Hey, what's up guys? I'm surprised how everyone responded to the song scene last chapter. I was expecting most of you to say it wasn't good.
Anyway, I will be properly introducing my other oc this chapter. You got a brief physical description of him while I was dodging zombies.
Now I will be working in a blacksmith's forge in this chapter, I figured I would just say this now. I will more than likely be doing things that are impossible with a forge, but whatever it's Equestrian logic.
Oh, and warning, i will be including a short adult scene in the kinda middle of the chapter. just incase you want to avoid it.
I'm amazed at how many oc submissions I have gotten for Walking the Path and yet it's only on the second chapter.
Hope you guys enjoy, you'll be meeting someone else's oc this chapter so keep an eye out!
Chapter 7
My throat still hurts! All that singing last night made my throat swell. I had trouble talking to Flutter when I woke up this morning. Now I had two reasons to go to the hospital.
I needed to see if that colt was getting better, and while I was there I could have a checkup. "Bye Fluttershy! I'll see you later."
I headed out towards Ponyville, I wanted to see if that colt had recovered from the crash. It didn't take too long to get to the hospital walking at a brisk pace.
I saw the same Nurse from yesterday tending the front desk. "Hello misses, do you know where that foal from last night is?"
"Yes, right this way please." She led me through a series of halls until finally stopping at a room for severely injured patients. I could guess by the other ponies being treated.
I saw the colt was wrapped up in bandages and had one of his back legs raised. So he broke a leg on that landing. "Hello, it's nice to meet you when you're actually awake."
The colt looked at me oddly for a second; he probably doesn't even know about what happened last night. "I found you conked out in the woods last night, it seems like you had crashed."
Now that he seemed to understand, he looked to me now with a sense of gratitude. "Yeah, you should work on your landing buddy, could have ended up a lot worse if I hadn't been out there."
I didn't want to scare the kid so I wouldn't mention the zombies, but he should be cautious before he tries to fly again. "So, what's your name buddy?"
He looked confused for a minute, and then he seemed sad. "I don't remember, I can't remember anything except I was flying last night and got…..tired. Then I woke up here."
"You don't remember what you were doing out so late or who your parents are?" i try to ask as quietly and calmly as i can so he doesn't get upset.
"No, i just... i don't know why but...i can't..." *sob*Oh well now you've done it genius, made a kid cry cause he forgot who he is! I needed to get him to calm down as quickly as possible.
"Hey, hey now hold on a minute. I've heard about people losing memories from an injury, but the old memories are usually recovered by going about your normal life."
I walk to the Colt's side and place my hand on his head. "I'm sure that if you spend some time here in Ponyville playing and going to school like a normal foal, your old memories should come back."
He seems to have found some hope in what I've said, but he still seems troubled "But, Sir i don't know anypony here, i don't even have a name."I think i can help with that.
"Now I'm not one to believe in signs but i think there's something special about you...Fallen-Star." with this i point to his star mark displaying proudly through the bandages.
"And as for you not knowing anypony, trust me there's a certain someone who won't let that be true for long." i recall fondly my crazy pink friend and her spontaneous parties.
"T-thanks, I'm gonna do my best to make some friends when they let me out, it might help me get my memories back faster. What's your name anyway Sir?"
At least the kid wasn't letting this keep him down long. "I'm Zach, Equestria's, to my knowledge, only human. if you have any problems you can come and see me."
The nurse cleared her throat and informed me i had reached the limit of my visiting time. "I'll see you soon Star!" i hope he doesn't have it too bad from here on.
After leaving the room i turned to the nurse "Excuse me but i need a check up, i think i have a throat infection. Is there somepony available to see me?"
The n"I canurse looked away for a moment, she seemed reluctant to answer. "I can see you, we can go to physical room now if you want."
I follow her to a small room with a hospital bed for a pony to sit down on while being examined. she was a unicorn so she could use her magic to use the tools.
She checked my ears, throat, heart and lungs. "Seems like everything here is normal, your throat is a little irritated but you should be fine. now since your new to Ponyville it is recommended you have a...physical examination."
Umm, what now? does she mean a get down to your birthday suit type of physical. "I was not aware that was something done here but if it's best to know I'm healthy then I'll do it."
My face has to be as red as Big Mac right about now. i had stripped down to my boxers in front of the nurse, who seemed almost as embarrassed as me.
