UPDATE FROM YOURS TRULY!!! well as you can see i was right, i am back, again soprry for the delay last time i really did have a computer problem, the virus took out the entire system. anyways, here's the 12th chapter. this ones gonna be a doozy and a hella long too.
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The Group crossed a bit of the calm lands, looking for the path to get out of it. Soon they were met by a huge monster. "God will they ever STOP!?!?!?!" Naruot took out his new sword and slashed it outwards, hitting the monster but it only scratched.
Tidus came in and slashed a few tentecles off the large multiple eyed monstrosity. Hinata used a flame kick to burn off all the eyes, while kakashi and auron charged a super chidori. Naruto slashed at the monster like his sword was a wipe. "GO DOWN ALREADY!!!" Auron and kakashi ran towards the monster.
As the chidori hit the monster, hinata sliced through the top of it with her firey limb. The monster soon died off. Naruto was frustrated. "We've been battling monsters, going through the world, finding thing we never saw before, and after all we've been through we still have to suffer? What hates us so?"
Wakka sighed. "It's yevon ya? we've commited treason and all. we have to defeat sin, either that or we're fugitives." Naruto sighed as well. "No choice huh? let's go then." They once again left for the path out, once they found it though a few troops and a big machine were in the way.
Naruto was too dumbstruck to move. Tidus and rikku handled the men, Rikku knew the weakness of machina. "Use lightning, it will do the trick." Auron and kakashi charged a double chidori and hit the machina full on, fist-to-fist. The chidori won and the machina malfunctioned.
They made their way down, though it seemed to confuse naruto. "This is where the lair of yojimbo is. We see him first, before moving up the mountain." Naruto nodded.
They entered the cave, but not one fiend appeared. They soon made it to the end, and yuna and the gang went to the chamber which held yojimbo. They got ready for the fayth to appear.
When he did, he looked at everyone. "My name is yojimbo, what brings you here?" Yuna bowed. "We would like your services." Yojimbo rubbed his chin as he looked at naruto hinata and kakashi. "My services aren't cheap, what do you have of value to pursuade me?"
Kakashi smiled under his mask. "I have a one of a kind novel if you wish to look and see if it's worth enough." Naruto groaned inwardly. Yojimbo thought a minute. "One of a kind...How so?" Kakashi got it out of his pouch and walked to yojimbo.
"This book is not of this world. it's the only book of it's kind in spira." He held it to yojimbo and the samurai opened it up. A minute later and yojimbo closed the book. "Deal. You have my services for as long as you will have me." He disappeared. naruto was dumbstruck yet again.
"Kakashi, you gave him...a perverted book? i can't beleive he actually took it." Kakashi smiled. "Ninja or samurai not one soul is innocent enough to resist that book. only you sem to not like it." Naruto nodded. "Whatever you say." They headed out of the cave and went up the pass.
When they reached the top they were met by a thousand blue haired muscular tiger headed beasts. Ronso. "Lady Yuna, it is not well for you to be here. Ronso territory and peak of yevon not welcome to traitors." Naruto stood up to the elder ronso.
"We aren't traitors, we just didn't get enough time to pray is all. Now let us through." The elder growled and roared in naruto's face, but naruto didn't flinch. The ronso respect those who deserve it, but this human in their eyes seemed stupid.
"You must have no brain. Why you stand up to ronso? Ronso stronger then puny human." Naruto chuckled. "I beat giant monsters, i beat immortals, and i kill off real traitors, and you think i'm stupid and weak?" Naruto chuckled more.
Kakashi knew what was coming. "That will scare these guys off good." Naruto released a killer intent not of the world. The ronso ran off with their tails between their legs. "I ain't weak...DON'T UNDER ESTIMATE ME!!!" Naruto and the group walked up the pass a bit and into the cliffs leading to zanarkand. Who knew naruto could be so scary?
Once they got into the pass, they sat down for a break. Lulu decided to break the ice with kakashi. "Hey kakashi?" Kakashi piped up. "Yes lulu?"
Lulu sighed and sat next to kakashi. "You've shown great skills over these few days, and your a magnifficant person. I just thought maybe we could talk more?" kakashi chuckled a bit. He was no idiot, and he always wanted someone who understodd him.
"Do you like me?...Lulu?" She blushed and nodded. "If you'll have me." kakashi sighed. he always got the shy ones. "I need someone who will understand me..." Lulu moved closer. "If you gave me a chance i'll try my hardest to understand you. I promise." Kakashi smiled a bit as he looked up.
"I lost so many people who i cared for. I don't want that to happen again, so i cut myself from bonds to ever be made." Lulu was sad she was going to be rejected. Naruto smiled as he over heard. "kakashi, go get her tiger" kakashi smiled as he looked towards Lulu.
"But here i beleive...i can make a fresh start. One that i can make a new life with bonds. So we will give it a shot, Lulu." Lulu was at the verge of tears at what he said. Naruto broke it up, clearing his throat. "you two done here? we gotta get going now." They nodded and decided to wait till later to talk about it furthur.
