Authors note: Hi. I am so sorry that I haven't written a chapter in a while and I would like to remind people
that I SUCK AT GRAMMAR so if you see anything that is incorrect grammatically please let me know.
I would also like to thank everyone that has been asking me to get off my lazy butt and write bigger
chapters. They may not be as big as some Authors can write but they are as big as I can with out dying of
brain overload so thanks to Snow Charms, Demonic Chick888, and others who have encouraged me to update
a lot more often, I apologize once again for the lateness.
I also have a problem I would like to create a guy who would be oh this is difficult I can tell you what part
he is to play with out giving too much a way, well this guy--um--let's say he is Kyo's rival for Tohru's
love (Not Really Love can't tell you more than that) and I need a name no polls or anything I just NEED A
NAME I would really appreciate it I don't care what it is it just needs to be a male name.
Besides all that, here's the new chapter, ENJOY.
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Men clothed in black streamed through the door and windows surrounding Tohru with theur weapons pointed
towards her. A man who had the insignia of the cat inscribed in his twin blades came forward.
"Tohru-sama, we request that you come to the main house with us quietly. Otherwise, we will take
you by force!" Illustrating his point, he swiftly touched his blades to her throat.
"Excuse me," said Yuki calmly, seeming to take the situation in stride, "but this is private property.You have no right to be here or threaten Tohru."
"Well, if it isn't the Sohmas. Just stay out ofthis, you despicable rats, and we will leave you
unharmed," the man said, glaring in a way that seemed to burn a hole through them.
Continuing, he said, "Imagine our surprise,Tohru-Sama, when our intelligence found you here,
living in a house comprised solely of men, and that the men were from the clan of the rat. The elders were
greatly displeased about this and sent us out to retrieve you. After all, your five-year absence has
made a great impact in our clan, Tohru-Sama--an empty hole, if you will."
As he finished speaking, the men surrounding her began to close in slowly, making the space between
them and her smaller and smaller; filling the gap. Before any of them could touch her a man,
impeccably dressed in the finest clothes, appeared in the doorway.
"Enough!" he yelled, surprising the men and causing them to lower their weapons "Kei-dono" and "Lord Kei" were heard throughout the
house as the men bowed low to the ground while Tohru just stood there, face white as ash.
"Tousan," she whispered while turning to face him."What do you want, Tousan?" she asked in a firm voice which barely concealed the note of panic and fear in her voice.
"The first thing you say to your beloved father is what do you want? It makes me feel so sad,
daughter, that you couldn't even show a hint of concern for the father you left behind, without even a
letter of goodbye! " Lord Kei said, stepping closer to Tohru. "Well--what do I want? There a many things I want. However, the one I want for you to is for you to return home and fulfill the duties you have to our family and clan and for you to stop running away like this!
"Because, Tohru, actions like these have consequences, and the consequences next time you run away will be very severe." He finished off his threatening words by dropping a photo into her hands and walking away.
As he reached the door he paused and turned around as he had an after thought. "I will be expecting you in the next couple of days at the hotel. We are staying at to finalize the details to get you back home to where you belong. If I were you, I would not try to run away again, or there might be some accidental mishaps happening to the Sohmas." He finished his sentence with a Cheshire cat's grin. Then he clicked his fingers and walked out the door followed by all the men. leaving the house empty except for the shell shocked Sohmas and Tohru,
who was staring at the photo in shock while trying to keep the tears from her eyes.
Authors note. Well I know it's not very long but at least it's a start, so love it? Hate it? Let me know
and please help me with name suggestions please!Here's what you can expect from the next chapter.
What the Photo is a picture of will be revealed.How the Sohma's react to what has happened?
Will the Sohma's let her go back to her Fathers? And Her Big Secret will soon be revealed
Plus the name suggestion for Kyo's enemy will be found hopefully plus the part he is to play in this story.
So see you next time!