Genetically Modified Mario Bros

They Noticed

Chapter 5

Anonymous Kay Answers Reviews

SagaPony612 chapter 1 . 20h ago

OMG! Finally, someone who is willing to put Mario in a genetically modifications story and take it seriously! This fan-fiction is simply really good. Even though I feel it does need some editing and a few more details, if just add that later on it could be LEGENDARY! Honestly very good job, also bravo for making me fan-girl.

So SagaPony612. I tried to answer you earlier but it didn't work. I did re-post and edit the first chapter… And you will get more info on their tragic back-story later. Maybe chapter 13. And I want to thank you for your complement. I do take stories seriously. Especially this one.

redsnivy chapter 1 . 13h ago

Holly hell this is dark...i'm going to love this.

Yes redsnivy this is what I call dark. Sometimes I think my friends think I'm a bit creepy.

Thank you for all my reviewers. Please keep reviewing.

Authors Note – Anonymous Kay

This is my first story alone. I do not own the Characters. Based on SMB: Brothers Apart by WayWardWonderer. More work by Anonymous Kay and Lolanice: The Land of No Return by: EndlessWolves. And do you notice how Lolanice keeps spelling my name wrong. It's getting annoying. As you can or can't tell I do not have an account and am posting my story on my friends account. Last chapter Bowser said he was going to plan a war… Oh no. This can't be good. Find out what the plan is in this new chapter. Enjoy and keep on roaring.

Editor's Note – Lolanice

Hey guys! This is kay's chapter and I don't own any of it. Again, no copyright intended! Thanks for making it this far to the story as it is all coming together! Thanks for being here and keep on meowing!

Disclamer: We would never steal or own Mario.. Maybe if we had dimension machine though.

L's P.O.V

I was walking down the hallway with breakfast to my bedroom. I actually just call it a bedroom. It's a jail cell in the basement that the lock got permanently broke on. My bed is a pile of hay that I snuggle under and I eat on the concrete block. At least the there's a separate bathroom with a shower. Only the toilet and sink I had to fix (For some reason I was naturally good at plumbing) and are pink… And the shower is always freezing cold and only works for 5 minutes before I have to wait another hour to use it. Well I was going to my room as I said but then Bowser Jr. ran down the hall yelling "L… L…" He yelled it over and over and over. "What!" I grumbled. They had gotten used to my bad attitude. "You are wanted by Bowser in the meeting room." I sighed. Probably wanted me to get him a snack or sharpen his spikes. I started down the hall mumbling "orders, orders, and orders. That's all I get around here." Although Bowser Jr. must of heard me because he said. "Well, don't tell Bowser you heard this from me but I think you're getting a promotion!" Then he scrambled off before I could respond. H was the only one that liked me but he was ordered to boss me around at least 1 time a day. He always did something after to make me feel better. A smile sneaked on to my face. Technically I don't get any money but a promotion. I'll get to do something else. Finally. I broke into a run and when I got to the turn into the hallway with the meeting room I stopped running and caught my breath. I walked in smiling. Bowser was sitting in one chair while Kamek in another. Bowser pulled out a seat for me. I sat. "How'd you like a promotion L?" I found my voice quickly. "I don't have the words." I said excited.

"Here's what you need to do," Said Bowser. "You make the plan and help execute it we will give you an outfit in return. We are starting a war on the mushroom kingdom" At that I smiled an evil smile. I like wars. They are fun. "Excellent!" I said exited.