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Chigatana: XD nice...anyways yeh i'm glad you liked it. Hope you continue reading!!! oh and btw XD kakashi and auron are gonna have a huge part to play here. so keep a watch on that mouth of yours for kakashi. he might come at you.

(Kakashi somewhere on stage): NO FOUL MOUTHIN ME!! I"LL SHOW YOU!!! (XD)

Katasubasa-no-tenshi: I am REALLy glad your staying with this story. every chapter you have something to say with nice long reviews. THX A BUNCH!!! If you got any friends who might like this type of story then get them to read and review..it'll make the updates faster and longer.

tecaman: JIN!!! XD oi vey i was gonna do that at the end,. i want to follow the game as much as possible with a few twists before getting to the end.

Shikamaru Slacker: XD uhhh thx? and this story isn't about the game only you know. it's about how naruto hinata and kakashi fare in the land of spira. if you read there are some game lines but not ALL of them are game lines. That's as good as it;s gonna get. sry, hope you stay with this story till the end

S-Wanderer: The ninja idea thing you'll see in this chapter does not matter XD. if they don't want to know then why should there be a breifing. and how does kakashi do it? the mangekyou sharingan XD. if you haven't read yet, that's how naruto and hinata get there too. as for why, duh he's there team mate and he was not about to lose more. (read kakashi gaiden manga) the blitzball thing is a no. Naruto would be able to with the spiritual energy of chakra. (think about it XD) and yeh kakashi wants to learn the skills of the FF world along with Lulu wanting to learn naruto moves. (kimahri and wakka want to learn too) Thx for the ideas! i hope you stay for the story!!

CatWomen4Ever: heh thanks alot. Yeh i do 24 hour updates. the chapters may not be as long as book chapters but they should be good enough. they will get longer and faster with reviews and ideas. and thx. I tried to get everyones personality as good as i could along with some emotions rolling off the story. i want to try to make others fell the emotions. HOPE YOU FOLLOW THE STORY TO THE END!!!

Now that was alot of reviews all of a sudden O.o...THX ALL!!

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The group slowly but surely made it to the front where they could overlook the battle. What they saw when they got there they would never beleive. Wakka was furious at the crusaders madness, at seymor's patience with what was being done. "HOW COULD YOU ALLOW THIS! LORD SEYMOR!"

Seymor was looking over everything. "They are doing what they can..." Wakka didn't want that kind of response.

Wakka would get the answers of this madness even if it killed him. "WHY ARE THE AL-BHED AND CRUSADERS WORKING TOGETHER!? MACHINA ARE FOBIDDEN BY YEVON HIMSELF!!!" Wakka was furious beyond words.

Seymor chuckled. "My what a temper. The al-bhed and the crusaders are working together because they and we have the same goal...To defeat Sin. The least we can do is let them try. If we don't give them the chance maybe we'll never find a way to defeat sin then to sacrifice a summoner. The al-bhed wish to be rid of sin just as much as we do." Wakka was still furious.

"BUT LORD SEYMOR!" Naruto put a hand on his shoulder. "There ain't nothin we can do now. Just wait and see." Wakka grumbled as he walked away in defeat. Auron decided to speak. "Only summoners can defeat sin. That's what i learned on my journey with lord braska."

They all waited for the battle to begin. The air was silent, the weather was cloudy, the bait was in place as the al-bhed and the crusaders got ready with final preparations. Everything was in place and ready, ready to battle Sin. There was a slight rumbling in the air as a shadow loomed in the water.

Naruto saw just how big Sin was. "IT'S BIGGER THEN KYUUBI!!!" The group looked at him curiously.

Everyone knew what it was. "SIN!!!" Everything was ready and going according to the plan. Sin rose out of the water in a cloak of some sort, but no one cared if it was a sheild or not, they fired upon sin. All the cannons fired and hit the sheild as Sin spawn tore from his body and went straight for the crusaders waiting on the shore.

The battle has begun, and all the weapons used, all the lives that are on the line, they tried their best to defaeat sin...to no avail. Nothing was able to penetrate his sheild. He let it down only to put another one around him. One more weapon prepared to fire, as it did it's power was able to weaken and almost break sin's sheild...Before sin attacked it and destroyed the weapon.

