Hello EveryONE! How's it going?! Another update for my lovelies!
"Last time on Total Drama: Revenge of the Island! 17 new competitors were blown away by this year's challenges! They were treated to an early morning swim. Said hello to the Island's wildlife, and did some Totem surfing. Explosive! In the end, Stacy's team go so sick of her tall tales, That they sent her packing. Hurl of shame style. Who'll go home next and how much pain can I put them through first? Find out right now on Total Drama: Revenge of the Island!"
Chapter 2: Truth or Laser Shark!
Morning...
The Rats Girl's dorm
"Really?" Dawn asked her bird friend, as she hung from her bed. "Oh, no!"
"What's the problem...? Vampire's need at least 10 hours of sleep to be fully rested. Quiet down before I bleed the both of you dry..." Cleo yawned,
"We both know that's an excuse to sleep in. And you pretend to be a Vampire in an attempt to escape the reality that you are actually a very boring person who was to shy to make friends." Dawn said.
Cleo's eyes narrowed, "Shut up, Dawn! I'm not pretending! I'm perfectly fine with reality! I have lots of friends! And I'm very interesting!" She yelled, going back to bed. "Stupid girl..."
"Will you keep it down? I need my beauty sleep." Dakota complained.
"Is that because your desperate desire for love? That must by why you crave fame and beauty." Dawn said.
"How do you know that!? My therapist swore to secrecy." Dakota said.
"I can see what normal people cant; their auras. No offense, but yours looks like a vomit green." Dawn said.
"Ohhh, go eat a worm." Dakota said, putting her pillow over her head. Dawn's bird friend coughed up a worm at the mention.
"I appreciate it but no thank you." Dawn said.
The Rats Boy's dorm
Scott woke the boys when he slammed the door entering the cabin. He was dirty from head to toe and looked like he was running from something.
"Hey, man. What's with all the dirt?" Sam asked.
Scott's face went from scared to smug, "Just had an early morning make out session with one of the honeys."
"Sha-boom! Which girl did you kiss?" Lightning asked.
"A gentleman never kisses and tells." Scott said.
"You kissed a gentleman?" Sam asked, causing Jean to laugh lightly.
TD Confessional:
"I'm pretty sure Scott wasn't out kissing any gentleman... or ladies for that matter. For one he smells, secondly if he was just kissing a girl how did he get so dirty? And he was obviously was running from something." Jean said, "He was definitely looking for the immunity statue."
"Alright, I was hoping to find that statue." Scott admitted, "Those idiots don't need to know that. Y'see It's a part of my genius strategy. Make my team lose so the other team will let their guard down! They I can pick em' off one by one." There was a knock at the door. "Someone's in here." Sudden a mutant beaver hammered through the side of the outhouse.
The Maggots Girls dorm...
Anne Maria was blow drying and brushing her hair. "Hey how did you sneak that in?" Zoey asked.
"I snuck it in my hair. It was easy." She answered, as she stuffed the blow dryer and brush into her hair.
"Doesn't that get heavy?" Violet asked.
"Nah, my poof can hold anything and its waterproof." She said before spraying her hair, choking Violet and Zoey.
"By the way, Violet. Did you know that you talk in your sleep?" Zoey asked.
Violet eyes slightly widened from their usual half lid, "What? I do?"
"Yeah, but it's panicked whimpering. Like, 'We're all gonna die!' and 'Oh god, they're gonna get me!' Stuff like that." She said.
Violet looked away from Zoey, "Oh, that's pretty weird. Maybe I had a bad dream?"
The Maggots Boy's dorm...
Mike was sleeping soundly until he gasped and he began talking like an old man in his sleep, "These young whippersnappers with all their yammering and tomfoolery." He gasped again, "Aw, c'mon, Chester. Keep it down." He gasped again, Fine. For now..." Next to him was Cameron curled up in his sleeping bag in the bed.
