The awkward moment where you forget to add an Authors note to the first chapter..Anyway! This is my first ever fanfic! I know it's not going to be amazing, but I'm really going to try and make it the best that I possibility can. This story is more aimed at Tobias, and his abusive father. Also, In this story, Tobias is going to be a player a little, because I want to have some fluff and stuff. So yeah! Enjoy :)
Tobias P.O.V
The Chasm expresses me. The harsh waves crashing, destroying anything or anyone in it's wake. Dangerous. Deadly. I wonder if anyone else who sits here, and watches the Chasm think the same way. Have the urge to jump, ending everything. Maybe it's just me, who knows.
"Hey...Are you alright?" A females voice softly whispers as I quickly turn around embarrassed. In front of me is a pretty girl, short, straight black hair and blue eyes and tanned skin. She was hot. "Uh, Hey! Yeah I'm fine, just went for a walk." I say, as I stand and fold my arms together. "Yeah, I tend to do that a lot. Girlfriend giving you trouble?" she says while laughing, and playing with her long hair. "Nah, I'm single, haven't got time for a girlfriend." That wasn't a complete lie. I mean, yeah I was in no mental shape for a girlfriend, but it doesn't mean that I can't have fun right? "Oh really?" The girl coos, as she strides closer, slowly cascading her fingers down the side of my face. "Hard to believe? I didn't catch your name." My breaths are getting quicker, my heart is pounding. I've never been in this situation with a girl before. I wanted to seem sexy and experienced. I wrapped my arms around her waist as I push her up against the cold wall. Our mouths are inches apart. "My name's Adrain. Don't worry, I know who you are. Drop dead georgeous trainer who came first in his class. Just my type of guy." She smiles, as she leans in to kiss me. Our kiss lasts for what seems like hours. There's weird sounds, and so much... Anger. It's like both of us were letting out what we were both feeling into that kiss. I don't know this girl, but with the time that I've spend with her, I've realised that I want to keep dong things like this and have fun. It makes me feel normal. I guess, today is going to be a great day afterall.
"So, Tobais, who do you think is going to jump first huh?" Zeke almost yells, as I make my way through the Pit. "HMM Candor? I just have a feeling it's gonna be Candor." I reply, as I stand near the black net, which, in a number of minutes, will contain our first jumper.
"Psh, No way! Candor are all wimps. Who knows, maybe a few cute girls transferred, craving the Dauntless thrills"
"Yeah Zeke I seriously doubt that, but hey, I wouldn't mind some cute girls to fall into this net." I say laughing, as I hear the common scream mixed with a yell which signals the first jumper. I remember the first time I jumped off the roof, down into the dark, mysterious hole, which for the initiates, lead into the unknown. I remember, as the wind raced though my hair and clothes, that I felt free. I felt strong and brave. Like I, out of all people actually belong here. "Can I get some help here?" The girl says giggling, as I snap out of my own thoughts. "Oh, sorry, yeah take my hand" I say almost robotic, as I help the small girl out of the net. She's actually pretty cute. Blonde hair, blue/ grey eyes and fair skin. Dimples which showed when she smiled, and petite lips. "Name?" I say harshly, as the girl looks down at her feet. "Umm, my name's Tris." she replies smiling, which of coarse, made me smile a little. "First jumper, Tris! Welcome to Dauntless."
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