Sooo. Shit happened. I took longer with this chapter than I wanted. Sorry I'm lazy. If I got more reviews it would convince me to work faster. So in the manga Sasuke apparently approves of Revolution. So that means we must all buy the game! And Naruto is tired of Sasuke's shit. Did Naruto finally grow some balls? Here's hoping! I watched Angel Beats. Its one of the few anime I actually watched from start to finish lately. That show is funny and violent. I could very easily put Naruto in that story. Now the ending was kinda heartfelt but also messed up. And the entire anime left me unsatisfied. Like part of the reason I kept watching the anime was because I was waiting for something to happen that never did.
Also last Night I started watching Hamatora. All I can say is NICE FTW! He is awesome. He is like one of my personalities. He is easy going and laidback and makes stupid choices. But he is actually the best genius they ever had. He dresses cool and it is actually very similar to what I like to where. He wears headphones so you know shits real. And he can move at the speed of sound. And his body is strong enough to take it! You guys should watch it. I mark this as kinda a point between No Game No Life and Black Bullet? or something.
Here is a new thing im doing! Review response!
TheInnerBeast
I want to see the rest of the lemon and again I love the insanity. And tell me if I got this wrong but Denizens are true gamers with a glitched character. They handicap themselves to have a sense of challenge.
"You are completely right about that part of a Denizen even though I made it up. I may do the rest of the lemon in a Omake if enough people complain."
ultimecosmos
dud please i don't won't to flame but
FOR FUCKING SEEKKKKKKEEEEEE ARE YOU GOUD iN YOUR MIND HIS VIOLATED THEN HE FUCK HIS MATE THEN EVRYTING IS GOOD I KNOW THAT NARUTO IS IDIOT BUT THIS I KNOW WHO TRY TO SCUICED BECAUSE OF THIS AND YOU TELL THAT WHAT MATE OR LOVER SHOULD DO ARE YOU INSANE
"Now my response to this was basically... So. Don't care what happened to other people. But we resolved the issue."
and finally
thor94 chapter 12 . Sep 9
really good lemon, especially with jibril as dominant and when she fuck naruto ass with a proble.
Hope naruto will have more submissive sex, it's fun (next naruto is tied by powerful spell, the girls use a pump to milk and collect tons of naruto cum and probe his ass and mouth)
"Umm wow that was actually kinda uncomfortable to read. But... If you guys like that then I will need ALOT of reviews stating that and I will do it in the future. Just because it makes me feel weird doesnt mean i cant pull it off easily."
O-O-O-On with the SHHHOOOOWWWWWWWW!
"Okay" – regular speech
"YAHHH BITCH" – unnecessary yelling
Blackout – Technique, power, etc.
"Did you just say no to me?" - Power added to voice, demons, gods, supernatural beings, when using dominance
*Cough*or *FLASHBACK* - actions or scene changes
"Fatality" – Feedback Cybernetic, or double-layered voices.
'Reality Level 40%' – Thoughts of the imaginary AI voice or internal HUD Display
'My butt itches' - thoughts
Chapter 13: What it Takes
It had been 3 days since Naruto and Jibril graduated from the academy. After there...adult activities Naruto had passed out for over 24 hours so that his body could recover. He made a note to not do that again. It wasn't worth it. Yes you heard right. The backlash from using unstable abilities to go worlds beyond marathon sex was not worth it. Jibril had waken up a few hours before Naruto and had prepared him food for when he woke up. She wasn't off the hook though as Naruto had tied 100 pound weights to her wings. She looked constipated as she was forced to go about the next few days like that. Though she still looked carefree in a way since Naruto wanted to hear her displeasure. Sadism aside that was something he had come to expect to not come from Jibril. Though the punishment wasn't easy for her. It didnt help that she couldn't use her powers to help, couldn't phase though walls, couldn't fly, and her legs were weak. Plus her delicates were numb and she her butt hurt from the previous night.
Kukamu was another case. Since he accidentally put her in a death state she slept longer. She actually didnt wake until almost there days. To which Naruto met her sitting across from the bed over a chair and staring at her in a way that made her shy. Kukamu had actually been awake for half an hour so she just laid there with her eyes closed. She collected her thoughts as she remembered what happened the night before. Once she recalled every time she grew uneasy when she felt Naruto near her. Alert and staring.
Her animal parts drooped to make her look small as she met his half lidded unemotional gaze.
"Are, are you mad at me?" She looked like a scolded child in a way, and Naruto thought it was cute but kept his lazy poker face, but his presence was projected and heavy. He responded in an unexpectedly calm voice.
"What makes you say that?"
"Because of what Jibril ended up doing to you."
"No I'm not mad over that."
"Yes you are you're mad at me."
