So, it seems you guys want more, but I don't have definitive proof yet. I figure if you guys get the number of reviews up to eight, with some more creative comments, I would continue. I can see how many of you guys have looked at my story, but I want to hear from you, to know your opinion. Tell me if it sucks, or if it's good, what needs to be changed, what shouldn't be changed. I want to know, you guys help me grow as a writer when you voice your opinion. Great stories matter to me, they should matter to the audience too. I do not own the Smurfs, I do own the plot and my OC. To the recap!
Recap: "Hey, are you alright?" A voice asked above her, and all she could do was nod.
"Hold tight, I'm gonna bring us down to the village okay? Here we go!" The voice yelled over the wind; suddenly they were flying towards the ground and she gave out a startled yelp.
Soon they were on the earth once more and the scared Smurfette couldn't be smurfier. The creature holding her jumped onto the ground and she looked up to see his face.
He's a Smurf! She thought to herself happily.
"I know I smurfed you before, but are you okay?" The strong Smurf asked concerned.
She let out a shaky breath before she replied, "Yeah, I think so."
"Whew, that's a relief." He stated relieved, a smile forming on his face.
"Um, can you put me down now?" She asked timidly, a shy look on her face.
"Huh? Oh yeah sure, there ya go." He said, as he set her down gently, a shy blush creeping on his face.
"Thanks." She spoke quietly as she looked around.
They were indeed in a smurf village and there were many Smurfs standing around watching her, surprised at her sudden arrival. She took a hesitant step and a wave of dizziness crashed over her and she stumbled back, with a hand to her head.
"Whoa, careful there, you don't want to smurf yourself further." The Smurf exclaimed to her as he put a hand on her shoulder to balance her.
"I think I'm gonna sleep now." She slurred as her eyes drifted shut and she fell back.