So I got a bitchy review. Don't worry. There is something exciting happening, and like I said, I'm stuck, so if you have any ideas please let me know!
"Good morning. Are you making breakfast?" I said to Michael. I sat down at my table while he went back to the stove.
"Yeah, it should be ready soon." Michael and I have been dating for almost a year. He likes to come to my house in the morning and make breakfast before we booth go to work. He works right down the street from me, so we just walked together.
"Ok, thank you. I am going to go take a shower." I said and got up and walked to bathroom. I closed the door, and took the clothes off, and got in the shower.
I looked at him right in the eye, "Leave Derek. I don't want to see you. You hurt me, in a way I can't even process right now. Just go and live your life and I'll live mine."
I turned around and walked out the door to find Melissa sitting on the couch. I walked to the door and opened it waiting for Derek to leave with his fiancé. He came out of the bedroom with tears in his eyes, and came up to me.
He kissed my forehead and put his mouth near my ear. "I never stopped loving you." And with that, he walked away and didn't look back.
Just thinking about that was bringing tears into my eyes. I missed him so much. But obviously he didn't want to be with me, he had a fiancé.
I got out of the shower and wiped my eyes. I walked backed to the kitchen to find Michael sitting with women.
"Who is this?" I stopped in the doorway and was glaring at her.
"Don't worry about it Chloe, just go in the bedroom." He said not meeting my gaze, just keeping his eyes on the women.
"I said who this is." I was getting aggravated, granted I hardly even liked Michael, I was just hoping I would run into Derek again.
"Chloe Saunders, I can see what Derek saw in you." The women said as she got up to walk towards me.
"Margret, I told you I won't do it, leave it at that and leave. Leave her out of this." Michael said trying to get between me and Margret. His eyes were pleading.
"You know I can't do that Michael, this has everything to do with her."
"What has everything to do with me?" I asked moving away from booth Margret and Michael so I could get a better look at them. "What are you two talking about? Why did she mention Derek? How do you know about him?" I asked Michael. I had never mentioned Derek to him.
"Michael knows a lot about Derek don't you?" She asked him. "Michael isn't who you thought he was. He's a sorcerer. And a very powerful one. He was too a part of the experiments preformed by the Edison Group, but decided to work with us to determine who should be eliminated or not."
"Michael? Is she telling the truth?" Great, now they know where I am. He nodded, not meeting my eyes. "Why?"
"It just started out like that, but then I actually started liking you, and I told them I stopped working for them because they wanted to hurt you." He said, looking at me now.
"Just get out." I said not looking at either of them, but at the door.
"Ok, whatever you want." He said walking to the door. Huh, if only Derek had been this compliant.
They left, but not soon after was there a gun shot outside my door. I ran to the window and got out the fire escape. I heard people crash into my apartment yelling after me and for more backup. But I didn't look back. I kept running, I didn't know where for sure, but I had an idea.
I ran for what seemed like forever, but was probably only like an hour. I knew he was here, and that he would help me.
I walked up to the door and knocked. I waited for a few seconds after I heard a faint "Coming!" and the door opened.
"Chloe?"
"Derek, I-I need your help."
Seriously I will take any good ideas. I am really stuck! Please review!