So I like some of this, but I'm not sure about it all as a whole. Today was busy though so sorry but I think this is about as good as it gets
Location/Situation: Windy Day
It had become tradition for there to be a camping trip for Felicity's family, and the others. Each year in early September they'd head out for the weekend and go tent camping. Even with their fast-paced, changing lives they still managed to get out there. This year they had Felicity and her mom, Oliver, his parents, and his new baby sister Thea, Tommy and his dad, and Laurel, Sara, and their dad. Over the years they'd only lost people, leaving Oliver's family the only one who was intact.
It was Saturday when the kids were pulled out of sleeping bags by over enthusiastic dads. There would have been more protesting except that it wasn't too cold. Within an hour all were dressed warmly in jeans, tee shirts, and sweatshirts. The trail was one they'd all hiked before- except Thea, but she was only 1. The familiarity let the parents allow the kids to go ahead; as long as they stuck together.
The five kids had gotten ahead of adults early on and now were more than halfway up the mountain. Of course it wasn't until they reached the top that the complaining started.
"GEEZ. Who thought this was a good idea?" Tommy yelled out. "It's a windy day and therefore a cold day. I don't like it." Most of the other kids nodded their agreement, but Felicity was the one to pipe up.
"It's not cold…. It's breezy." Everyone looked over at her.
"Ehhh…" Tommy acknowledged her, but quickly moved off, Laurel on his tail. Sara had already wandered off to climb a rock, she was practically a monkey. Felicity had settled herself on the ground, looking up at the sky, so Oliver didn't follow Tommy. He would never leave her alone- even if it meant sitting in the grass and looking at the sky.
It was this position that they were still in when the adults finally approached the top of the trail. The parents were admiring the view- or at least most of them. Quentin Lance was trying to get Sara off the top of a rock.
Their visit to the top didn't last too long. Shortly after the parents had arrived Oliver called out to them.
"Felicity says that there is a storm coming in." Everyone got themselves together to hike back down. There had been a time where they wouldn't have believed Felicity's prediction on sight, but then it poured and they were stuck because they hadn't listened.
The rain did come and they did get wet, but soon after they had a fire going under the "dinner" tent and everyone was drying off and warming up.