"He even does his old man act his his sleep...?" Nikolai asked tiredly, "Wait a minute... Where's Brick?"
TD Confessional:
"This is the first time out of my bubble so I had a hard time falling asleep. But I managed to recreate my bubble with my sleeping bag, I was out like a light." He snapped his fingers. "What a rush!"
"Mike must be a pretty good actor if he even does it in his sleep." Nikolai said. "Maybe he does theater?"
"With the only soldier here with any military training. I definitely got a winning edge. My biggest competition is probably Jo. Good thing were on the same team. Like my drill Sergent always says, 'Keep your enemies close and your rivals closer.' Wait I did that wrong, 'Keep your family close, and your enemies at arms length.' No, no. Hold on." Brick said.
Brick was out for a morning run and so was Jo they kept running until they eventually slammed into each other in front of the cabins, "Just did my morning 5K run. You?"
"8K." Brick answered.
"I mean I did an 8K warm up and 5K at a full sprint." Jo corrected.
"My entire run was uphill." Brick retorted.
Jo scoffed, "Yeah. Uphill with my eyes shut."
"I ran backwards with earplugs." Brick said.
Jo was confused, "Why earplugs?"
"I don't know!"
"It's a good thing for Team Maggot that they have us." Jo said. "We won the challenge yesterday. We'll carry them all the way to victory. "
TD Confessional
"I'LL carry them to victory. Just being nice so the appropriately named clump of solid dirt will be loyal. But when he becomes useless..." she broke a twig to represent what she wanted to do. "Splinter, OW! Why you little-"
A loud noise that sounded like a cruse liner erupted from the loudspeaker, "Up and em' my little morning glories." Chris said, riding in on an ATV in front of the campsite. "It's time for today's challenge."
"What, a challenge? But Lightning hasn't had his regular DPA." Lightning said.
"DPA?"
"Daily Protein Allotment, Duh!" He said.
"And Vampires need at least 13 hours of sleep." Cleo said, yawning.
"I thought it was 10." Dawn said.
"Whatever." She rubbed her eyes tiredly.
"And I haven't had nearly enough beauty sleep." Dakota complained.
"C'mon you look- Oh my Ra!" Sam said as Dakota took her glasses off. Her face look extremely tired, complete with red eyes.
"You can catch some Zzz's after the challenge." Chris said. "Head this way to the Bay of Dismay!"
"UGH..." Everyone groaned collectively.
Dakota pulled out her phone, "Hey, It's Dakota. We're headed to a bay- Hey, my phone!" Chris confiscated Dakota's phone and Sam's game.
"Illegal Item! Now, its mine." Chris said. "This way, your humiliation awaits."
"Bay of Dismay?" Zoey asked as they walked through the forest. "That sounds like one of the battle stages in Total Warriors 2."
"You like action games? If you're into ultimate kick boxing, I may have to marry you." Mike said, causing Zoey to laugh,
"Hey, Dakota." Sam called. "Sorry about before. I was just so taken by your beautiful... earlobes."
TD Confessional
"Earlobes? Earlobes?!" Sam said.
"Thanks, I think... I like your... Uh... Can I get back to you on that?" Dakota said before walking away.
"Aw, man..." He groaned.
Cleo had a deep frown on her face, "Are you still upset about not getting your recommended 10 hours of sleep?" Jean asked.
"Of course I am! Without enough sleep, I'll... I'll be almost as weak as a mortal. Such as yourself." She said.
"I don't know... how to feel about that. Besides, maybe you should just go bed earlier?" Jean said.
She turned to him with an unreadable expression, "Yes, that's a great idea! I'm glad I thought of it."
"But you-" Jean started, "Yep, another glorious idea, Cleo."
"I find myself enjoying more academic challenges, so I hope this isn't another physical one." Cameron said to Jo
"I bet you do, String bean. I surprised your scrawny neck can support your head." Jo insulted.
"My greater strengths are mental." Cameron argued.