Nothing that was thrown at Sin was ever enough to beat it. Suddenly the captrued sinspawn grouped together and combined into one big monster. The monster appeared where the group was on the cliff. "Uh-oh..." Tidus was a little intimidated by it. Auron and Kakashi walked up to battle him alone.

Naruto smiled. "Let's see how kakashi serves in this world. And i AM curious to aurons abilities as well." Auron grabbed his huge katana and got in position, kakashi grabbing a kunai and getting ready. With a nod at eachother they charged at the creature. Auron slashed through the sheild the monster had on his arms in one shot, ready to kill the head on the creatures body.

Kakashi charged up a chidori, but suddenly pulled his hands appart and had two chidori's ready to strike. "RAIKIRI!!!" He yelled as he hit one chidori into the head at the top, before striking the other under it's chin going stright up through the head. Auron already Blew a flame onto his sword and slashed right through the head in the creatures body. Causing the creature to fall and die.

They smiled at their accomplishment, exchanging hi five's. "Nice work, maybe you can teach me that lightning move sometime." Kakashi smiled under his mask. "And maybe you can teach me that fire technique." They were already best of friends in that moment.

The battle with Sin raged until he let loose a blast of white. Everyone disappearing in the light in seconds. Only people left were the group on the hill watching. A roar came from behind the group, suddenly they turned, seeing the same creature they defeated only moments ago.

It was stronger then before, and bigger. Auron and kakashi both stepped up. "Guess it's time we use stronger techniques huh?" Kakashi chuckled. "I guess so. Although i already used one of my most powerful techniques." Auron smiled. "So did i. Guess we up the anty." They noded before charging again.

They were thrown back a bit as the beast protected itself. They had an idea. Kakashi sharged the biggest chidori he could in both his hands and combined them, he charged and jumped at auron with his feet out as if he were going to kick him. Auron using the back of his sword swung it as hard as he could at kakashi.

As soon as kakashi's feet hit the sword he quickly jumped from it as it pushed him to the sin spawn. The chidori growing more. "DIE!!!" As if the creature agreed to, kakashi drove through the sheild and the body of the spawn, killing it for good this time. They gave eachother yet another hi-five at the teamwork.

Everyone wondered how they beat the creature so easy. It would have taken naruto one maybe even two tails to beat that thing. After the battle was over, most were dead, little were wounded, and quite a few were traumatized for a long time. Yuna did the sending on the beach as everyone who lived got ready to move on.

After much distress the maester moved on through the pass, The group got ready to head for the Djose temple. Auron and kakashi were talking on Teamwork and how to do the techniques they used. Tidus who swam out to sea returned to see yuna's dance. Sad she had to send again.

The group got ready to leave. Lulu smiling at naruto. "I've got a lot of chakra, and i can climb a tree for ten hours." Naruto smiled his fox smile. "Good work. Next is water walking. What you do is push yourself above the water with chakra, but it isn't only pushing yourself to balance, it's also how good you can control the chakra and how constant you can let it out. Try it next time we reach a body of water." Lulu nodded.

Lulu walked with yuna in the front and looked down sadly. "Yuna, are you in love?" yuna blushed and stammered out a response. "I-i-i don't really..i mean..." Lulu smiled. "Is it tidus?" Yuna blushed more and nodded. Lulu wanted to help Yuna receive love before the end.

Lulu would never love again though. Even if her heart wanted her to. She looked back into the group, Looking at the blond in the group she loved. "We both have a thing for blondes with wild hair i guess." Yuna giggled. "Might as well go for him huh? We both need love."

Naruto and Hinata were holding eachother walking in the group. "You know hinata, we need to find out a way back home." Hinata snuggled her head in his chest. "No" Was her simple answer.

She thought this world would be better for them both. No wars between contries or cities, now fighting except to save the world, eevrything was better here then in their own world. Her own father and her sister hated and disowned her as family, and Neji had hated her since he was in the branch family.

The only ones who liked her were her former teammates Kiba and shino who died in a mission when they were Chuunin, and Naruto kakashi and Tsunade. Tsunade would do without them and could do great things, and kakashi had followed them here. They could start a new life and be accepted by all.

Hinata sighed. "We stay because of all the bad that happened in the past and all we could have here." Naruto smiled at his girlfriend. He knew how bad it was for her in her own home. It only got worse when her teammates died. He wouldn't force her into anything if she didn't want to.

