Do You Still Love Me?

by A Fangirl's Story

Tris and Tobias have been friends ever since they were kids. Tobias moves away and when he makes a surprising re-entry Tobias forgets to tell her something key in there relationship.

8. Chapter 8

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Chapter 8

Tris's P.O.V.

My vision. My hearing. My ability to move. All stop.

Tobias's P.O.V.

Tris was supposed to be outside 20 minutes ago. I Wonder where she is. I guess I will go back inside the school to see where she is. I walk up and down the hallways. Our school is gigantic.

Maybe she is in the locker room?

Maybe the gym?

Maybe the cafeteria?

I am starting to get worried. I am heading to the office when I see her. She is on the ground. Hurt. Tris is curled up in a ball.

"Tris!" I say

She doesn't respond.

"Tris!" I yell again

I check for her heart beat. There is one but it is slow and weak. I pull out my phone and I call the emergency room. The paramedics come and wisk her away. I get in my car and rush to the hospital. Tears are threatening to fall. I promised nothing would happen to her ever again. I let this happen. When I get to the hospital I am told to wait in the waiting room.

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I have been in the waiting room what seems like days but it has only been a couple of hours.

"Four Eaton?" the doctor asks

I stand up and say

"Yes?"

"Follow me." He says

The doctor; brings me into a room. Im guessing his office.

"Four. I need you to stay calm. Ok?"

Thoughts run through my head.

Is she ok? How bad is she hurt? Who did this? Is she ok?

I slowly nod my head.

"Tris has suffered severe injuries. Tris is in a coma."

"We don't know if she is going to make it through the night. We put her on a breathing device."

He waits a minute before saying

"If I were you I would call her family."

I wait a second to realize what he just said. Tris cant be gone. She cant leave. I cant live without her. I cant. I see the doctor waiting for an answer so I say

"Tris doesn't have any family, they were killed last week." I guess this came as shock to the doctor because he finally sits up and says

"You are going to have to sign all of her papers then."

"Can I go see her?" I barely am able to say

"Yes she is in the critical section room 460."

I practically run to the room. When I get into the room I see . Even though she has broses on her she is still beautiful. Tris is hooked up to a whole bunch of wires. I sit down next to her bed and cradle her head. I feel a tear run down my cheek. I whisper

"I love you Tris."

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