"Well, your mental if you think you can win this game with only brains." Jo said. "Make sure to stay out of my way."
"Violet?" Nikolai called.
"Hmm?" Violet asked. "Hey, Nik. What's up?"
"Nik?"
TD Confessional:
"Yes! I'm already nickname status!" Nikolai cheered. "High five! Oh, uh yeah. That... That is a camera lens... Forget it."
"Short for Nikolai." Violet asked, confused by his sudden excitement. "Something wrong?"
"N-No! I mean yes! Yes, I like it!" Nikolai said, frantically before groaning.
A smile threatened to tug at Violet's lips at his antics, "Are you alright?"
He smiled, "Yeah. Yeah I'm alright."
"So what do you think the challenge is gonna be?" Anne Maria asked. B shrugged his shoulders. "You don't talk much, do ya?"
"Welcome to today's challenge, 'The Getting to Know You' Trivia Game! Everyone strapped in nice and tight?" Chris asked.
"It's too tight. The harness is cutting into my shoulders." Scott complained.
"Yeah, I'm sure. Kid size harnesses will do that." Chris said, laughing.
"Harnesses..." Violet said, her eyes on the verge of becoming yellow. "Ohhh... I cant handle being confined... It reminds me of... straightjackets"
"Everythings okay, Violet. Just take deep breaths. Stay calm." Zoey said, in a calming voice.
Violet did as she was told and her eyes became a steady blue, "Thanks, Zoey."
"Don't mention it." She smiled
"I'll be asking you guys embarrassing questions about you, and I mean extremely humiliating. If the camper I'm talking about, hits the crappy wired buzzer and owns up before the time runs out their team gets a point. First team to five points wins part one and an advantage in part two. But, if no one owns up. This happens." He pressed a red button sending Team Maggot underwater.
Underneath there was a two legged shark about to eat Cameron, but they were brought up in the nick of time. "There's a two legged shark down there!" Mike exclaimed.
"And it was about to eat us whole!" Nikolai yelled.
"Oh, You mean Fang?" Chris asked, "It turns out toxic waste can mess with the genetics of stuff in the water too. Who knew?"
"Better them than us." Scott said.
"Anyway, if a team gets dunked, the opponents can steal the point by guessing which one is you guess wrong, this happens." He pressed the button, sending team Rat underwater. Fang was waiting down there with a diner bib. Chris waited a bit before bringing them up. "Now that you get the rules, Let's beggin. This one is For the Rats, now listen carefully. Who farted on the one and only date they ever had." A question mark on the screen about him farted. Everyone laughed, except for the guilty one, Sam.
"Where did you get that?" Sam asked, pressing the red button in front of him and being shocked by it.
The Rats got a point.
"Who wet their pants on their first day of school and the last day." Chris asked,
"Whoa, one of us wets their pants?" Mike asked.
Jo looked at Bricks nervous face, "He who sweats it, wets it. Team before pride, Maggot." Brick pressed the button and got shocked. "Ow! Fine it was me!" Almost Everyone began to laugh.
"And It's one all." Chris said. The Maggots cheered for their point.
"Oh thanks, Brick I know that must have been tough." Zoey said..
"Okay, Rats. Who's first name is really Beverly?" Chris asked.
"What kind of embarrassing question is that? Beverly is a regular girls name." Brick said.
B. pressed the button silently shocking himself and raising his hand. "Correct! Beverly." Chris said, mockingly. "Rats get the point, but I would have preferred a verbal response."
"But, B doesn't talk. It goes against his aura." Dawn said. B merely shrugged his shoulders.
"Too bad, so sad. But just little punishment..." He dunked them. When they came up Scott's seat was empty.
"Did he just get eaten?" Violet asked.
TD Confessional
Scott pulled a triangular object from his butt, "A shark tooth?"
Fang looked into a mirror and noticed his tooth was gone and he broke the mirror in anger.
"I guess I spoke to soon." Violet said when Scott came out of the water.