He kissed her forehead. "Ok, we'll stay." Kakashi who was behind them was smiling. They were cute together. Auron smirked under his mask. "Guess love is in the air for those two." Kakashi looked at auron.

"Yeah. Before they got here in this world, they were boyfriend and girlfriend. Every off chance they get to relax they make sure to spend it together and love one another. Sweet if you ask me." Kakashi was laughing at the memory of him accidently coming in on them making out. Naruto almost killed him for that one.

Tidus was trying to get kimahri to talk more and smile more. No such luck on the smiling but kimahri was good enough to talk to. Tidus wouldn't give up on him though. If it was the last thing he'd do. (Tidus reading the story: HELL NO I WON'T!!...me: o.o)

Naruto decided to talk to Kyuubi the rest of the way. "Hey you fox, what's going on? Your silent. It's creepy." Kyuubi laughed inside his head. "Kit, you have NO clue what i've been up to. I've used my chakra so i could sense things from outside your body. Your about to have one HELL of a life here. Since my power is concentrated inside you, making jinchuriki who hold a biju stronger then the biju itself when they grow older and can maintain control of the final transformations, i have to know just as much if not more then you so you have a way to expect things when they come." Naruto summarized everything the fox said.

The fox basically said 'Your almost as strong as me to surpass my own strength, but without me telling you this or that your too dense to see it.' Which kinda ticked naruto off a bit. "Point? Stupid fox?" Kyuubi smirked

He laughed a bit. "To the point? Sure. Remember when i said Sin was just as powerful as I am?" Naruto nodded to the fox. "Well since your gonna be stronger then i am you can beat him when you gain control of all my power. But not only that i wanted to say..."

The fox smriked wider as he smelt someone turn to him in some way. "Your about to have a really bad time with your girlfriend and someone else." Naruto sweat dropped. Two girls would love him for him and he only needed one...Hinata Hyuuga.

Kyuubi fell fond of the boy by the time he reached Jounin. Naruto wasn't in his own mind yet, so it was safe for Kyuubi to reveal his true form. Red flaming hair, a slim body shape, his own whisker marks upon slitted red eyes. The only thing defining about him to change Naruto's respect for him that he feared would happen...He...Was a SHE!

With a read flowing kimono and her nine tails swirling about. She looked like a demon goddess. She grew fond of naruto, and even fell in love with him. She wouldn't say so though. She didn't want to part him and hinata, or ruin him for life. She would do anything for him, even let him be happy with another.

She returned to her normal fox form. "Hey, kit. I was wondering why you haven't wanted to know HOW i know of this dimention." Naruto smiled. "No need. Your a demon fox simple as that. You have the power to go to other dimensions if you need to."

Kyuubi was taken back from that. He was SHARP! "Ok kit, your scaring me with this sharpness your suddenly showing!" Naruto chuckled. "You wanted me to be since you thought i was so dense. I should be thanking you for helping me realize that and become less dense."

Kyuubi smiled. "No problem kit, just don't let your guard down." Naruto nodded to the fox. They suddenly came upon a fork in the road. "Where we heading?"

Wakka smiled. "Easy. We head for the temple before continuing to the moonflow. Yuna has to pray to the fayth at the temple." They all nodded. They went to the temple and went in. They found three people there. "Ahhh, Lady Yuna!" The robed man said.

"What a pleasant surprise. How are you? I hope you haven't been hurt from the crusaders raid on sin." Yuna did the prayer as did the man. "We are fine, thank you for the concern."

The guardians were the other two. Waiting to be on their way. "We must be leaving Lady Yuna. I hope you a safe journey." They all did the prayer and left. The group went furthur into the temple and waited on Yuna to finish her prayers. Suddenly Donna came in.

"Ah i see they let you pass. Must be a perk for being with Yuna. Anyway, call her out. I need to pray to the fayth as well." Donna was the same bitchy woman she was from the kilika temple. Naruto would have none of it. "Lady Donna, quit badgering. If your a summoner just for glory then you can stuff it. Yuna is doing this for spira not herself, so bug off."

Donna chuckled udner her breath and smirked. "Barthero, show this boy his place." He wasn't listening, but rather worshipping Auron. "Seem's to me your not in any place to tell me what to do. Besides if i could i'd take down sin alone. That isn't pride, that's truth..." He let off enough killer intent in only that room that it scared Auron into peeing his pants is he didn't hold it.