"No I'm not mad..." The unnerving calmness that Naruto was emitting made her feel, well unnerved.
"Th-then why do you keep talking like that!" Her eyes started to tear up which made Naruto laugh and stop messing with her.
He sat onto the bed and pulled her into a hug.
"Okay Okay I'll be nice. Oya, you act like I'm gonna do something."
"Aren't you?"
"I don't think I really need to. I mean you do know you died right?" Naruto looked down at her wondering how she would take that part.
"I figured that out but I didn't feel that and I would have came back anyway?"
'What the hell?' Naruto sweatdropped a little.
"Well that's one way to look at it... But I not going to painfully kill you if that's what you were expecting. I don't care if you would just come back if I did it a normal way. It's too steep a punishment. I may be one of the biggest sadist on the planet, but I don't want to hurt you like that."
Kukamu calmed at this. She let go of the breath she didn't know she was holding. Sure she had been with Naruto on a personal level for a few years now but she was still learning about his habits. She couldn't predict his actions all the time because he was quite possibly the 1# most unpredictable ninja. But she had learned that while Naruto is unpredictable, cunning, insane, intelligent, unstable, sadomasochistic, purposely arrogant, chaotic, and a few steps away from being a rapist... where was she going with this... Oh yeah. Those were just different sides of him as he can also be caring, understanding, considerate. What he just set on himself was a restriction against fatal harm on her. And a restriction from a Denizen was basically the equivalent of a promise from her. Though a Denizen can break their restrictions, it holds more weight than a promise from a supernatural being. Because it will limit everything a Denizen does subconsciously to work around that restriction.
Normally during one of these moments between them she would expect him to say something stupid to lighten the mood and counter what he just said.
"But all other forms of pain is free game." And there it was. Well a little pain could be good. Masochism and all.
"And I will still hold this over you." She blinked. What now?
"I thought you said that you wasn't mad. I already apologized!"
"I'm not mad. But you seem to keep forgetting..." Kukamu waited for the next part nervously.
"I'm a sadist." She didn't know how she forgot about that when she made her plan nights before. A rain cloud formed over her head as she started to whimper.
"Aww it's alright. I promise I'll make you enjoy it almost as much as I will." Naruto's laugh was full of mirth. Kukamu didn't like that restriction, and she couldn't tell if he was serious about it or not.
"If it makes you feel better I will give you 10 points for your underhanded plan." Her ears just twitched at this.
"So what now its 29 to 158?"
"More like to 300!"
"What since when was your score that high!?"
"Well I think killing a girl with sex is probably worth the most points."
"But that's not fair!"
"Life isn't fair!"
"Asshole..."
"Don't talk about my asshole. He's still hurting." Kukamu went red at the stupidity of the moment.
"Don't personify your body parts!"
"Fine now I'll stop."
"Finally, I was getting tired of you acting all butt hurt over this." Word play sting! Kukamu heard the crackle of lightning and paled.
"Okay I'll be good!" The crackle went away
"Word play is my thing. Though I will give you that one since it was good. Now if you're done lets go eat." He got up and started walking towards the door. He heard whimpering behind him and signed exasperatedly. He looked back at her laying on her side.
"What is it now. What's wrong with you." She sniffed before answering.
"I...I can't feel my legs." Naruto blinked at this. He saw the blush of embarrassment on her face and figured out what was wrong. He started chuckling before that evolved to full-blown crazy laughter.
"HAHAHAHAHA!"
"Don't laugh at me!"
He kept laughing. To further her expense he turned into a wolf and started rolling on the floor laughing.
"Stop it!" She yelled but he ignored it. Jibril came in giggle. But she had to drag her feet as the floor creaked with each step from her weighted wings. The both laughed at her before Naruto suddenly stopped and his tail lashed out at the floor under Jibril. The ground gave way and she fell though the several floors to the bottom. She groaned in pain and Naruto started laughing at her as he turned back to 'normal'.
"Now neither of you can walk. Now..." He walked over and scooped up Kukamu bridal style getting a yelp of surprise out of her.
"I'll just had to feed you like a baby." He carried her down to the food.
"I-I can still feed myself." It was going to be a humbling experience for her.
"I don't care..."
*1 hour later after eating*
Naruto and Jibril with her features hidden, and Kukamu in her fox kit form arrived at the Academy for team placement.
Laid on top of his hat since she still had trouble walking. He walked in with an aura of superiority with Jibril loyally in tow behind him. Girls blushed in the classroom as it was clear that Naruto's new look from the previous day was a welcomed change and he clearly could back it up. The guys in the class looked at him in attention. As if the were on fight or flight mode. He smirked before going to the back of the class with Jibril again. When he past by Sasuke their eyes met and the Uchiha looked away bashfully. Naruto mentally shivered. Something about that didn't feel right and he wasn't entirely sure it wasn't his fault. It was like they were in prison and he had made him his new bitch and ... STOP. No Naruto was not gonna think any farther on that subject of dangerous territory. No that was going in the vault.
