AN: So I am so happy with the buzz I got for this. Literally in the first 5 minutes I got over 50 views and my first review! Now that first really actually made me stall on the Idea of this story a little bit since it was "This story is plain trash." No I hardly ever let things bother me but having that as your first review really does something. I was like well shit, well fuck you too! It temporarily brought down my self-esteem a little bit which I'm fine now and it pissed me off a little what makes it worse is it was a guest so its not like I could reply. But it was a good thing that my other reviews were pretty much positive even if they weren't all that descriptive for some of them. Like two of the reviews were "Nice" and "Yes"… thanks guys but that doesn't really tell me anything. I also got some of my friends to read this and I read this as well. So I notice that there were some spelling errors. So of the grammar mistakes were done on purpose some on accident If someone wants to Pm me to be my beta feel free to.
So yes I am one of those people that read to date with the manga so there will be some spoilers so fair warning. That being said I find this kinda funny. I was gonna have a poll because I know a lot of people don't like hinata so I was gonna have a poll. It was a poll on whether to have hinata in the harem with her being similar to the hinata in Uzu Hurricane, or have Kaguya instead and I would just figure out how to bring here back. Well it looks like Kishi came through for me so I decided to have Kaguya and Hinata both in the harem with maybe some connections between them. And also she is apparently way stronger than the Juubi and Madara and is eternal!? Oh yea Denizen Naruto will definitely have to go all out especially if it turns out that she has fighting ability to back up her uber godlike power. Also Juubi will be tweaked, this story will likely have character death, and Kaguya and Madara will both be on the battle field at the same time! Also thanks to a certain someone there is a possibility of Nami being in the harem, but if she is she will be reborn differently.
Anyway on with the Show!
"Okay" – regular speech
"YAHHH BITCH" – unnecessary yelling
Blackout – Technique, power, etc.
"Did you just say no to me?" - Power added to voice, demons, gods, supernatural beings, when using dominance
*Cough*or *FLASHBACK* - actions or scene changes
"Fatality" – Feedback Cybernetic, or double-layered voices.
'My butt itches' - thoughts
Chapter 2: Who and What are We?!
"Hey. Hey! Wake up!" This came from the dark figure who was kicking his new guest, i.e. Naruto.
The unstable blonde groggily woke up. Once he did his body quickly tensed from where it was on the ground in case there was a threat. Once he to note of who was next to him he felt calm and so his body relaxed which was something he couldn't understand since he never saw this person before in his life. "Who are you and where am I?" was the question that came from the multicolored blonde.
"Ahh finally you're awake. I picked you up from that dark alley after you passed out. Good work with those villagers by the way. After all I'm sure they deserved it when you take in to account the requirement for the awakening of our powers. Any as for the answer to your questions, I will answer them in the reverse order. Where we are is my own personal realm that technically doesn't exist to mortals and is unreachable by most beings. I was the first to really capture this realm as my own and therefore its ruler… that's not saying much since not many people come here that often anymore after the event so more often than not I treat it as a playground so things can be pretty hectic as you can see.
Naruto took this moment to look around and scan the area. True enough it was a strange plays. He was lying on surprisingly soft, brown grass that was on top of dark earth. It was mostly a plain for miles with random landmarks. There were randomly spaced out fissures in the ground, some erupting with powerful streams of lava that shot straight up into the sky and kept going. Some of these magma geysers were also accompanied by trails of white and purple light swirling around them. Also the sky looked to be an inverted version of a normal one with black clouds. Of in the distance there looked to be a giant ship stuck halfway in the ground at an angle which he made a note of for later. There were random masses of floating land as well, many of them upside down which didn't seem to bother the trees growing on them… which were on fire yet not burning.
And in the center of the sky was a massive circle platform with the images of various beings on it, with the icon of the figure next to him being the biggest and in the center. The platform was also slowly flipping in the air showing that the other side was completely black with a giant red symbol on it. The symbol was a stylized 'Z' with a dash though the middle and 2 glowing yellow rings around it tracing the edges of the platform.
This was a lot of strange things for Naruto to take in and he would have explored the place if he didn't need this figure to answer his other question.
"I have tossed around many names for this place some being cliché but right now I'm fond of the name InVerse," said the dark figure as he continued.
"InVerse?"
"Yes InVerse, a clever name if I do say so. You see this world, realm, or dimension, or whatever you want to call it is connected to everything. Every world, every place, and yet unreachable by normal beings. Which is where we come in –. "
"What do you mean 'we'?"
"I'm getting there, hold on," as the figure wave of the question, Naruto was starting to get alittle impatient.