I hesitantly took off my boxers and quickly covered myself with my hands. "Can we...get this over with?"
"I need you to lie down so i can examine you." i did as she asked laying on my back so she could check my vitals and...other areas. She looked over my chest stomach and head.
"Everything seems fine, i just have one last thing to check." she placed her hoof on my hands, i understood she needed me to remove them but i still felt awkward.
She's a nurse, she must have done this tons of times. I pulled my hands away and i could hear the nurse take a sharp breath."This is...new for me, i haven't had to do this before." Off course she's new!
I tried to just stare up at the ceiling and take deep breaths, but it's hard to stay calm when you have a mare touching your privates. "This is not what i thought i would be doing today."
"Okay, everything seems to be...working. I am flattered but this is neither the time nor the place." I didn't know what she meant so i looked down to ask her what she was talking about and i saw what she meant.
Apparently i was distracted enough i didn't realise i had gotten...excited. I was in a very awkward situation, with a nurse hovering right by my crotch. "I'm really sorry about this, I've never had this problem before."
Now i looked to the nurse and she seemed to be transfixed. I'm not sure if she was even listening to me."Excuse me, are you ok?" she slowly turned her attention to me, she still seemed distracted.
What the hell is she doing? "I can...I can help you with this." she said this in a whisper that I could barely hear. Though i did hear, and it nearly sent me over the side of the table.
"Won't you get into trouble for that!? i mean offering something like that in a hospital would normally be illegal in my world." she looked at me from the side of her eye, i could feel her hot breath on my leg.
"The male to female ratio is very unbalanced in Equestria, so being intimate with someone you just met isn't seen as a bad thing." So she's saying that it's completely fine for us to do the dirty in a hospital bed!
"I'm not sure to be relieved or worried by what you're saying. though i will admit I've...thought about it." Is it wrong that i have had dreams of my friends doing things like this?
I need to know now if I'm going to be ok with any serious relationship, this would have happened sooner or later. "Ok, if you're willing to do this then I should know your name at least."
( Warning: adult scene starts here.)
She got onto the bed and climbed on my lap "My name is Redheart, but you don't need to worry about that now, just relax and don't be loud." I felt a moist heat on my leg as she got close.
I could feel a throbbing in my length, she must have felt it against her thigh because she looked at it eagerly "Let's do something about you." she turned around faster than i thought possible.
I now found her curvy flank in my face with her mouth hovering by my crotch. I could feel her hot breath on my skin, there was a strong scent coming from her marehood, nearly intoxicating.
"Just relax and let me take care of you, that is my job." She started swirling her tongue around my tip, then slowly started to take more into her mouth. I couldn't hold back at this point, i needed to taste her.
I took a long drag of my tongue across her mound, i felt her moan deep in her throat. "Didn't mean to surprise you but i can't help myself." i started to dig in hard, using my tongue like a flat drill.
I could feel i was getting close to my limit so i increased my pressure on her walls and started flicking her clit with my tongue. "Ahhhhh, sweet Celestia that's good!"
She flipped herself back around to face me."i think it's about time we got down to business." She started to grind her marehood onto my crotch, she wanted this to get serious.
"I-i'm not sure about this, i've never had sex before, especially with a different species..." she looked right into my eyes as she lowered herself onto my length.
"Don't be scared of it honey, it's normal for adults like us, so how about we just have a good time?" she started bouncing on me, i could feel her flank clap into me on her way down.
I wanted to go faster so i pushed up whenever she was on her way down. She started bucking hard into my hips, it hurt a little but i felt too good to care.
"I'm going to c-cum again!" we pressed our mouths together and shared a deep kiss while i felt her grip on me tighten, i couldn't hold it any longer.
"I'm almost there, should i pull out?" she didn't answer me she just pressed her flank down and brought me into another wonderful kiss.
"Do it inside me, i want to feel it." she whispered into my ear as i climaxed into her soft, wet folds. My eyes rolled up into my head as we shared a moment of complete ecstasy.
( adult scene end.)
"That felt great honey, i really enjoyed meeting you, and i hope to see you again." she climbed off my lap and stood next to me giving me one last kiss, she made up my mind though, i could get used to ponies.
"I'm sorry Redheart but i really need to be going." i got dressed and bid her goodbye, i wouldn't be forgetting this for a while. Though i still had a lot to do today.
