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I get home and find my dad in his office room. "Hey dad," I said. He replied, "Hi Gwen." He wasn't looking at me. I asked, "What are you doing?" "I'm trying to find my gun," he said. "I'm going after that Spider-Woman." I replied confused, "Why? She helped you guys with those crooks." "Exactly," he said, "and it's our job to do that." He finally found his gun. "Bye Gwen," he said. I didn't say anything.
I looked outside and saw him get in his car. I opened my backpack and grabbed my suit. There has to be a a way to convince him that I'm just trying to help. I find myself jumping off of the balcony and swinging with my webs. I hear a vibration in my head. "My spidey sense. What's happening now?" I land onto a building and look down. "What is that?" I see a man with something in his hand that didn't look like a gun. "I better check it out." I swing down to the street. "Hey buddy," I said.
The man turned around. He had a black hoodie and his skin looked sparkly blue. "Hey Sparkles!" "Spider-Woman," he said. His vocal chords sounded like it burned up. "Spider-Woman let us do our job," screamed a police man. "Let me help," I said. "What happened to you buddy?"
"I don't know," the man said. "I woke up like this." He tried to walk forward. I look down at his feet. It looked like electricity. I said with caution, "Be careful there's
electricity." But as he stepped back it looked like it was his electricity. Suddenly, I see something swinging with webs. It was as if I was watching myself swinging through the city, but the costume was dark blue and medium red.
The person landed next to me. He had white lenses, red boots, blue pants, red gloves, and a red mask. "Who are you?" "I'm just like you," he said, "I'm Spider-Man." "Help me with this guy," I said. "They keep shooting at me," the man in the black hoodie said. "Stop shooting at him," the new hero said. The policemen lowered their guns even though they didn't know him.
Spider-Man asked the man, "What's your name?" He replied, "My name is Max Dillion." "You want to get away from these people," I asked. I had to join the conversation. "Yes," Max said. We start to walk away from the people, but then a policeman started shooting at him. "HEY!" Electricity began to come out of his hands. "Hey calm down," Spider-Man said. He shot a web out and the web grabbed Max's left hand. I joined and shot a web to Max's right hand, but then Max grabbed the webs and electricity came along it.
Quickly me and Spider-Man detached the webs from our web shooters. "I thought we were friends!" Max said angrily. "Don't hurt anyone," I said. Spider-Man said, "Fight us not them!" I replied to Spider-Man, "Hey rookie slow down," I said, "this is your first time fighting." Spider-Man said, "Have you seen my webs?" Max threw electricity at us. It hit both me and Spider-Man. It hurts having electricity shock you. It must have hurt when he got his powers. I hit a wall behind me and Spider-Man falls to the ground, but shortly we get back up. "That should have hurt a lot," Spider-Man said.
"But not as much," I said. Max walked over to us and said, "You planned this!" Spider-Man replied, "Don't take it the wrong way." More electricity came flying out of his hands towards a car. The car was in the air. The car was about to hit a policeman. I ran in front of the man and caught the car. "Are you okay," I asked. The innocent policeman nodded. I dropped the car. "We have to stop him before he causes anymore destruction," said Spider-Man. We shoot webs repeatedly at Max, but the web weren't strong enough to bring him down. When Max would get out of the webs, the police shot at him. It was a great opportunity to find a way to stop him. "Look there's a water tower," I said as I pointed to one on a building. Spider-Man and I climb the building and the tall water tower and tried punching and kicking the tower. "Break it open," Spidey said.
I replied, "Do you not see me putting all my might into it?" Finally a side snapped off. I pulled another side. Spider-Man helped break the roof of the water tower. SNAP! The water pushed itself out. Max looked up as huge amounts of water poured down on him. Max screamed, "AHHHHH!" The water touched his body and electricity spread through the water. The water sank into the street and Max's body was shaking. "We can take care of this," said a police woman. "Thanks." I said to Spider-Man, "Hey thanks rookie. You really know what you're doing." Spider-Man replied, "No problem. Nice meeting you." Spider-Man began swinging away. There was something about Spider-Man that I couldn't put my finger on. I leave the area and started thinking about the man under the mask. It's like I already know him.
I jumped onto the balcony hoping no one was looking. I sneak into my apartment and walk slowly into my room. "Ow," I said as I took off my costume. The electricity shocked me really good. I open my closet without a lot of pressure and throw my hood and black pants inside.
"Gwen honey I'm home," my dad said. I put on my casual clothes on and opened my door. I replied, "Hey dad. What happened?" He sighed and said, "My policemen were too scared to go and capture them." I said, "Them?" I knew he meant Max and I, but was he after Spider-Man too? "There's Spider-Man, Spider-Woman, and the electricity guy," he said. I asked, "Why are you going after Spider-Man too? He helped Spider-Woman and your policemen." I was really angry at him. How does he not see that we're trying to help them? "Like I told you Gwen," he said, "it's our job to fight crime."