Scott climbed back into his seat. "Thanks, team. You really helped."
"Hey! We're strapped in!" Cleo yelled, snapping the harness straps, "Ow! We wouldn't have been able to save you in time anyway!" Cleo exclaimed.
"Y-Yeah! What she said..." Jean said.
"Whatever. You can win this challenge without me." Scott said folding his arms.
"If he's quitting, I'm quitting too." Maria said trying to open up her harness.
"Since my embarrassing secret has already been exposed can I, uh, leave?" Sam asked.
"Ugh, Everyone just calm down." Chris said.
"Anne Maria has a point, let's stop" Mike said quickly unhooking his harness. "Not that I have anything to hide."
"Park it, skinny!" Jo said, smacking the back of his head. "I'm not loosing!"
"Whoa, take it easy!" Zoey yelled.
"Uncalled for." Violet said.
"Hey! I'm the host and I'm taking!" Chris said trying to get the teens so settle down. "Only I get to say when the challenge is over."
"Whatever, I'm done." Scott said trying to leave.
"You leave when we win!" Lighting said pushing him back down.
Fang suddenly jumped up and bit of part of the seating that the maggots were sitting on.
"Yeah, I'm using my backup phone." Dakota spoke into her phone,
Everyone began arguing and talking all at once, "That's it!" Chris yelled. "Thanks to that time wasting debacle, we cant finish this challenge. Happy now?" There was a collective agreement. "Well, you wont be. Make sure to come back after the break for an all new inescapable challenge! But before that..." Both teams were dunked as punishment.
"Good thing the challenge timed out before one of my secrets were revealed." Cameron said.
"Let me take a guess," Jo said. "You still need your diaper changed?"
"I haven't worn a diaper in 4 years." Cameron said, causing all the maggots excluding Violet, Mike and Zoey to laugh at him.
"You don't have to humiliate yourself, the challenge is over." Brick whispered to Cameron.
"No, don't stop," Jo said, "I bet baby needs his bottle, too."
"Do you get off on making people feel bad about themselves?" Violet asked.
"It's called Total DRAMA, Poker Face. Not 'Everyone lets be nice to each other'." Jo said. Violet narrowed her eyes at the nickname.
"I have just as much a right to be here as you do, Jo." Cameron said. "And I'll prove it in the next challenge. You'll see."
"Good for you, Cameron." Nikolai said.
TD Confessional.
Cameron was curled up sucking his thumb, "Why did I say that? Why!?"
"My hand feel so alone, I dont think I've ever gone this long without my video game." Sam said.
"Oh, I hate Chris!" Dakota complained, "I could be texting right now!"
"Wow, we have a lot in common." Sam said.
"How could you... say something so horrible to me?" Dakota asked, as if she had been offended to the 100th degree.
"No, no! I meant about the tech withdrawal. Trust me you're nothing like me otherwise." Sam explained.
"Aww, that's sweet." Dakota said.
"Thanks to Chris taking Sam and Dakota's tech, we might lose the next challenge!" Scott complained.
"What?! Aw, no! This sucks" Lightning loudly complained.
TD Confessional:
"Chris should have let Lightning be his own team! The Lightning is used to carrying his teams back home, but those guys can actually play the game. These losers on my team cant do anything but be losers!"
"Welcome, players!" Chris's voice said over the loudspeaker. "Now that you're all here, It's time for part two of today's challenge. The Mad Skills Obstacle Course! The relay race begins from the Kick Start. Forget coffee, If this baby doesn't get you going, nothing will." It was a giant rain boot set to kick whoever stood in front of it. "Then It's off to the race against time that is the Cannon Ball Run," A bridge with cannons underneath and on top of the path. "Over to my personal fave, Wrecking Ball Alley. Hurts so good." It was a giant automatic rolling pin with a huge wreaking ball swinging over it. "To the Sucker Wall Punch." two walls with hidden punching fists and a thin platform for the player to walk on. "And moving on, we head to the Gang Plank complete with rabid mutant beavers." It was a bunch of platforms with beavers chewing the poles holding them up. "Then The Mud Climb." A climbing wall with mud pouring over it and a tennis ball machine shooting balls at them. "Followed by the Bouncy Agony of Double Trouble." It was four automatic balls that were shaped like butt cheeks, "And Finally the Grand Slam, where you'll use ropes to swing into the big baseball Mitt. While avoiding those deadly bats. Piece of cake. Oh, and as you might remember, I said the winning team from part one, would have a distinct advantage in part two."
