Hi guys it's Christy! I love and hate this chapter at the same time. Man all the action in this! I hope you'll defiantly want to murder Gideon after reading this chapter,and if you already did want to murder him (which was probably all of you." You'll want to murder him 800 times now! Alright enjoy! -Christy

Chapter 6

"Dipper, if your not going to obey me-" crack.

"OW!"

"Then you get punished!" Gideon yelled as he continued to whip him. Dipper whaling in pain due to the whip. Tears started running down his eyes to the pain he couldn't take it anymore but it kept coming. He continued to whip another six or seven times until Dipper couldn't move anymore.

"Now will you listen to-"

"We will never you little twerp!" Stan yelled to help Dipper cutting Gideon off.

"Oh it looks like we have another Pines won't listen to me! Bring him out!" As Stan was carried out Dipper was left alone in a ball trying to forget the pain, but it hurt so much.

"No... Gruncle Stan." Dipper managed to get out as he cried.

"Oh Dipper, when will you learn to shut up!" Gideon yelled as he whipped him again. Dipper yelled in pain from too much.

"Leave him alone!" Gruncle Stan yelled as he was tied to the cell bar.

"Oh look a new comer!" Gideon yelled as he whipped Stan. Stan screamed in pain from this.

"Dude, lay off a bit!" Soos yelled from the cell.

"Shut your mouth before this happens to you!" He taunted Soos.

After eight or nine times to Stan and Dipper he stopped and they were shaking from the pain.

"Put them back in their cell! They've had enough today, but I'll be back tomorrow." He said and left back up the stairs. Dipper and Stan screamed from the pain of moving and being thrown back into the cell.

"Dipper, Stan! Are you guys ok?!" Wendy asked them, but they didn't respond the pain was too much for them.

"Dudes it will be ok don't worry!" Soos said trying to help out.

The marks on their backs were deep and bloody cuts and multiple of them.

Back to Mabel

"Ugh! I got to get out of here! I hope he didn't go and do something to them!" She said out loud. Then Gideon walked into the room.

"W-what did you do!?" She asked. He threw something at her. When she saw what was in her hands she cried immediately. It was a whip with blood on it.

"They learned their lesson, now my queen let's get you some servants." Again she cringed at being called 'queen' and the idea of servants.

The sad thing is she nodded and followed him out the door holding the bloody whip in her hand crying at the sight of it.