Percy's POV:
When I got there I saw the Stolls and went over to go talk to them, but when I was a few feet away they flipped me off and walked away. If it was anyone else I would have been surprised but the Stolls were always doing weird stuff. So I just dismissed it and went over to my cabin. But I couldn't get in because Leo was blocking my door I asked what's up. He scoffed.`
"Like you don't know". He said with an angry look on his face. He took a hammer out of his tool belt and smashed me in the face with it. He ran off. It didn't even hurt because of my Achilles curse but I was still completely surprised.
I walked into my cabin thinking first the Stolls and now Leo. What the Hades happened in the two days that I was gone. But I would not let it ruin my good mood because that day would be the day I proposed to Annabeth.
I straitened my shirt and yelled: "Lady Athena it would be nice if you could come here"! In an instant and a flash of light Athena was in my cabin.
"What is all this yelling about"!
"Sorry lady Athena I just needed to get your attention", Was my reply.
"And why would you need to do that", she asked.
"Well I have an important question for you".
"And what would that question be", she asked.
"CanIhaveyourblessingtomarryyourdaughter", I spit out super-fast.
"Slow down boy", She shouted back.
"Can I have your blessing to marry your daughter", I said slower this time.
"Finally, I was wondering when you would ask"
"I know you don't approve but- wait did you say yes"?
"Of course I did you went above and beyond to prove yourself".
"Oh", Was my smart reply.
"Here" she said holding out a little velvet box that obviously had a ring in it.
"Thank you so much" I said as I sprinted out of the cabin.
I went to the Athena cabin and knocked on the door Malcom answered and for some reason he looked nervous. I asked what was up but he just waved it off. So I dismissed it and asked if he could tell Annabeth to meet me at the beach at seven o'clock. He said sure a little too quickly and slammed the door. On a normal day I would have thought about it more but I was too distracted with the thought of Annabeth.
I walked over to the arena to have a spar with anyone who wanted to. I went in to the sound of swords clanging and campers shouting. I asked if anyone wanted to spar and only the snotty new kid Jake wanted to. He stepped forward and pulled out his sword.
I pulled out Riptide in pen form and said "bring it on".
"This is what the hero of Olympus uses to defend himself, A pen", I smirked and said:
"The pen is mightier than the sword", I uncapped Riptide. He stared at the three foot hand and a half sword for a second before taking a wild swing at me. I easily ducked under it and hit him in the side with the flat of my blade witch sent him staggering back. I stuck my foot out and he fell flat on his back; I put the tip of my blade under his chin and said: "I win".
"Well I killed a hellhound without any training what did you do that was so great", He said.
"Well I killed a Fury and then the Minotaur with my bare hands", I said with a smirk. He scoffed,
"We all know that those are just lies to try to get yourself more popular", I stared at him surprised and said:
"Whoever told you that is a liar and an asshole and for believing that it makes you of one as well" I said as I walked over to him. I think he was about to say something back but I punched him in the temple and knocked him out. All the campers in the arena started to Yell Stuff like: "that is how you treat a new camper" or "You aren't the hero of Olympus you are a lying jerk". I walked off before I got angry and punched there temples too.
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I was in my cabin putting on my favorite sea-green shirt and trying to look good for Annabeth When my clock beeped. I looked at it 5:55, Crap I thought to myself I'm going to be late. I dashed out of the cabin grabbing the little velvet box that held the ring. I got to the beach with no time to spare but when I got there I was not alone. Jake was there to and making out with Annabeth, Passionately. My mind blanked and my vision tunneled, I let the box drop to the ground with a thud startling them out of there make-out session. I was too dumbfounded to say anything. Annabeth turned and looked at me. Her face paled and she said: "I can explain"
"Explain what", I said "was falling into Tartarus for you wasn't enough giving up immortality wasn't enough", I was shouting through my rage with tears running down my face. She looked down at the box and gasped.
"Percy I- I cut her off
"And you" I said turning to Jake who shivered under my glare "you had to come along and ruin everything for me You turn the camp against me you said something to the Stolls and Leo I'm sure and you had to take the one person I truly love away from me"!
"I told you the camp would be mine", He said with a smirk. By now there was a hurricane size five brewing over camp and picking up speed. A lot of campers came out of there cabins and looked at him. The hurricane was leveling about half the forest and the canoes were all in splinters. I reached out with my mind to find Blackjack. In about ten seconds he came swooping in asking telepathically, "Hey bass why so moody got any doughnuts" I ignored him and jumped on. "Far away, anywhere but here".
He took a running start and jumped off into the stormy sky.
And Annabeth shows her true colors The HP part will come soon.
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