I was still worried about that incident in the woods, if there are things in the woods that dangerous then i need something to defend my self with. i heard there was a smith somewhere in town.
It took a little asking around, but i was finally able to find what i was looking for. I could use the blacksmith's forge and make myself some protection and a weapon. Of course it would take a lot of time to make a cast in my size.n
I was approached by a burly looking stallion wearing a thick welders jacket "What is your business with my forge?" he had a voice that wasn't exactly threatening but made me careful not to upset him.
"I would ask to use your tools and forge to make something to protect myself with. the things in that forest aren't exactly friendly." he nodded his head with a chuckle.
"Trust me son, I've known those beasts since before many of the guards were born. I will help you but i will have to charge you for materials." he went into the back after looking me up and down for a minute.
He returned with several bars of a blue metal i couldn't identify, and what looked to be regular Steel. "This here is called Cobalt, and I've found that it makes a much harder substance when melted down with Steel."
"Then how come it's not used for everything if it makes a better metal? wouldn't this make your guards better protected?" he sighed at this, he obviously didn't like the answer.
"Aye it would, but Cobalt is also strange, it has the ability to insulate against magic. Since many of our royal guard rely on magic, they cannot use cobalt infused steel." But i can, it might make it easier dealing with Equestria's strange creatures.
"What would it cost for me to make a sword and a set of armor?" he went toa table and pulled out a scale and a ruler, measuring and weighing his metals and writing on a large scroll.
"All in all, around sixty bits. Mind you that's cheap because, while I rarely need the Cobalt anyway, I need to use a lot for your big body." I think I've made barely that much from singing last night.
I pull out the bag of bits Vinyl had slipped to me on my way out the party last night. "Here's all i got Sir, will this do?" He looked into the small cloth bag, his eyes got bigger than a dinner plate.
"Now son, have you counted this? Nearly two hundred bits here. I'll take six silver ones see. That is equal to sixty regular bits." he gently placed the bag back into my open palm with his magic.
"Good, let's get started then, we need to make a cast for each piece right?" he nodded and went into a corner, grabbing a casting table and the casting mixture.
"I'll need to take a cast for each of your...legs, I can measure your chest and head for the rest, just modify the helmet with ear space on the sides." he set up the casting table and instructed me to place my arms on the divets.
"Now this will let me get an exact shape to base your gauntlets and greaves on, just be relaxed and keep your talons stretched out."
"Actually they're called fingers. Wait..you can make armor for someone with fingers?" he looked at me like i was asking if the sun was hot.
"Of course i have, ponies aren't the only things i supply armaments to. Ok you can take your arms out, should be done by now." i pull and i hear a loud pop as my arms come free.
We repeated the process with my legs, though this time he took notice of my toes and told me to keep them together. "Now we just need your measurements so i can make your full set."
He took out a measuring tape similar to Rarity's, he took the width depth and height of my midsection and my head. "I'll get started on this, you are responsible for making your own weapon."
What would i make? i needed something that would be good for indoors or close quarters and could also work on something bigger than me. My father only taught me how to use a knife and sword.
I finally decided i wanted to make a Claymore. I was never much of a fan of using a shield and sword in practice, and besides, it would use my size as an advantage.
I made a sword to put into the casting table by filing down wood with my pocket knife for the blade and an old two-handed hilt from the back. I went to the oven where the metal was melted and opened the faucet, filling the cast and placing it down to harden.
Once the metal had bonded to the handle i grabbed it with a pair of thick gloves. I took it to the anvil and began shaping the total the blade was around thirty-six inches long, a little short for a Claymore blade.
The good thing was i could fit both of my hands on the hilt comfortably. It was a large weapon, so if i was stuck in a close up fight i always had my knife on me.
After getting the blade edge thin enough i dipped the red-hot metal into the water bucket, after pulling it out I was holding a wonder of a sword. A bright,light gray with lines of dark blue, they almost seemed to glow.
I looked outside and noticed the sun had gone down, it must have taken me longer than i thought. "Here boy, try it on." i turned to find the smith standing there with a brand new set of armor.
And how it was shining! the helmet was like an ancient spartan helmet, with everything but the eyes covered. it was silverish gray and had dark blue lines making vinelike patterns along the sides.
