OK 5TH ChAPTER!!!

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OK...WHAT THE HELL!!! i got 3 in an hour from the chapter finally being out...and they already guess the freaking guy out of the rift XD

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Chigatana: OH COME ON!!! XD Thx for the complimenting of the story. and no worries to all you auron fans he'll have a big role coming in later. as for the guess chigatana,...XD OMG UR SHARP!!

Katatsubasa-no-Tenshi : XD yeh i know! it's funny how that works out huh? and omg how come everyone got that!!! XD i thought the mask and only one eye would be too little to figure it out!!!

OK TIME FOR CHAPTER 5!! STARTO!!!

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The man got up and popped his stiff bones to soften them. "Oh god that hurt." He looked up to a surprised group. More surprised was the Blonde kid with whisker marks and the pale girl with white eyes. Instantly his one eye snapped wide. "NARUTO!! HINATA!!" He said loudly.

They were shocked by who it was. a headband over his eye, a jounin vest, white hair going up in a slight wave, and a mask covering most of his face. Hinata and naruto both shouted in unison. "KAKASHI!?!"

The group looked at the three. "You know this guy?" Wakka curious as ever, and clueless as ever. Naruto and hinata nodded. Kakashi, drained from the trip, fainted and fell on the ground.

Naruto and hinata sighed before picking him up and carrying him. "You coming or what?" Hinata smiled. "We'll explain on the way." Auron was curious about kakashi. "Why does he hide his face? More importantly, why does he cover one of his eyes?"

They were walking down the trail with a unconsious kakashi being carried by naruto. "So, who is that guy?" naruto smiled nervously. "He's my teacher. He taught me everything i know today. Especially chidori since he created the technique." Lulu smiled. glad there was another person to teach her.

"No way Lulu, he's a lazy teacher. He may be my teacher but it took till a year ago just for me to understand everything he said. Besides he may have alot of questions. Might as well tell him his answers at the next rest stop." They agreed to that. Naruto saw big yellow birds with people on them riding them.

"What are those things?" Wakka explained it to him. "Their Chocobo, they are our way of faster transportation or carrying things from one place to another. They also have a way with giving us power by turning wheels for power." Naruto smiled.

"So they are the best animals for things we cannot normally do. Sounds like their important for this place huh? I'm guessing from how these people are soldiers they are also used for battles?" Wakka nodded. things were getting more intresting to naruto.

They reach a rest stop and get a few rooms. Naruto asking to stay with kakashi, Hinata right with him. After thirty minutes kakashi finally wakes up. Naruto gave his fox grin. "How you doing kakashi?" Kakashi smiled under his mask and sat up, still drained form the dimensional travel.

"Just fine naruto. How about you? I would have thought you didn't make it traveling through that thing." He rubbed his head. "It gave me one hell of a headache." Naruto and hinata laughed at that.

"So kakashi, do you have any questions about this dimension?" Kakashi laughed again. "It would help me keep a low profile." It took a full 10 minutes before they got done explaining.

Kakashi laughed nervously. "To think this dimension would be so similair yet so different." Before kakashi could ask another question someone suddenly yelled from outside. "HELP!! A FIEND IS EATING ALL THE CHOCOBO!!!"

The group ran outside in time to see a huge monster eating a chocobo. Hinata could hardly stomach the act she saw. "EWW!" They got ready to fight it off.

Hinata walked in front. "Please, let me deal with this monster. It isn't going to be easy for me to beat him without using every bit of strength i have..." The monster was already charging, Already about to kill the group. In one swift strike Hinata used her chakra for her super strength punches. Stirking the beast hard enough to push him back.

"...But i will not let my friends or my love be hurt by this monster! I grew my entire life as a weak little girl...With naruto i grew stronger with love. I WANT TO PROTECT OUR BONDS!" The group was shocked at those words, but naruto was not. he shed but a tear at her love for him and her friends, her will to protect...

Hinata stood for herself and her friends so they may stay strong and true...Wakka was not one for this reason. "Hinata, think about this!" Hinata smiled at him and nodded. "I already have." Yuna smiled and nodded for hinata to go fight alone.

Hinata gathered every ounce of chakra she could into her fists and feet, ready to kill this monster and show how strong she has become over the years. She Sprinted at the creature who had just gotten back on it's feet, her limbs ablaze the moment she started her run.

In one strike she released every ounce of chakra in her one fist, setting the monster ablaze itself, before kicking it through the chest. The monster turned into the rainbow balls of light floating in the sky as it let the souls of the dead rest in peace at last. She smiled at her accomplishment, She wasn't the weak little girl from the Hyuuga clan, NO, she was a storng women that Naruto deemed worthy enough to slip into his heart unlike anyone before.

Her last thoughts as she fainted flat onto the gorund were so simple even a baby could tell it was her only thought. "I proved my love for you, Naruto..." The group smiled at her peaceful sleeping form, smiling as if it were no tomorrow.

