OCs are listed here! I don't expect many reviews for this chapter because I might change it plenty times.
P.S: I'll make up personalities for them. Tell me if you don't like the way I judge your cat, and I'll kill you slow-
I'll change any info for you. No harm done! Unless you hold a grudge.
P.P.S: Dew Eagle is now three (3) moons old.
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Splashing Pebble
Dew Eagle's slightly younger sister, the last of the litter. She, along with Silver Shadow, hopes to be a Hunter one day. This dark brown she-cat's front left paw is white, and her eyes are forest green.
Silver Shadow
Dew Eagle's slightly older brother, the first of the litter. He, along with Splashing Pebble, hopes to be a Hunter one day. This medium-gray tom's eyes are dark green, and his hind right paw is black.
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Soaring Dove (Previously Soaring Eagle)
Dew Eagle's second best friend is a four (4) -moon-old she-cat who will become a Hunter when older. This white she-cat is sassy, but she's loyal to the bone and can get a great running start if hunting an eagle. She'll also turn out to be quite pretty. She has light amber eyes, much like Dew Eagle's.
Another brother & sister who will probably not make a big appearance. I might give them names, but that's about it.
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Silent Eagle
This black tom's underbelly is white, and his cheek's got an average-length scar from a short fall off a ledge onto a sharp rock. He will not talk about this. His eyes are bright blue. Nobody really knows his history, but he stumbled into the cave one day, ragged and barely alive. He doesn't speak to anyone unless he absolutely has to, but deep down, this Hunter is very kind and humorous. Well... He has been eyeing a few she-cats recently...
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INCOMING PROPHECY-CHOSEN CAT
Quick Beetle
This nearly-four-moon-old tom is a mottled brown and black future Hunter. He is always telling jokes and making up stories, and he is very understanding. He also takes it upon himself to protect the other kits. His major flaws are that he is naive and can be too trusting of other cats, despite that he is actually quite smart. His paws, tail-tip, ears, and muzzle are all white. His left eye is dark green, and his right is a dark amber. He's best friends with Hare Bound, and he's developed a liking for Curled Fern. His littermates are Rolling Storm and Yellow Flower, which are both brown, but Rolling Storm has green eyes, and Yellow Flower's are amber.
Rolling Storm and Yellow Flower are guards, although Yellow Flower is one of the few she-cat guards. Quick Beetle is much like Dew Eagle- he doesn't like the cold weather, so he's one of the cats on the journey. Even the Tribe of Stars approved of him, for he's in the prophecy.
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Red Sparrow
This strong, dark-gray tom's eyes are dark amber. His best friend is Blue Sky, and perhaps he likes her a bit, too. This twenty-seven (27) moon old Guard would make a great mate, because he's compassionate and very protective. Perhaps this helps him protect his Tribe as well. Red Sparrow's father's name is unknown, but this loner killed Shining Water- Red Sparrow's mother- when Red Sparrow was just eight (8) moons old. In rage, Red Sparrow killed his father, and later befriended Blue Sky after helping her from bullies. He currently still looks out for her, but he trusts she can stand up for herself now.
Blue Sky
Blue Sky is another friend of Dew Eagle's. She's blue-gray, though her tail-tip is a bit pale, and her eyes are hazel. This twenty-three (23) moon old Hunter is attracted to Fallen Stone, who shall soon be described. Red Sparrow is Blue Sky's best friend. She's forever thankful for him protecting her from bullies on that fateful day! Blue Sky has one sister named Sly. Blue Sky was born a kittypet near the base of the mountain in the nearest twoleg nest. After the twolegs abandoned the two (Blue Sky and Sly), Sun Shadow, who became their foster-father, took them into the tribe. Later, Sun Shadow died of greencough when the two were fourteen (14) moons old. Both sisters had been bullied, but Blue Sky was less fierce and therefore was easier to bully. Blue Sky was devastated when Sly left, and out of affection, still refers to her by her tribe name (Rushing River).
Fallen Stone
This strong black tom is one of Dew Eagle's cousins. Fallen Stone has broad shoulders and a fluffy tail, and his eyes are dark blue. This twenty-four (24) moon old Guard takes things literally, as he is caring and mature. Blue Sky is his closest friend- and recently, he's been feeling like she's more than a friend. Nothing exciting has happened in Fallen Stone's life- the most he got was a collection of scratches from Sly as he tried to get her to return to the Tribe. Also, he has a deep voice. Sometimes she-cats who don't even like him will just stare and listen to him speak.