"But no one won that challenge." Zoey said.
"Yeah, I know. But had you all actually played the game, the team that lost would have had to wear these glasses during the second part. But, of course, we never actually finished, so now everyone will wear them!" Chris
"Hey whats with the grandpa glasses?" Jo asked, "We wont be able to see anything using these."
"Nerd goggles wont make the seccond part easy to win or good looking, but I'm pretty sure it can be done." Chris said, amused. Everyone groaned. "Take your positions!"
"First up it's the Kick Start and Lightning against Anne Maria. Then It's Dawn Verses Brick Verses the cannon balls! Scott faces Jo in Wrecking Ball Alley. Cleo and Violet on the Sucker Wall Punch. B is up against Zoey in the Gang Plank. Nikolai and Jean will face off on The Mud Climb. Sam and Mike will battle Double Trouble. And Dakota will fight Cameron for the Grand Slam. First team to finish, wins the whole Shebang, and the other team looses a member tonight. Since it's a relay race you'll need something to pass, your mascots. Oh, intern~" Chris called. The black haired intern held two boxes with holes in them and loud animal noises were coming from them. Team Rat gets a mutant rat. And team Maggot gets a mutant maggot."
"Gross!" Anne Maria said, grabbing the Maggot, "What is this thing."
"GO!" Chris fired an air horn.
Lightning got launched by the kick starter into the mud, "And Lightning's booted giving Anne Maria an early lead!" She passed the maggot to Brick covering his face in slime.
"Sir yes sir!" Brick ran into a pole and instead of running around it he kept running into it.
"Sha-bingo!" Lightning yelled handing Dawn the rat. "Go weird girl! Go!" She ran past Brick.
"And Team Rat takes the lead! Or maybe not." Chris said when Dawn reached the cannons.
"Anyone want to switch?" Dawn yelled, before the rat began squeaking and pointing to the cannons. "What's that? Duck now?" Dawn asked it. She obeyed and the cannon ball hit Brick in the face knocking him out and causing Chris to laugh hysterically. Dawn handed Scott the rat.
"Oh yay, were in the lead, hooray..." Scott said, sarcastically. "Were going all the way to last place. Right, little freak of nature?" The rat bit his jaw and the wreaking ball smacked him in front of Cleo.
"Run Faster Soggy Pants!" Jo yelled,
"Here's your wrench, ma'am. Wheres the leak...?" Jo took the maggot and ran over the alley.
"Give me the rat." Cleo said, to Scott who was still holding onto the rat.
"Aw, who's my freak of nature? Who's my good little freak?" Scott said, petting the rat.
"We don't have time for that! Give me that rodent!" Cleo yelled
"Oh, you want this thing?" Scott asked. "Why didn't you say so, Vamp Nerd?!"
"I did, Dirt boy!" Cleo yelled. She snatched the rat from him and went to the wall. Cleo tucked the rat into her outer shirt she carefully climbed the wall trying to dodge the boxing glove fists coming at her.
Jo handed the rat to Violet, "Go, Poker Face!"
Violet chose to ignore the name and ran to the wall. "You've got to be kidding me..." She climbed onto her wall when her eyes turned green. "Whoo! Let's do it!"
Cleo was about halfway through crossing when suddenly a fist came and punched her in the face and down to the mud. She yelled in frustration and climbed up the nearby ladder to B and handed him the rat.