They all rested well that night. The next morning they were all up and ready to set off. Kakashi and auron stayed in the back, Auron waiting to be called on, and kakashi waiting for the next rest stop to get some answers to his questions. Auron had a few of his own though.

He leaned looked at kakashi. "Why do you cover up your eye?" Kakashi looked at auron lazily. "Oh this?" He laid a hand on his headband covering his eye. "It's just a wound. And it brings back painful memories of those i have lost." Kakashi reveled in his memories.

Auron knew how it felt. His own scarred eye was a reminder of his mistake. "Same here. I lost some of my best friends...And this Scar over my own eye, is a reminder of my mistakes. I will correct as many of those mistakes as i possibly can before i die. Leave with no regrets."

Kakashi smiled, finally finding someone who knew how it felt. Auron still was persistant. "Althought you never answered my question. Why cover it up?" Kakashi sighed.

"It's not just a reminder. It's a part of my most cherished friend of all. He gave me his own eye so i could see again... I don't want to use his eye unless i really need to." Auron got his answer and he was satisfied. Kakashi was saddened from his memory rush.

They decided to keep quiet for the rest of the trip. Naruto, hinata, lulu decided to talk about techniques. "Lulu, Every technique has it's elemental effinity, sometimes it has none. The thing you have to know is how much chakra you need to use it and how good your chakra control IS." Naruto tried to explain best he could.

Lulu was listening to him for pointers. "I've got down compining the energies and producing chakra. If i keep doing that i'll have more correct?" Naruto nodded. "So all i need is chakra control and i'll be fine. Any training i might need?"

Naruto knew the perfect training. "It's simple. Two excersies are perfect for it. Tree climbing and Water walking. The first step is tree climbing. You focus chakra into your feet and try to stick to the tree. Too much and you blast right off, too little and you slip. The thing is to have just enough for as long as possible. The longer you stick the better your control is." Lulu nodded. Sounded simple enough, but knew the act was less then pleasant.

Tidus was just thinking about everything auron said, what he thought now about what the truth was or wasn't. He tried to figure it all out as best he could. Wakka was ready for another temple to just rest easy and help Yuna finish her journey as a summoner.

Kimahri was listening in on Naruto to see if he could get any pointers himself. He wanted to protect yuna as best he could and any training he could get to learn the moves naruto did.

Yuna was walking ahead of the group. Thinking about what exactly is in store for them. They finally reached the end of the trail, going straight for the Djose pass. They saw around them chocobo, caged animals, and lastly the Crusaders. They heard Donna yelling at a guard for the pass.

"WHAT!? What do you MEAN we can't come through! I am a summoner! I am on my journey to defeat Sin!!!" The guard was unphased.

He spoke. "I am sorry, but the crusaders are in control of this pass for the time being. You may continue after the preparations and the end of this is over. We are sorry for the inconveniance." That ticked Donna off.

"FINE! BARTHERO! we're going..." With that said Donna passed Yuna and her group as if they were not there. They went forth a bit and stopped.

Yuna was confused. "I wonder what's going on? surely they would let summoners past to complete their journey. I wonder why they won't..." She gasped, seeing the creatures in cages slowly going into the pass, they were FIENDS! "What's going on?"

Maester Seymor came up. "Lady Yuna, what a surprise. May i ask what the matter is?" Yuna turned. "Lord Seymor, Why are they taking Fiends into the pass?" Seymor walked up. "The Crusaders are trying to defeat sin. Using the sin spawn as bait, they shall draw it out, and are prepared to use everything they have in order to kill it."

Wakka was cunfused as can be. "But lord seymor you must see that the only ones capable of killing sin are summoners! PLEASE stop this campain!" Seymor chuckled a bit.

"Are their goals much different from yours? would you try your hardest to defeat sin even against all odds?" Wakka was speechless, almost. "But lord seymor!" Seymor started going into the pass.

"WE will see if they can or not. It isn't as if we should stop them from trying. We should see if they can or not before giving in to the only way we know how to stop Sin. Am i right?" Wakka was trying to stammer out a respond but couldn't

Yuna looked at him as he went into the pass. "Lord seymor, may we come with you? i mustn't stop my journey as a summoner just in case they fail. Also i wish to see how they will bring down Sin." Seymor looked back. "Very well. LET THEM PASS!" as soon as that was said they let them all pass by.

What they saw they wouldn't beleive was being used as their weapon against Sin...

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CLIFF HANGER JUTSU!!!!

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NEXT CHAPTER!! THE FIGHT WITH SIN AND THE AL-BHED! ENTER RIKKU!!!

Naruto: THAT THINGS AS BIG AS KYUUBI!!!!

Hinata: I hope this works...

Auron: Only a summoner can beat Sin...why must this go on with delay?

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