The gauntlets looked like wonderful gloves made of silver, they had large sharp-looking arm plating. each finger had blue lines starting at the tip and continued like blood veins down to the elbow.
The greaves were similar, except they were in sections so i could protect my legs and still move freely. The blue lines started in a spiral on my ankle and started to grow as it went up to my hip.
Finally my chest piece, it had a chest plate with blue lines formed into a coat of arms. The coat of arms was empty, that was strange. There were thick pauldrons to protect my shoulders, they had five spiraled spikes on each one.
"This armor will change along with you boy, it's unique to you and only you." He stressed the change in that sentence, I'm not sure what he meant but, considering what I've seen so far not much could surprise me.
It was much harder walking with my sword and all my armor. At least the smith was able to make me a scabbard for my Claymore before i left. Now it was sitting heavily on my back.
I made it to Fluttershy's cottage right as she was heading out the door. "Oh, there you are Zach. Twilight says she needed you to come to her house, there's going to be an important meeting."
I headed inside so I could put my armor in my room, i didn't want to lug that stuff around all night. I ran to catch up with Fluttershy "So Flutter, what's this meeting about?"
"I'm not sure, but normally when twilight says it's important it has something to do with the princesses." Oh yeah, i had heard about them. they use their magic to lift the sun and moon each day.
They are the most powerful ponies in Equestria, they are also something called an Alicorn, which is like a Pegasus and a Unicorn. "So i might get to see them...cool."
I was a little worried how they would deal with a new species randomly appearing in Equestria, but from what i've heard they are kind and sympathetic.
We arrived at Twilight's house, I could hear Pinkie being her usual loud self just inside. i knocked and waited for somepony to answer, instead it was Spike. "Hey little bro, what's going on?"
"Just come in Zach, this is kinda serious. Normally i would have time to talk but the princesses are going to be here soon." man, this must be important, even Rainbow looks worried.
It was me, the girls, Spike, Trent and Cake. Why were they visiting and having only a few people come? i heard a clatter from outside, it sounded like a cart hitting the ground.
"That's the royal carriage, they'll be in shortly." Twilight seemed both excited and scared to be seeing the Princesses. then the door opened.
In stepped two of the most majestic and beautiful creatures that must walk the face of Equestria. "These are the princesses?"
There was a white Alicorn,she was white with a mane that seemed to move on its own accord. It didn't seem to be any set color, rather it changed as you looked.
And the one behind her was a dark blue with a mane that looked like the night sky. Just like her sister her mane moved on its own, and she had wings and a horn.
"Hello everypony, we came to warn you of a strange disturbance we sensed in the forest...who are you?" The one i assumed to be Celestia by her sun mark set her gaze to me.
"I think i was that disturbance your highness. I found myself in the forest several days ago, i made it to Fluttershy's house and she helped me make some friends. My name is Zachary bu the way."
"Well that is a relief Zachary, we were worried that there was something dangerous, but it seems to me that you are quite friendly. What is that on your back?"
I notice i forgot to leave my Claymore at Fluttershy's cottage."This is a sword i made, princess Celestia. there are nasty creatures lurking in those woods and i thought i could use something to defend myself."
I heard princess Luna admiring the coloring of my sword, while one of the guards scoffed."Ha! Only cowards use forged weapons. True fighters use magic or their natural strength."
"While i don't agree with you, you may think as you wish. Besides i don't have the ability to use magic so i make do." I swing my sword to add emphasis to my words.
"MagicalBlast, please don't be rude while meeting somepony new. I'm sorry Twilight but i really must be going." I tapped the guard on the shoulder.
"Listen MagicalBlast, if you want to settle this argument and see if swords really are for cowards, come see me next time you're in town." the guard just laughed and headed out to the carriage.
"Trent! Cake! meet me in front of Sugarcube Corner tomorrow, we have training to do." I walked outside to get to bed early. I would have stayed to talk but i would need the extra energy.
As i finally got into bed all i could think about was that cocky guard MagicalBlast...and Redheart. either way i had trouble getting to sleep.
And that's a wrap! hope you liked it. i thought it would be best to mark the explicit scene so you can skip if you want.
I hope to see plenty of feedback from you guys and don't forget to have a great day.
Oh and by the way MagicalBlast is owned by shootingstar212
Fallenstar is my oc and he will become a big deal later on.
I'll see you next chapter, may the harmony always be with you.