"And Cleo extends the Rats lead."
"Oh, come on!" Scott yelled.
Violet recklessly climbed the wall with one arm, "Look ma, one hand!" She quickly dodged every fist and handed the worm to Zoey. "Man, I am awesome- No, Super special awesome!" Her eyes became blue again, "What the- How did I... get here?"
"Violet that was amazing!" Zoey asked. Violet's eyes became green again at the praise.
"Thanks, I know! Now, hurry! We have a lead to steal from the Rats!" Violet exclaimed.
"Uh... okay!" Zoey ran to the platforms. "That's weird, Violet's usually a lot more... placid."
B jumped to the first platform and the Beavers immediately chewed his platform down making him fall into the mud with the beaver. To save himself, B created a lady beaver out of mud and the beavers fell in love with it.
"And with a cupid-like move, B extends the Rats lead!"
"Yes! Keep it going B.!" Cleo cheered.
Zoey jumped on to a platform as the head of the mud beaver fell off, angering the mutant beavers. They began to angrily gnaw at the platform holding Zoey causing her to fall in. B handed Jean the rat.
"Thanks." Jean went to climb the wall but was hit in the head with a tennis ball, "Ow! This sucks..."
"Here!" Zoey yelled, handing the worm to Nikolai, It threw up in his face.
"Oh, sick!" He ran to the muddy wall and Jean was already near the top. He used Jean as a shield until Jean jumped over and he was pelted with tennis balls. "Weak!"
"Yes! Jean, my man!" Sam cheered when he got the rat. He bounced over the balls, "Dakota! Take it!" the heiress was looking in the mirror when Sam bounced over to her, so Sam went into the mud instead.
"Okay, I've got it! Sam?" She said, holding out her hand, but she was too late. Sam was in the mud and the rat ran away.
"No! dont run away!" He chased after the rat.
"Mike... Please take this thing." Nikolai said handing Mike the worm before collapsing and groaning in pain. "Stupid tennis balls..."
"Don't worry, Nik! I got it!" Mike ran towards the balls, "Okay, Mike. It's just some jumps over some ball you cant even really see. You can do this, c'mon." He gasped, and began to walk on the tips of his toes. "Not you! Only I can do take this on! Me, Svetlana, the Olympic gymnastics queen!" Mike skillfully jumped over the balls. "Ta-da!"
"Whoa! With Mike skillful ball jumping, The Maggots retake the lead!"
TD Confessional:
"I wasn't sure before but, now I'm convinced." Violet said, "Mike must have MPD, Multiple Personality disorder. I know cause... I have it too. But different from Mike's. And I've seen plenty of cases. Well... that or he's an extremely passionate method actor/gymnast. But, I doubt the latter."
Mike gasped and went back to being Mike, "Svetlana?" Cameron asked. "Mike, how did you do that?"
"Huh?" He asked, unaware of what just happened. "Uh, do what?" He laughed nervously and handed Cameron the Maggot.
"Here!" Sam yelled trying to hand Dakota the Rat.
"Ew!" She said, scorning the muddy rat. "That thing is so nasty! Can't you clean it off!?"
"Oh, this is great! I've never felt so free!" Cameron yelled as he ran towards the final obstacle, "I'm dead meat."
The beavers held Zoey hostage, "Please Let me go! I dont want to be beaver food" One of the beavers pulled out a bottle of ketchup and opened it, licking his lips, "Didnt you hear me? I said, let me go!" She kicked the beavers in the groin incapacitating them. "I'm so sorry! But I did ask you nice l"
Violet cheered as she sat on her platform, "Go, Zoey!" Her eyes changed back to blue, "Huh? Was I cheering? Did we win?"
"Well, Dakota fans. Here goes nothing!" Dakota said to the camera. She swung and nearly made it but fell into the mud. She coughed up something brown and shrieked.
Cameron took his swing and slammed into one of the bats, falling into the mud below.