"Anyway so picture everything like." A large sphere appeared in the figures hand with many dots all grouped together in different sections. "Picture this as the Omniverse, a collection of different multiverses being the groups. The dots in the groups represent the different worlds, dimensions and universes that match each multiverse. There are even different worlds for Hell and the Underworld which are not always the same, though Heaven seems to be a lot more consistent. Anyway, so you see the sphere, now what if you opened this sphere?" The figure did so revealing a dark void inside the hollow sphere. "This is the InVerse! It is literally a dimension inside reality! A realm that can only be reached by a special type of soul, and then it is connected to the powerful wills and imaginations of these souls which are linked to me which is why I have named the concept the 'Tethered Will of Z!'" the figure pause as applause was heard in the background from nowhere, which caused Naruto to look around to find the source of it. When the clapping stopped he continued.
"Now I believe it is time I introduced myself! I have been know as many things and have gone by many titles over the centuries. The Destroyer, the Creator, The All-Bringer, Arsonist, the Creeper I don't like that one to much, the Infinite Immortal, The Rage Beast, Ultimate Chimera, The Sentinel, the Artist, and many others. But you will know me as the strongest of the Denizen, the Sire of the Z Clan Line, and the completion and anchor of your soul! I am ZRAIARZ!" As the figure threw back the cloak revealing his appearance as rainbow lightning flashed in the background as the end of the speech blew the standing Naruto's hair back.
To Be Continued…
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Psyche Bitch! (AN: I actually felt this would be a place to stop but I had planned on this being out last week which it wasn't so I well give you more!)
The figure was standing at a solid 6 feet tall and had a perfectly sculpted toned yet streamlined frame. He was dark-skinned with tiger-like stripes on his face and arms it least where it was visible, as his forearms and hands where covered in a type of vambrace armor/ fingerless glove hybrid that was a metallic black and went to his elbows before a semi-loose long-sleeved black hoodie materialized on his frame covering the rest his arms.
His appearance screamed power as his feral violet eyes stared at Naruto with contemplating mirth, already thinking about what he had to work with. His hair was unique as well. His hair was thicker than Naruto but was in dreaded spikes that were somehow still similar to Naruto's in shape. It was cut low and black on the sides but on the top where the spikes were a similar length to Naruto's. The spikes were brown while transitioning to a flame color at the tips. The spikes were also a little longer on the left side and so where able to droop a little. His ears weren't visible as they were covered with headphones that vaguely resembled cone-shaped tesla coils. In fact there were even small arcs of lightning going along them. Under the open hoodie he wore a tight black shirt that had the same stylized Z as the floating platform in red. He was wearing baggy violet pants that sagged a little but hugged at his ankles. Lastly at his feet he work bright white ninja tabi socks, and that was it. His arms were crossed over his chest as he continued to look at Naruto, a smirk still present with his large fangs.
"Your name is Zraiarz?" Naruto asked with a raised eyebrow after he had taken in his appearance.
"Yep, spelled with all caps!"
"Why!"
"Cuz when you get to my level one cap just isn't enough."
"O-Okay well what happened and what exactly is a Denizen and what did you mean by completion of my soul?"
"Well after you went all berserk on those villagers it severely damaged your body. I mean even by Denizen standards. Your body was strong enough to match how shattered your soul had become and your emotional instability should have been more controlled. Your appearance proves that." Zraiarz materialized a life-sized mirror in front of Naruto so he could take in his appearance. "See your body while kinda cool in places actually looks like your genetics were confused. You see a long time ago when the population of Denizens was becoming scarce and bored so I broke my soul and separated it into many random sized pieces leaving only 25% for myself. Now I wasn't exactly at full power at this moment and was more truly suicidal than usual so I didn't really care so while the fragments of my soul were spread out amongst the Omniverse I went into crystal catalysts type of healing for around 2000 years. Because of how strong your soul already was on top of the big piece of my soul you already got it caused a fusion between us and the power was too great for your body to take. Now Denizens are beings who have affinities for many things and can do almost anything. There are few of us left with me being the strongest. In fact the only on stronger than me is the Elder god or the Biblical God since I may be a much better fighter but with his all power he can eraser me. It would take most of his Godly power but he could probably still do it. So since you got a large fragment of the most powerful Denizen it was really too much for you. I'm gonna have to heal you body soon and you are gonna have to go into a healing process for a few years, It to a week just to heal you enough to last for this conversation" as Zraiarz pointed to Naruto's body his, arms were already starting to degenerate into shadowy wisps.
"After that I will train you here in my arts, the arts of Denizens, and maybe get you another partner?" said Zraiarz as he finished his piece.
"What do you mean other partner?"
"You'll find out when you are older! Now I a Denizen comes with its own burdens but is really your only choice at life." Then Zraiarz's gaze turned serious as he stared at Naruto which startled him a little.
"So I must ask of you this. Do you wish to die or do you want to SURVIVE?"
*End*
An: And done. I procrastinated a little with this. But I was able to do this all in one sitting of 2 hours so expect more soon. The next chapter will be most of his way though academy maybe even graduation. I will put a poll up on what type of partner do you want Naruto to have which will likely be female on top of him already having Kyuubi. I didn't proofread this much so sorry as I read my first chapter and I saw errors. I don't have time to edit but I might do it tomorrow. Review as I need those and pm me if you have any Ideas or Questions.