I am SO sorry about the short chapters i relized yesterday how short they were... :-( i plan on remaking this fanficton soon when i get it all writen down or wat not. thank u for reading anyway! PLz enjoy! they look so much bigger on quotive...
Jundo's POV
I wake up to see I need to go. I throw on random clothes and I run out the door, I watch Hughes' funerel and I go home early to find a young girl looking at my family picture. She turns around and my expression turns from annoyed to shocked. "Sister?!"
Carrot's POV
I went to his funeral and I go home early. I wish there was a way to turn back time and fix everything, here I am trying to do the impossible, and Edward says that he didn't grow up one bit, in truth we never do kinda. Oh what am I thinking I get home and change out of my dark,depressing cloths and got to bed early that night.
Kegareta POV
"Hello sis!" I said in my cheery pitched voice. Jundo has the face: what the heck how did you get here? "I came all the way from Xing. This girl with a panda or cat I don't know what it is, but she let me come with her so I could see you!" I chimed as she changes the look in her face. "Never mind that..." i started, then I stopped, for reasons unknown I guess I want her to speak. "What is it Tait?" Jundo said as I gave her the look don't call me Tait. Anyway I state the question that has been killing for me to ask. "Why did you kill that man..?" She stopped dead in her breathing she answered for what I thought was a lie, "He was getting out of hand." That's all she said I asked her again she told me to drop it. I have my pout face on and I walk away. She never has asked me to drop a topic before. There is a first time for everything I guess. I walk downstairs and I go to the ice cream shop for some sea salt ice cream.
Kegareta is 9 or 10
I think i will put these 2 chapters together so its not as short as the others. Ahh its so hard to copy and past from google documents! DX
Edward's POV
When me and Al came back to Hughes dead I was devastated. I promised self I would give hell to who ever killed him. But I am still crushed I can't believe it...
Jundo's POV
I took advantage of my sister not being at home and spy on the pipsqueak. I try to hold in a laughing fit and see him walking around town and split when I see Kegareta going to him.
Kegareta's POV
I see a boy around my age walking around an I go over to him and when my shadow casts over him he looks up. "Hi there. You look sad. Is something wrong?" I said as he looks down again, he repliyed "I just lost a friend..." he said as I say, " I don't know many people that accept me so I don't have many friends, so I don't know that pain..." I said sadly yet I won't tell him why, I am just not comfortable telling people that my sister is a homunculus. "Well i'll be your friend. By the way my name is Edward Elric. Its nice to meet you... I don't think I caught your name." He said as she had a better expression then before. " my name is Kegareta." I said as I asked more questions. " How old are you, I am 10," I said as we walked, " I am 15, " he said. " I thought you were 12 or 13 when I saw you, your kinda short for your age." I said I looked at his face and realized I made him mad, " Uh sorry! I didn't mean to make you mad!" I said as he quickly changed his expression, " its OK just don't do it again... he said as I looked at the time,"opps I gotta go, see you Edward!" I said as I ran to the hotel.
Sis I am home! I announced as I walked through the door. I quickly noticed she wasn't home. Eh I think I will take a nap.
Carrot's POV
I got the rest of the day off so I decided to go through the alleyway to get home when I hear some people talking. I know its rude to eavesdrop, but I am super curious. I see a boy and a girl talking about...Hughes?! Now I gotta hear! I hide in a dumpster and listen in on what they say.
Envy's POV
Envy: So Puri where is he?
Jundo: i told you he is in the basement of the fifth laboratory which is under rubble, lock, and key.
Are you sure?
uhg for the 1,000,000th time YES dam it you deaf or something you moron.
Shut up
wait I hear something.
what is it?
just a rat I guess.
i better get back my sis will wonder where I am.
FINALY! AFTER 10 MINUTES OF WORKING IT I GOT IT! ANYWAY do u think it is better? PLz Review! i don't know how i am doing :'(