Hey I am sorry I haven't updated for a long time. its just that I am currently revising for my O-levels and applying to other schools. I find that I no longer have enough time to spend on nurturing my stories. It seems that I am in a sort of inspiration slump as well and so I am terminating this story. If someone wishes to adopt this plot be my guest. Send me a PM so I can read it as well.
Thank you for your heartfelt response and criticism.