The group made it out of the pass and to the last bit of cliff out of there. Luck was not on their side it seemed. Suddenly Seymor was blocking their path once more. "Does this guy EVER go down!?!?" Seymor looked behind him and at the group. "Ahhhh, it seems i was lucky to find you here." As the group was readying for battle, the ronso came in.
The elder smiled. "Lady Yuna, we see now it was out mistake to judge you. Let us fight this traitor, you go ahead, receive the last aeon, and defeat Sin." Yuna looked ready to say no, But the ronso smiled at her reassuringly. "We are proud and noble race lady yuna. We not smart, we no not all human speech, but we do fight for pride and rightness. GO!" Yuna nodded and the group ran as the ronso battled seymor.
Hinata looked back as seymor slaughtered them. "Those poor ronso...Kimahri, live on for your race." Kimahri nodded as they made it to the outskirts to zanarkand.
When they reached the end of the trail, they saw a wall with people trapped in it, using energy to cover the wall. Tidus touched it and was out like a light. Yuna caught him and begged and pleaded for him to wake up. Naruto knew hew as only having a vision. or seeing his inner self maybe.
After a good 10 minutes tidus woke up. Yuna was laying kisses on him faster then you can say "Cake" Everyone laughed at that. After the charade was done with, they moved on. In front of them was a huge cave. Naruto slumped. "Not more monsters or traps..." THey went in, and found two paths.
They both went underwater. Naruto and hinata took one path and soon a staircase came into veiw. Tidus rikku and wakka went the other and after naruto and hinata came back, a staircase blocked the water patha nd went up to another. Naruto, hinata, yuna, and auron went up the path that was shown while rikku, wakka, tidus, lulu, and kakashi went the staircase. After both parties finished the puzzles a new path was shwon.
THey went back and went up the path. They walked out of the tunnel and out into the open. A huge monster suddenly drops in front of them. Naruto sighed. "At least there were none back in the tunnel." He took out his sword and after activating 4 tails, killed it in one shot, but multiple whip like strikes.
The group went up a bit, and over the cliff was a ruined city. Auron sighed a bit. "Zanarkand." Tidus looked down. Yuna hugged and kissed him before telling them to move on. Tidus was far behind, so naruto went back to see him holding a sphere. "Hey, the groups going without you. hurry up!"
Tidus went along with them finally. After walking a ways, the sun was setting. They rested and set up camp. Tidus looked at the city before coming back to the group. "Listen to my story...i have something to say."
After two hours of his adventures, they finally began to walk to the ruined stadium. When they walked it, they saw spirit flies like the ones from the farplane. "Here, there are memories from all who have come here, all who have died fighting sin. This is where the final aeon is." Auron sounded serious and sad. After alot of memories, sadness, happiness, and feelings unknown, they finally made it to the trials.
After awhile they got the puzzle just right, and were then suddenly transported to a few plateforms. A huge monster appeared once more. "Ok, Hinata?" Hinata nodded and punched the creature hard, auron and kakashi charged chidoris whole naruto got his 6th tail ready.
Naruto attacked and almost defeated the creature with a few slashes, but what finished it was tidus's blade concentrated with four mega chidori's. The monster was gone in a flash. They were then teleported to a room where a beautiful women was. Auron knew who she was. "Lady yunalesca."
The woman turned around. "I see you don't die easy, auron. And whom might you all be?" Yuna stepped forward. "My name is yuna, i am a summoner from the isle of besaid. I have come to the end of my journey." Yunalesca smiled. "Lady Yuna, i will have to explain. You see, the stone in which the fayth lives is no longer active. It needs a new soul in order to be powered, and it needs one everytime the final aeon is used. Jecht, a man of great quality, was chosen as the fayth for the final aeon, and both have died."
Naruto put the peices together. "SO one of us has to give up our lives so we kill Yuna, just to make sin disappear for 10 years only?" Tidus got the picture. "NEVER!!!!" Suddenly a memory showed. Auron when he was younger, running to yunalesca, but being killed. Naruto went eight tails and in a flash cut her in half.
Although she was right back together and she grew into a monster. "Damn it all." Naruto took his sword and slashed her to peices, but she returned and grew more into a monster. Naruto used every bit of power he had at eight tails and tore her to peices. "WE WON'T LET THE CYCLE CONTINUE!!!!"
After a long silence, the place started to collapse. Naruto summoned kyuubi and with her help, they got out in time.
Sin was outside, waiting, but knew the final aeon would never come. He turned and left. Soon the airship came and picked everyone up. Yuna met cid and everyone thought how to beat sin. They went to bevelle. There the high maester waited.
"AH, Lady Yuna, i am to suspect you have completed your journey?" Yuna noded. "Then call out the final aeon and defeat sin!" Yuna sighed. "I have completed my journey, but lady yunalesca is no more. we will not let the cycle continue any furthur. summoners risk their lives for only ten years of peace. we will break that chain and kill sin a different way."
The maester as panicing. "No! Not possible!!! YOU HAVE DOOMED US ALL!!!" He faded away. Yuna and the gang went to the temple and there they faw the fayth.
