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Chapter 6

This is my 2nd week back at Dauntless Academy. I haven't seen Peter anywhere so I am relieved. I made arrangments to have a funeral service for my parents last week. It was beautiful. Caleb's service was beautiful also. I sang at both of them. The police think that a lamp caught on fire and that's what started it. I am sort of excited to go to class today because its Friday. Friday is the best day of the week.

Tobias's P.O.V.

I wake up and put on some clothes. Today I am going to go on a date with Tris. I am going to take her to the pit. We are going to have a picnic. I really hope she likes it.

Tris's P.O.V.

Tobias is taking me on a date later tonight so I asked Christina if she could help me with my makeup and hair.

I go downstairs and eat breakfast. Christina and I talk about how I should wear my hair. She says that I should wear it half up half down and curl it. I like that idea a lot. She starts to babble about makeup and I zone out. We get up and go to our first class. When I get to art I draw my bird. It is almost finished.

I sit through an hour of algebra. Boring. Boring, Boring,

My last class is English so I decide to go to the bathroom. When I come out of the bathroom I see Peter waiting for me.

"Hello Tris" he says

"P-eter What do you want?" I say

"Oh Tris I just want to have some fun." He says

"No." I say

"What did you just say to me?" he says

"No! I wont have some fun!" I basically yell

No one is in the hallway so I am starting to get scared.

Peter does a choke hold and pins me to the lockers and starts to punch me. He hits me in the stomach and I buckle. He continually kicks me. I feel light headed. Peter starts to hit and kick my head. I suddenly see black around the edges. The last thing that I see and hear is

"Tris you deserve this." Then everything stops.

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