Hi sorry I've been gone for a while; I've stuck in a writing funk. So I read some pretty good fanfics trying to get some ideas since I didn't get many reviews. I didn't expect there to be some after that awful first chapter. I PROMISE this one will be longer. Cross my heart and swear to die. On with the story.
Disclaimer: I wouldn't be writing fan fictions about my own book if I was Veronica Roth.
TOBIAS POV:
The clock reads 2:00 am. I roll over and I start to panic when I don't feel the warmth of my Tris next to me. I sit up abruptly and look around are dark apartment. The lights are on in the bathroom, so she must be in there. Thank goodness! I lay my head back on my pillow and instantly fall asleep.
TRIS POV:
It feels like I've been walking for hours but what has really been 30 minutes. I take in my old faction's surroundings. Boring gray bricks cover houses that belong to the most selflessness people ever. I try my hardest to stop thinking about Tobias. I pick up the necklace around my neck that Tobias gave me the day before. There is a small ten connected to the chains. It stands for 6+4=10. Half of my brain says this is the right thing to do, but the other half says the complete opposite.
I finally make it to my house, well my old house. The lights are still off which means no one is awake. Of course. The sun is barely starting to rise in the distance. I wonder if Tobias is awake; does he realize I'm gone yet? I left the bathroom light on to throw him off for a while. I know he wakes up during the night sometimes after having nightmares about Marcus. I decide to wait outside until my parents are awake to go inside.
I sit behind the bushes so I won't be noticed.
TOBIAS POV: (Sorry for the frequent POV changes. It won't happen often.)
The warmth of the sun pours in through the apartment window. I check the clock again and it reads 7:00. I'm glad there's no work to day or I'll seriously be late. I yawn and slam my hand down on the bed. I wince; if Tris was there I would've slapped her in the face. Where is Tris? The bathroom light is on; maybe she thought we had work today. I laugh inwardly. Getting out of bed I walk towards the bathroom.
"Morning gorgeous." I tell her. There is no respond.
"Tris are you ok?" I ask. Once again there is no respond. I try knocking on the door and the door opens slightly. I push the door open and look around. She's not in there. Now I start to panic. I pull on a clean shirt and exit our apartment. Calm down Tobias I'm sure she's ok, maybe she left for breakfast with Christina. I enter the Pit and look around for a short blonde. I come up short.
"Hey Four; my man!" Zeke yells from across the Pit where he sits with the rest of the group. Great, maybe they know where she is.
"Hey guys, have you seen Tris?" I ask all of them
"No." they all say in unison.
Now I'm in full panic mode. They must have seen the fear in my eyes because Christina asks, "What's wrong."
"She wasn't in our room and you guys just said you haven't seen her." I reply.
"How about we all split up and look for her." Uriah says. "I'll check the tracks, you can check the control room, and Marlene can check the net so on and so forth."
"All right we'll all meet up here when we're finished." I say. We all split up to look for Tris. I head towards the control room were we do our fear simulations. I open the door and look around. There's not much in here except for the computer and the chair the initiates sit in. No Tris in here. Maybe the others found her. Please God, let them find her. I walk back to where we were sitting earlier. Everyone is there except for Uriah. None of them has Tris. Shauna is the first one to speak up.
"I couldn't find her." She says. Everyone nods to agree with what she said. All my faith is resting on Uriah. Suddenly Uriah comes running from where the net is located.
"She…wasn't…by…the net." He says trying to catch his breath. My body went numb; I hear them trying to talk to me, but my brain doesn't process the words. Where could she be? My only family; my only true family gone. All of sudden I have an idea of where she might be. Abnegation. I practically sprint towards the tracks.
TRIS POV:
The sun is now fully raised. I guess now is better time than ever. I gather all my things which are my black duffel and head towards the door. I feel someone's gaze burn into the back of my head. Suddenly I feel very uncomfortable. I spin around to see who is staring at me, but there is nobody there. I must be losing it. Heading towards the door once again, I feel the gaze again.
Seriously who is it? I make my way to the front of the house to see that there are still no lights on in the house.
"Great." I mutter under my breath. Now I'm forced to stay out here with the weird feeling that I'm being watched. By who, I have no clue. I lean back against the side of my old house. Right in front of me is Tobias's old house. Oh great, now I'm thinking about Tobias again. I need to stop before I make myself turn back towards Dauntless. I bet he realizes I'm gone. Has he told the others? Maybe he slept in late because he didn't have work today.
While I'm lost in my thoughts of Tobias, I hear the rustle of leaves. Something hard slams against my head and then there's nothing but darkness.
I know I know it's a cliffy. Don't worry I feel some remorse for doing this to you guys. (Not really). FOLLOW FAVORITE, REVIEW! Tell me what you want to happen next. PM me. Tell me what you thought. Do anything you want. I except constructive criticism not hatred. I still need an answer about the three books represented in my username. Alright until next time…Peace&Love~ MSC or DistrictFactionCaster123 3 3