When Iruka arrived, class started and Naruto didn't pay attention to most of what he said. He just started daydreaming about the different ways he could use his powers. He's headphones playing some random music. Jibril was more obvious of her lack of attention. She flat out fell asleep sitting up. A bubble coming from her nose and cute little snores. A tick mark formed when he saw them. He went demon head mode and yelled at them.
"WAKE UP!"
Jibril kept sleeping but Naruto, though he didn't physically show it, was jolted out of his daze. He's slit violet eyes slowly locked with Iruka's making him sweat. Naruto wasn't too fond of unneccesarily loud noises. Naruto looked over at Jibril and spoke 3 simple words in a normal.
"Stop ignoring him." Just like that Jibril woke up but pout
"Awww..." Iruka felt a headache forming. He need to hurry up and get this over with.
"Ok team placements are..." Most were not important.
"Team 7 will be Uchiha Sasuke, Haruno Sakura, and from another class Sai. Your sensei will be the Copy Nin Kakashi Hatake." That name once caught his attention as a crazy grin appeared on his face. But it disappeared quickly before anyone compromising could notice. Sakura felt to need to screech out her approval that made everyone hold there ears. It hit our favorite trio the hardest. Naruto appeared crouched on the desk she was at and grabbed the back of her head before slamming her forehead into the desk with such force that it cracked the wood. Sakura was out like a light. The class welcomed welcomed the silence with both shock and awe. Iruka cough into his hand.
"Ah thank you Naruto- I mean that was unneccesary." He tried to cover up.
"Your thanks is unnecessary, I would have done it anyway because it was the right thing to do." Jibril and Kukamu stifled giggles. Naruto said it with so much conviction that only they knew how much he was trolling everyone.
"I'm...I'm not sure how to respond to that. Team 8 will be Hyuuga Hinata, Inuzuka Kiba, and Aburame Shino. Your Sensei will be the Ice Queen herself. The Genjutsu Mistress Kurenai Yuhi" Kiba whooped out at having Hinata on his team. Hinata had no visual reaction. She just look to Naruto and recieved an unnoticed nod. As if telling her to just let things play out.
"Team 9 is still in rotation. Team 10 will be Nara Shikamaru, Akamichi Choji, and Yamanaka Ino. You will be led by former guardian ninja and the Sandaime's sun Sarutobi Asuma." Ino groaned at her placement, yadda yadda yadda unimportant whining.
Kiba realizing that a certain someone was called decided to boast.
"Haha so the loser doesn't even get a sensei to teach him! I knew his talent was a joke." Naruto for some reason decided to respond with quite possibly one of the oddest and most inappropriate comebacks ever. And he said it with his usual bored tone and expression."
"Kiba I will fuck your mom in front of you." Yet it was effective.
"What?! Why you asshole! Don't-." Iruka was getting a headache and cut Kiba off.
"Enough! Naruto that was uncalled for." Naruto just looked confused as everyone looked at him.
"What I was just being honest." Naruto's eyes widened as he started talking in a crazy tone yet had an owl like expression on his face. His head slowly tilted to the side as he spoke to Iruka.
"I'm going to fuck his dear mommy. There is no stopping it, it's gonna happen. Head down ass up as I plow her. And she's gonna like it. Oh she will... And if Kiba gets in the way, I will make him watch."
"You BASTARD!" Kiba couldn't even stand up completely before his head was grabbed and slammed into the table just like Sakura.
Iruka was bewildered. 'The balls on this kid! What's wrong with him! It's highly likely that Inuzuka-sama will hear of this as well." Naruto looked at Iruka insanely making him flinch as if he was next.
"Don't you have an explanation to finish Iruka. I'm getting pent up in this crowd and it would be better for you if you sped up!"
Iruka had to get the hell out of here.
"R-right! Naruto and Jibril are basically freelance Shinobi under the Hokage. Because they are X-Genin they outrank all of you and can join any of your missions as back up. They can also recieve obligated training from any Joinin in the village. The smaller details are not important right now. Naruto and Jibril you will also be tested by Hatake-san on your capability. Good Luck everyone and Good Bye!" He shunshined out of there quickly and all was silent. As they were still thinking about what Naruto said with various reactions. The room became tense when Naruto began to chuckle insanely before he randomly shunshined out followed by his fox and Jibril.
Naruto was walking through the woods aimlessly he felt Jibril arrive near him and Kukamu appeared in her human form as well.
