did last chapter blow u away?... it blew glide away that's for sure :-P

Yeeeeaaaa that was corny anyway the fact I'm not getting any reviews is seriously bringing me out of my "story mode" I NEEDS DA LOVE also flames will be used to burn marshmallows to use as ink for my magic quill that trails sparkles... on a side note:

RUN ZIPPY RUN *hears yelling from far away* "MY-NAMES-NOT-ZIPPY" hahahahaha X-D

Recovering from the blast and apparent blackout ~huh guess I hit my head...again~ I assessed my situation ~ok first check diagnostics then scan area and formulate plan~

~"well well someone is adapting quickly"~

I let out loud "EEP" at the sudden invasion of my CPU ~PRIMUS... you're a fragging mind ninja what? do you wait for the moment when I least expect for you to say something?~

~maybe, your reactions are quite amusing to watch~

~so since you were obviously watching me this entire time how would you rate my crash into Skywarp? Id rate it a 4 for impact but deduct a point for minimal damage so… 3~

~"I'd give it a 5 because that little voice malfunction was priceless"~

~haha good point ill bump my rating up t for humor~

~"I just wanted to tell you that you must keep your human life a secret until you gain the trust of those around you, it could cause problems if revealed to early"~

~Ok good to note, but you do realize I'm in an area with motion based turrets? And that I need to get out of said area ASAP?~

~yes I will leave you to your...planning... tata for now~

Turning my attention back to... ~...did primus just say "tata"?~ shaking my head I finally focused on my situation. Diagnostics revealed I was low on energy and fuel and has slight dents but nothing major for damage ~ok, I will have to rely on momentum instead of my energy to get out of this so use my energy to gain the needed momentum to release the potential energy gained from….. skipping scientific explanation and simplifying it… gain speed then relax and let the momentum drive me~ happy with my plan I scanned the area surrounding me for any complications finding 3

A defense turret

Another defense turret

An unknown bot

~wait what? ~ scanning again I found the unknown spark signature still there ~hmmmm I wonder who that is… I'm not getting any warnings from their presence but then again my "danger sense" was more reliable than my warning systems apparently…. But that wasn't acting up ether…maybe not a complication~

Deciding this bot could help me I got up only to dart out of the way of another blast from a turret and ended up being blown backwards gliding, ~well better not waste this momentum~ half crouching to keep my balance I continued on my forced path avoiding blasts only to pass by the bot who's signature I picked up noting the impressed, confused, and horrified expression he portrayed before my balance faltered, I tripped and did multiple tumbles in before bouncing and skidding to a halt hitting my helm...

O*o*o*o*o

Arriving close to his destination Blurrs vision lit up with a warning of the areas defense turrets alerting him they were not disabled ~uh oh I wonder if the unidentified bot was offlined~ checking his scanners and widening the scanners perimeter he found the bot was not offlined but the signature was weak ~The bot is probably hurt or unconscious….. Or both~ deciding the best course of action was to get the turrets disabled so he could access the area he slowed to a hault and activated his comm link

=This-is-officer-Blurr-requesting-sectorT3-turrets-to-be-dissabled-for access-to-area=

=Hey speed bot. wud ja mind repeatin tha'? = Jazz responded from the other end

Just as he was to repeat his request he heard an explosion not far away then watched in awe as a femme zipped by avoiding blasts from the turrets ~WHAT THE? … is she HOVERING!?...and going BACKWARDS at TOP SPEED?!~

Then she crashed…

Change this up more than the others review? Good? Bad?