Donna and barthero were running out of the temple. "Think they got any say over us just cause she thinks she's better. Pitiful." Kakashi chuckled. He knew Naruto's killer intent very well. He had to get used to it so he wasn't scared off by it.

Yuna came out to Wakka, Tidus, Kimahri, and Auron asking him about the energy he let out. He was nervous to answer. "Guys, it's not that simple. It's like using your energy to project the anger you keep inside yourself to scare the enemy. It takes years to master how to use it."

Yuna smiled. Naruto had captured everyones eye. "Shall we head out now?" Everyone agreed on heading to the moonflow quickly. As they got their Naruto, Tidus, Hinata, and Kakashi were amazed at it's beauty. Naruto smiled at hinata. They both thought they should come back here for a romantic evening.

As Tidus, Lulu, and Yuna talked about the moonflow. Naruto decided to go into his mind. He found the Kyuubi, and he was sobbing. "HEY! what's wrong? Did the moonflow make you sad? I thought we got through the trust barrier here." Naruto was now thinking on what could make the great Kyuubi cry.

"No, kit. You wouldn't want to know. Sorry if i'm like this, it's just painful for me is all... Don't worry about me i'll be fine. Just talk with me more and life live kit. Live life." Naruto sighed. "Ok Kyuubi. You know i trust you. i just hope you trust me enough in time to tell me what's the matter. ok?"

Kyuubi nodded. "I'll try to later. On my word." Naruto smiled. Kyuubi always kept his word. Naruto returned to reality after waving kyuubi goodbye. He saw the big elephant thing standing in front of him. Tidus beat him to it. "WHAT THE-!"

Auron chuckled. "Your father jecht, the first time he saw one he attacked it thinking it was a fiend." Naruto put the peices together, an animal with a carriage, and a river with no land to cross it. "We, are going to ride this thing, across the moonflow?" Wakka, Auron and Yuna nodded.

Naruto sighed. "Guess we have no choice." They got ready and waited for the shoopuff to get ready. Once it was ready they got on and were crossing. Naruto smiled. "SO if i remember, wakka, Machina are forbidden. Why?" Wakka sighed.

"Yevon sends Sin to punish us. for our misdirection. Machina that are used as weapons are forbidden. Machina like what we use for blitzball are not. And until people like the al-bhed stop then Sin will keep attacking us for our crimes." Naruto could see how that worked.

Kyuubi laughed her ass off. "STUPID SHIT HAHAHAHAHAH!!!! SIN WON'T STOP!! He'll keep coming so there will be BALANCE!!! HAHAHAHAH!!!" Naruto laughed a little. "If that's so why does Sin attack all, not JUST the al-bhed? and is there a reason why the al-bhed keep using machina even though sin attacks still?"

Before wakka could say a thing al-bhed came from nowhere and took Yuna underwater. Tidus, Wakka, and Naruto dived in. There was a machina holding Yuna. "Ok, so i guess this is tidus' battle. He needs to show his love for yuna." He watched as Tidus slashed and dashed at the machine, Every single shot the robot did Naruto destroyed the attack. Soon tidus destoryed the machina and took Yuna from the machine.

They returned to the shoopuff. Auron concerned for her. "Are you ok lady Yuna?" She nodded. "I'm fine, thanks to tidus." They looked at him as he slumped in his seat exaughsted. Wakka congratuated him on his fighting. Kimahri said a single thanks and Lulu huffed out a nice work.

They crossed in no time. Tidus went ahead to check for fiends. He saw a girl on the shore. "Hey, are you ok?" The girl slowly got up and took off her red uniform to reveal her street clothes. a pair of short shorts and a tight shirt. Tidus was in shock at this. In one word he said this girls name.

"RIKKU!!!"

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CLIFFY!!!! SRY XD!!! at least it was longer and more defined yes? READ AND REVIEW!!!!

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NEXT CHAPTER! SEYMORS REQUEST!!! Yuna finds the answer!!!

Naruto: This is going to give me a really rough time Sweatdrops

Hinata: thinks if only he knew...

Rikku: What's with the faces?

NEXT CHAPTER IS A POLL!!!

SHOULD I OR SHOULD I NOT!!!

Have FEMKyuubi in as a part of naruto's harem (as you may have figured form the chapter theres another girl who will love him)

YES!-0

NO!!!-0

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