"You know very little you say is starting to convince me that you aren't secretly a rapist."
Naruto scoffed. "You say it like you actually care what I do to the human race."
"No I don't really care. You never really did it to me so its not my concern."
Naruto grinned at her making her nervous. "Oh...didn't I? You see Kukamu, in order for it to be rape in my book one of to things must be met. Its not rape if they like it. So if they don't that means I'm not trying hard enough."
Okay that was a rapist response and Kukamu was fairly certain he was only like half serious about that one.
"And two, rape is also sexually taking someone against their will. But for you Kamu-chan~ I'm not taking anything." He cupped her chin and pulled her close until their faces were inches apart.
She could feel his hot breath as he spoke in one of his most dominating tones ever.
"Because you were mine to begin with!" She blushed furiously as Naruto grinned at her reaction. He was looking down on her like she was her prey that he could pounce at anytime. She felt her core heating up as she meekly responded in a small voice, her body shaking lightly.
"Pl-please not again already."
Naruto rose an eyebrow and tilted his had at the response.
"Again what?" Her blush deepened as she tried to look away. "I-I'm still sore."
Naruto stared before spoke mirthfully. "Wow I can't look at you like this without you expecting sex. I didn't think you were so needy." He walked off chuckling and waited for her reaction.
Kukamu stood there shocked before she bared her fangs and her gold eyes turned crimson.
*CRCKCRCK* "What the-" He turned around and started to sweat. 'Okay maybe I messed with her too much.'
Kukamu's face was shadowed with red orbs shining through. Above her head she was holding a large tree.
"You think this is funny?"
"Ka-Kamu-chan calm down."
"We'll see how you like it."
Naruto started running while dodging tree trunks thrown and smashed down on him. Sure he could take it but that didn't mean he wanted too. Kukamu was fairly sure he was just playing around but the comment irritated her. Partially because there was some truth to it."
Jibril skipped after them giggling into her hand. But Kukamu aparently heard her as next thing she new she was smacked aside by wood and impacted front first into a nearby tree. She moaned from it.
"Don't add to it!" She shouted at Jibril before she started hunting Naruto again. She hunted him for about half an hour before they finally stopped and she blew off her steam. Though Naruto made her feel better by promising to cook her rabbit related. She tried to act like that wasn't going to fix anything but the drool didn't help so she just saved face and went back into fox form and pouted. To which Jibril picked up and nuzzled into her breasts so she could sleep. Kukamu usually slept alot anyway.
*3 Hours later at the training grounds*
Kakashi Hatake was standing over his new genin that he just passed. All 3 of them were tied to a stump. He brandished a kunai and swiveled around when he felt a presense.
"So Kakashi, are you ready for the test?" Naruto grinned showing his fangs. Kakashi flinched as he had gained PTSD from a certain event years ago and now he was looking at the source of it.
"Hehehehehe..."
*End*
*Sneak Peak of Next Chapter*
Kakashis hand was bloody and going through Naruto's body. There was no trick to it, he actually got him. "I commend you fox on reinventing my first technique but its still not strong enough to counter mines. I've upgraded my over the years to where I renamed it Raikiri."
Naruto was laying back limply on the arm as dark red blood pooled.
"*Cough* So It wasn't strong enough?" He grabbed onto Kakashi's hand and squeezed. He brought his head forward and locked eyes with the startled Kakashi. Insanity was clearly rooted in his eyes.
"HAHAHAHA THEN I JUST HAVE TO MAKE IT STRONGER!"
*End*
AN: Don't hate me guys! I felt like that was a good cliffhanger. So next is the fight. You get to see how Naruto fights "Normal People". It won't be so cut and dry as he is restricted remember so until its the right time to cut lose he will keep a lot of his power back and work on just becoming a better fighter. Though he is strong and Kakashi will realize that to a certain extent.
See that little sneak peak hehehe
The New poll is up so read that it has multiple parts to it that will probablem have the final impact on my next story before I start it. I get my drive back when I right fight scenes so don't worry guys. I also reviewing can help me go faster as I really don't want to take more than 7 or so days between chapters. So guys REVIEW and the guests out there PLEASE MAKE AN ACCOUNT because some of you actually figured things out no one else didn't and I would like to respond to everyone who reviews.
Also new poll is my biggest. It looks like Naruto will be transmigrant of his past self. Though his past self I have decided to be similar to the Naruto in this story. So you may see connections and you will see craziness. Because the other 2 top choices were so close for a while I have warmed to have those as well. So in this story Naruto is the descendents of Youkai God. He will have 2 younger twin sisters who are also descendants. They will eventually also have powers like the Warbeasts from NGNL.