to do anything for Takumi.
"We'll find him."
"Shidou?" Tohka turned her head to her beloved Shidou in surprise from the sudden statement.
Shidou smiled at her, "We'll find him Tohka, we helped him once, and we'll do it again."
Kotori was impressed, whatever impact that this Tenno operative gave these two was beneficial. "I'm surprised that you have such resolve Onii-chan. What brought this on?" she asked with a small smile.
"Kotori, he became a part of our family the moment he accepted the offer of being sealed before. And plus, he's my Tohka's twin now." Tohka promptly blushed at the bold statement of the blue-haired male.
"Right, let's find his signature; I'm sure Kurumi didn't take him too far." Kotori said with determination.
-TNT-
Location: Unknown Realm
Takumi groaned as he opened his eyes. 'I killed someone again…' he thought remorsefully.
'But they deserve it! They're rapists! Vile creatures of this world!' his Nekros-self responded in indignation. Takumi tried his best to ignore the valid reasoning as he looked around, seeing nothing but faces of grandfather clocks around him.
"So you're finally awake, that's good." Takumi darted his head to his left as he saw that same black haired girl, but this time her hair was fashioned in an irregular pair of pigtails, and wear clothes similar to a gothic Lolita type, and her golden eye was shown it it's full glory
"Who… are you…? She's… beautiful..." Takumi asked as he stared at the beautiful woman in front of him.
The girl smiled at him as she straddled him. "Ah, we haven't introduced properly… I am the Nightmare Spirit, Tokisaki Kurumi." She said, "And you garnered my interest, who are you as well~?" she asked in a playful voice causing the Tenno to blush.
"Yato… I mean… Kaguya Takumi." He replied, looking away from the woman.
The woman raised an eyebrow. "Ara~ Someone's shy~" she removed herself from him and sat on the bed and started to giggle.
"You're… confusing." Takumi admitted. "And what do you mean I got your interest?" he asked.
"You're a Spirit. Just like me, simple as that." Kurumi replied, "But your aura… deep inside you, just like Shidou-san… but more powerful."
"What?"
End of Chapter 2
-Ratatoskr's Data Entry 2-
"Takumi Kaguya
Thanks to certain factors and enrollment, we got him into the name of Yatogami Takumi, due to the uncanny resemblance with Yatogami Tohka, only male." -Commander's Entry 1
"We found out his personality is very, very much like Tohka's the only difference is that he's obsessed with Ice Cream Mochi." –Vice Commander's Entry 1
Updates:
Name: Kaguya Takumi
Alias: Yatogami Takumi
Personality: We have found out his normal personality, he is similar to Yatogami Tohka's but we also found out he has a tendency to become insane like "Nightmare" Tokisaki Kurumi, given if it's triggered.
Weaknesses: Commander Itsuka believes that the problem with Takumi is regarding about his past as a warrior. We have yet to find out if Commander Itsuka can pry more into his past.
Threat Level: SS
Looks: Without a ponytail, he is a male version of Tohka himself, he is as tall as Itsuka Shido with 170cm in height, and he has green, emerald eyes.
=End of Ratatoskr's Data Entry 2=
Post Chapter Author's notes:
What I write is what I write okay? OOC elements are obvious and massive diversion to the storyline, it may seem a bit rushed but each chapter will depict a major event.
As of now, I am also wondering if I should make it a KurumixOC only or a three-way with Kotori, I'll probably think this through for next month's chapter. And next chapter will involve the Yamai arc.
This is Alpha HD signing off.
-CHAPTER 3 PREVIEW-
"You have to accept who you are, Takumi-kun, I accepted the fact that no one can save me."
"That's not true, everyone deserves a second chance."
"What the hell Takumi I thought you were kidnapped?"
"Not really, I was safe."
"We're going to a field trip in Okinawa."
"Field trip? That sounds fun, don't mind if I join?"
OMAKE
Guest Reviewer responses as of May 18 2014, 6:53 AM Philippines Time
"Hey Alpha-san!" Tohka ran up to the Author who was fiddling with the computer and munching on a piece of bread and the 20 year old author turned his head at Tohka and tilted his head in inquiry. "You got a guest reviewer you know." Alpha nodded and took the piece of mail from Tohka's hand, he smiled in thanks and turns back to the computer not before tossing a box of Pocky to Tohka. "Yay! Pocky! Thank you Alpha-san!"
To Requiem81
"I've been reading the Light Novel and watching the anime lately so don't worry, since true enough that Shidou will heavily rely on Kotori's regeneration, but I'm taking that into factor as well, thanks, I'm also considering Yoshino, Yuzuru and/or Kaguya to the mix, but Yoshino's abilities will be used by Shidou, so that's another factor, if ever I end up deciding to choose Kotori for the three way, I might possibly make something plausible, this is why I'm taking a month's time before writing the next chapter."
"That's a mouthful..." Alpha muttered as he leaned back on his chair in exhaustion and felt someone hug him from behind. It was his beloved, Clare. "Hi honey."
"You better start brain storming for next chapter dear." Clare said as she kissed Alpha's head and the man purred at the contact.
"Hai, hai, Kotori." Alpha responded, using his pet name for her, the couple smiled and they sat in front of the computer and starting writing drafts for the next chapter
Guest Reviewer Responses as of May 20, 2014, 10:30 AM Philippines Time
To Seeker213
"Hot damn Seeker." Alpha commented, "You pretty much helped me fix some of the mistakes I wrote. And thanks for the DAL timeline table, it's going to be pretty useful, thanks." he cracked his fingers and puts a hand to his brain, and proceeded to brainstorm for the next chapter yet again. "By the way..." he looked up, "if you have any email addresses I can contact you or a fanfiction account, I would love to have a conversation with you."
Chapter 3 will be written and released on June 27-30 2014, Stay tuned.