Sly
This twenty-three (23) moon old former Hunter is just an acquaintance of Dew Eagle's. She was sure that she was second-best of Blue Sky, so she left the Icy Paths to who knows where? Sly looks exactly like Blue Sky, except her tail-tip matches the rest of her fur, and her eyes are dark amber. She had a crush on Red Sparrow, but her feelings only grew when she left him and the others behind. Sly used to be a Guard, which was an assigned rank because she proved to be fierce, bold, and independent. In truth, Sly is sensitive, but she covers it up with toughness. To this day, Sly truly believes the Tribe of Icy Paths is better without her.
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Darkened Dreams
This pitch black she-cats glowing amber eyes have a red tint to them: something many cats wince at when first meeting her. She has no mate, no crush, and nobody she really sticks close to. Her one sister, Dream, died of a dog attack. The story is: Darkened Dreams, at birth, was named Nightmare. A dog came and attacked the home her family had lived in when she was three moons old. The first victim was Dream. After a few minutes of fighting, Nightmare clung onto life by a whisker. As she struggled, her parents came and fought the dog. Soon after its death, Nightmare discovered her parents were losing lots of blood. They died moments later- a true Guard's death! This is why Darkened Dreams wishes to be a Guard when she's older. After the deaths, Nightmare scavenged around for food. After a snowstorm, she spotted a giant exposed cave on the mountaintop, slightly to the side. She determinedly climbed the mountain, and here she is now. She was renamed Darkened Dreams. She's a close friend to Dew Eagle, but they don't hang out often because of all his friends.
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Frost Bite
Icy white ten-moon-old Hunter tom with a grey tail and black eyes. He likes Splashing Pebble's personality (this can grow into a crush), and he is friends with Silver Shadow. Dark is his dead younger brother.
His family (his father and little brother Dark) had been barely surviving; they've been weakened by hunger and running away from rats they encountered earlier. When they finally reach the cat family, the rats killed Frost bite's father and injured Frost Bite himself. Dark and Frost Bite barely escaped and Frost Bite lead them forward, certain that something good will come. But Dark, after the coldness and hunger takes him, dies. Frost Bite feels like his heart is physically broken after losing his family, but somehow he still lives. He made it to the cave, starving and barely alive. He's Dew Eagle's friend but never really opens up to him about things.
Thank you so much for the OCs! I'll need possibly two more cats.
Well, stay tuned. Please send OCs :)
P.S: If you submit an OC after two have already been confirmed, you won't be in the story! Maybe in the allegiances. Sounds good? Okay... Please don't hurt me!
Story Content
Dew Eagle's pale gray ear twitched as he heard birds chirping. When did he ever hear the joyful sounds of birds on a beautiful morning? He opened his eyes from his relaxing slumber, and saw he was one of the few cats left in the large nursery. He decided that the birds he had heard were only part of a hopeless dream, a wish to get away from the odd-like Tribe.
I wonder why I hate this place so much? I was born here. Dew Eagle shook his head in disappointment at himself. He slowly got up, padding out into the main cave, his paws tap-tap-tapping on the bright tan rock. He looked straight ahead in shock to find cats sitting below the Star Ledge, a flat-topped ledge for Star Messenger to announce current events on. The pale-gray tom was sitting up there now, his bandaged tail wrapped neatly around his paws, his angry voice shouting to the gathered cats.
What's happening?
"I'm telling you all, there are three kits on this journey, and you're not stopping me or the Tribe of Stars from finishing their task! The Tribe Law says to obey Prophecies at all costs!"
"This is unacceptable!" Cats were shouting harshly at the annoyed-looking tom.
"Kits aren't capable of making a journey that far!"
"Stop it at once!"
His forepaw on the left side- a black paw- raised and slammed on the ancient stone. Somehow, an ear-splitting sound shook the cave. Dew Eagle thought it would cave in. "EVERYBODY SHUT UP!" The raging tom roared. "IT IS NOT IN YOUR PLACE TO DEFY ME! THE PROPHECY SAYS THE KITS WILL BE GOING, AND THAT IS FINAL!"
Cats hissed, their neck fur bristling, as they stared with hatred at Star Messenger.
It's not like him to scream at us. They must have really riled him bad. What's all this prophecy nonsense?
Finally, a cat noticed him. Sweet Rain hurriedly padded over to him. "Oh, my baby!" She wailed and curled herself around her kit. Dew Eagle thought she was trying more to comfort herself than him.
"Sweet Rain!" Dew Eagle hissed with an annoyed tone. "What prophecy?"
Star Messenger stood up. His tail fluffed out behind him, his dark amber eyes blazed, and his mouth opened to recite the ancient words, anticipated for many generations...
Aaand, cliffhanger. Double cookies to apologize, but I can't reveal the prophecy until the story is out.
Was that enough detail!? Oh dear Starclan, it wasn't, was it!? UGH I'm not in the groove of detail anymore! *smacks head* Come on, brain! Get motivation!
Sigh.