"I see you've come back." yuna nodded. "Do you know how to defeat sin for good? and let us all rest in peace?" TIdus talked up. "The hymn. it stops when it hears the hymn." The fayth nodded. "Yes but the hymn will only do so much. how will you kill it for good?" naruto popped his stiff bones out and back into place.
"Well with my power i am able to kill sin. all i need to do is control it." The fayth nodded. "The kyuubi was a grand demon. i see she will be the one to kill sin for good." After they talked it over they got back to the airship and formed a plan. Kakashi walked to auron. "You never told me you were dead but stil amongst the living."
Auron looked down. "I made a promise and that is what keeps me in the living." Kakashi smiled a bit. "Then make me a promise. Promise you'll live and be my friend until i die myself. then we shall find peace in the farplane." Auron and kakashi hit forearms and nodded. "PROMISE!"
Naruto was in his mind. "Kyuubi, i'm going to need the 9th tail." She nodded. "It will only do you so much good, naruto. I will give you the minimum of the ninth tail in power and use the rest of my power to keep you sane. I'll need a chakra system to stay alive though." Naruto nodded.
"I'll give you a little of mine, enough to stay alive." They kissed eachother for the first time. "Time to do this. give it to me!" The Kyuubi transfered her power right to naruto, he soon grew orange with white tiped fox ears, and nine fox tails. He gave her a small bit of his own normal chakra.
Naruto was still trying to control the tails. After about ten minutes he finally did. He went to a tree, and saw the seal. "And with this...Kyuubi...I SET YOU FREE!!!!" He pulled the seal. His mindscape was suddenly gone, he was in a white space as kyuubi stood in front of him, fading away.
She was crying. She was smiling..."Naruto...Thank you for everything. You've been nice to me even when i've been mean to you. You've been forgiving and caring even after my insults. You never disrespected me even because of my gender. Your the only man to ever be this good to me. Even if i have to share you with that cute white eyed girl, i'll stay with you. I'll meet you outside!" She was gone.
Naruto was glad. he had done it. He finally freed kyuubi from her prison and had the power to protect everyone he ever cared for. He went back to his real body.
An alarm was blaring in his ears, his body wrapped to tightly to move even a single finger. his shoulders and chest was wet and warm. he was shaking, but it wasn't he who was shaking himself. He opened his eyes.
The alarm blaring was the ship under attack, the tightness around his body were kyuubi and hinata, the wetness were their tears. and his shaking was due to their sobs.
As soon as the alarm turned off, naruto smiled and spoke. "It's kind of nice to be all warm and snuggled by my two favorite women, but i'm kind of sad your crying when their isn't much to cry over." They raised their heads and stopped sobbing, but even more tears were going down their cheeks as they smiled.
They let him move his arms as he hugged them both close. After a few minutes passed cid stood in front of them. "Um, yeah. you do realize we're under attack right? We're trying to kill sin! What's going on? why aren't you helping?" Naruto sighed.
He got up and kissed both women he loved. "I'll be back later. You just stay here." He walked out of the piloting part of the ship. "Enough stalling. after this is over with then it'll be a-ok." He went out of the ship, everyone noticed his fox features.
He concentrated and soon his chakra rose to unimaginable proportions. "I'm ready." They nodded and ran back into the ship. "SIN!!!! YOU SHALL BE NO MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He grew in size, his chakra rising more. He spit fireballs at sin, destroying his arms.
Tidus and the gang jumped onto naruto's back, before jumping to sin's head. They took out the last peice of armor. As soon as Sin was done with, he opened his mouth wide and sucked in everyone, the ship and naruto. They were inside sin.
Naruto tried to concentrate his energy to grow once more but found he couldn't. "Damn..." He and the group jumped off the ship and into the one inch deep water. Hinata and Kyuubi came out of the ship as well. Naruto gone and hugged them both.
He sighed as he kissed each of them. "Hinata, come with me. Your as strong as any one of us." Kyuubi hugged hinata then naruto. "You two make it back safe and sound. I don't want to lose you two now that i'm finally free and able to be with the ones i love and the ones who love me."
Naruto and hinata nodded before kissing kyuubi's cheeks. The group rushed deeper inside sin.
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CHAPTER 12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINISHED!!!!!
Phew i never thought finishing a story would be such hard work!!! next chapter will be the end. then after that chapter will be the epilouge, the story of what happened after the end. I HOPE YOU LIKED!!!! READ AND REVIEW!!!
My resident evil 4 story is coming along, i have the first chapter done already but i want to finish this story before doing the resident evil 4 naruto crossover. i wanted to end this story here on this chapter but if i stall any longer and write anymore then the epilouge won't come.
I HOPE YOU LIKED AND READ TO THE END!!!!
Next chapter: The end, tidus' father and tidus' soul!
Naruto: Your father wanted this...
Hinata: Your father was a great man, i hope you live on for him.
Kyuubi: Make it back safe...
Tidus: I have to... yuna...
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