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I show the initiates my fears, some of them are a little embarrassing but you know who cares. Tobias walks in the room as a girl sits into the seat. I inject the needle into her neck and she is transported. I watch as her fears play out on the screen. There was a fear of rejection. From everything faction, family, and friends. Then snakes. It was very clever what she did. She picked it up and snapped its neck in half. Tough. The 3rd fear is war. She had to fight as a sergeant in her landscape. Then she comes back to reality she looks around. I stare at the girl. Miranda was her name I believe.

"What was that?" I ask to frighten her.

"My fear landscape I think" She says nervously

"Miranda you only had three fears'' I say to her. I look into her eyes and see pure determination. Her eyes are very pretty a light blue.

Tobias stares at her in shock and disappointment . He was disappointed to see his record of 4 fears broken. He starts clapping dramatically. I roll my eyes and the girl laughs. She was the last (and best) initiate of the day. We take her out into the hall and say "Congradulate Miranda" We say and they look around like the don't know whats happening. Then Tobias says, "She has the least fears in the history of Dauntless." They all start clapping and whistling. I smile. Even I had six fears, meanwhile Tobias had 4.

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I was mad really, I really liked being the best. I'm never the best at anything. Someone always beats me. When I found out I had the Dauntless record i was so ecstatic and excited. I had finally been the best at something. Now like any others the win has been pulled out form right under my nose. "Congrats" I say in a happy voice even though I'm anything but happy. I suspect Tris knows I am a little upset. After dinner and the screaming I go to my room to relax. I hear a knock at my door

"Come in" I say quietly. It's Tris.

"Tobias are you okay?" She asks concerned, she sits down on the bed next to me. I shake my head and look at her

"Do you have any idea what it's like to have a great victory. Or be the best. Then someone comes along and ruins it and then your aren't the best anymore" I say cocking my head to look at her. She shakes her head.

"No Tobias, but I know what it feels like to be dead," She says quietly. I had almost forgotten she was dead for a minute then people came and took her body.

"Why did you come back?" I ask "You could've started a new and better life but you didn't"

She looks into my eyes and says "For you Tobias. Luke had always wanted to meet you. I wanted to see you though."

A/N THESE WILL BECOME MORE INFREQUENT BUT I WILL TRY MY BEST TO GET THEM UP EVERY 2-3 DAYS I HOPE! THANKS FOR ALL THE SUPPORT