When Dakota readied to take he swing, the paparazzi appeared, "Oh Dakota your beauty is radiating! Smile for us!"
"Oh, Finally, my photo opp. Hey, you guys!" She waved at the camera, "You're just in time for my..." She looked down at her muddy form. "Mud bath!"
"No, Dakota! Don't look at them and swing!" Sam yelled.
"Velocity times mass times wind speed-" Cameron began to calculate before the maggot bit his hand, he got tangled in the rope and was battered by the bats until he successfully fell into the mitt winning the match.
"The Maggots win!" The cheered in victory. "And to the maggots go the rewards. McLean brand soaps, shampoos and conditioners. They'll definitely wash off the stink and gross dirt of the day! I'll see you at the elimination, Rats." The Rats groaned in defeat.
"Lightning cant believe this!" Lightning said. "Why does the Lightning have to be on this team of losers!"
"We're not the losers! We were in the lead until, Princess Spin off over there ruined it for us!" Cleo yelled.
"C'mon, you guys. Is winning really everything?" Sam asked, causing Lightning to chase him in anger. Cleo chuckled in amusement.
"And speaking of said Princess and her entourage. Chef? Deal with it" Chris said. Chef used a sling shot to pierce a hole in the paparazzi's air balloon sending them spiraling away.
"How rude!" Dakota yelled.
"Okay you guys, Dakota has to go." Scott said, as Team Rat sat out side of their cabin. "She's only here for a TV spin off."
"Though it pains me, I must agree with the mortal." Cleo said folding her arms. "There's only room for one royal female on this team. And she cost us the challenge!"
"Come on, you guys. Sure her mind does wonder off a bit, but she's still pretty hot. We should give her another chance." Sam said.
"I don't think that matters in our situation, Sam. She doesn't actually need the million dollars, so she wont work hard to win." Jean said.
"Way to speak up, henchman." Cleo said patting his back.
"There is a horrible dark aura surrounding her, if she stays here, something terrible will happen to her." Dawn said.
"Sha-yeah right!" Lightning said. "The Lightning should vote every last one of you off after today's sorry preformance!"
TD Confessional:
"Okay! I'm getting really sick and tired of Lightning!" Cleo yelled, "He's so infuriating! IF this wasn't being broadcasted, I would have done away with him by now! Curse your stupid human laws! Maybe... I can get him voted off! There's no way I'M the only one bothered by his existence."
"Cleo complimented me!" Jean said, happily before blushing. "Not that it makes me all that happy, I mean, she's cool. She just says what she thinks and she can stand up to people like Lightning and Scott while I cower. I'm going to try to follow her example."
"Tonight everyone, even the loser, gets a marshmallow. But that marshmallow is the one probably dont want to eat. Okay, now the one's who are safe get a safe marshmallow, Lightning, Dawn, Cleo, Jean, Dawn, Scott, and Sam." Dakota and B were left.
Dakota was shocked, "What? I'm in the bottom two? Why me"
"And the Mutated Marshmallow of Loserdom goes to... Dakota."
"It cant be! No! I can leave yet, I haven't gotten my spin off!" She said, running away with Chef on her tail.
"Don't worry, Sam. There will be other chances." Jean said.
TD Confessional:
"Aw, man Dakota's, gone now... Now who am I going to repeatedly ask and get rejected by?" Sam said.
"Got anything to say before your ride on the hurl of shame?" Chris asked as the heiress stood in the catapult.
"Uh, yeah I do! I cant believe-"She was launched mid thought.
"That was a rhetorical question, ya don't answer" He said, "Any way 2 hurled contestants down and 15 to go! Who'll will be launched from the catapult next? Tune in and find out next time on Total. Drama! Revenge of the Island!"
And there goes Dakota... for now! Can you guys tell me how my writing is anything I can do better? BTW Do you guys like my portrayal of my OC's? Leave your thoughts in a review.
Thanks!