Before I start I want to address this comment, coz I really wanted to reply to it:
AwesomeOne: Yeah I forgot to log in ... As much as I love this Idea I find it very unrealistic..
Feliciano or Feliciana is trying to be a guy (that cool) expect I find it very Hard that Ludwig would be okay with . Since he was in love with a girl who then just decide to be a guy one day. I love the dialogue between the two but I do find it real hard of believe that he would be okay unless he was secretly wanted Italy to be a guy from the start . Which I guess is okay.. Sorry to be the BuzzKill here .
Anyway I love the Relationship between the character like this Sibling bond between Elizabeth and Felicaino . It really cute . Your grammar is awesome . Anyway Keep up the good work
-Ludwig and Feliciano are not going out yet, they've been on one date, and Feliciano isn't fully out as trans yet. On top of that, most of what I write on this subject are based on my personal experiences: most of my friends have been accepting, and my boyfriend of 5 years was actually the one to suggest I change my name and he helped me decide on a name, and I can assure you no he didn't know I was a guy when we started going out, so no, it's not at all unrealistic for someone who loves you to be ok with you coming out as transgender.
I also have problems with the way you're worded your comment: Feliciano isn't trying to be a guy, or deciding to be one, he is realising that he is one. I know this might sound nit-picky to you but wording it like that is kinda insulting.
Elizabeth knocked on Feliciano's door, waiting for Feliciano to welcome her in before opening the door.
Feliciano smiled at her from the bed where he sat with his laptop, "Hi," he said cheerily.
She smiled as she walked over, sitting on the bed. "So, is Ludwig still coming over today?"
Feliciano nodded happily, closing his laptop and putting it on the bedside tablet. "Si, he'll be here in about half an hour, I cleaned and everything."
"So," she cooed, her voice soft and song like, "Is it bad?"
He frowned softly, feeling a slight barrier raise inside himself, she couldn't possibly know what was going on. "Is what bad?"
She raised an eyebrow, "You're bringing a boy home to meet us, you've never done that before."
"Oh," he swallowed hard, glancing down, "No, I mean…" he cleared his throat, he'd not considered a conversation like this happening. He forced a small chuckle, "We've only been on one date Elizabeth."
"Well it must have been a good one," she said with a smirk.
Feliciano huffed, "Elizabeth," he said playfully, "No, he's just my friend."
Elizabeth huffed softly, still smiling slyly, "Feliciana, everyone knows boys and girls can't just be friends."
Feliciano frowned at her, a slight anger rising in him, "Who are you to talk? All of your friends are guys."
She nodded, "Yeah, but I went out with most of them at some point."
"…You shouldn't say things like that," he said weakly.
The woman chuckled and gave his arm a playful shove, "I'm just teasing Feli. So he's really just a friend?"
He shrugged, trying to keep eye contact, "Well, at the moment, yeah."
Truly he wasn't sure when he was to Ludwig. They'd been on a date and Feliciano really liked him, but he wasn't sure how Ludwig would feel dating someone… like him, someone so unsure of themselves, someone who wasn't comfortable in their own skin.
He cleared his throat and got to his feet, stretching slightly, "Uh, I should probably get changed. Can you tell me when Ludwig's here please?"
Elizabeth nodded, "Uh, ok, you're not going to let him in yourself?"
Feliciano frowned softly, "You know him already Elizabeth, you're the one who introduced us."
Why was Elizabeth acting so weird? If anything Feliciano should be the one acting weird.
He had the whole afternoon planned out; after Elizabeth announced that Ludwig had arrived he'd emerge from the room wearing some of the masculine clothing he'd picked out, and he'd announce that he'd prefer to be called Feliciano.
It was going to be so much better with Ludwig there, helping to explain what was going on.
Though, if Feliciano was to be honest with himself, this went a lot deeper than just names and clothing, he'd noticed himself becoming irritated whenever someone referred to him as a girl… he wasn't sure if he'd only just began to feel it, or if he'd just began to notice it.
He wasn't sure, but he wanted to get this out of the way. The first step of many, maybe.
As he finished dressing someone knocked on his door, Feliciano smiled as he heard Roderich's voice.
"Feli, Ludwig's here," he said sharply, "You know you're being very rude by keeping him waiting for you."
"Sorry," he called through the door, pulling his hoodie over his head and walking out, smiling at the older man as he walked out quickly and into the livingroom, finding Ludwig sitting there.
They smiled at the sight of each other, Feliciano walked up to him and sat at his side on the sofa. "Hi," he said softly, hearing his voice quiver.
"Hi," Ludwig replied, "Are you ok? You're ready?"
Feliciano nodded, letting out a small breath. "Uh, guys?" he said loudly, trying not to sound timid, "I need to tell you something."
The two filed in, Elizabeth smiling softly at him. "We thought you would have wanted some time to yourself."
Feliciano shook his head, standing, hoping it would help him feel more confident, smiling weakly as Ludwig lifted himself to stand next to him.
"Uh, I had something to tell you two, actually, uh, it's a bit weird though, I think." He cleared his throat, digging his nails into his palms and forcing himself to speak, "I don't want you to call me Feliciana anymore, I want you to call me Feliciano."
The pair frowned at him, Elizabeth being the first to speak up. "Why would you want that..?"
"She just doesn't feel comfortable with her name," Ludwig tried to explain.
"What?" Elizabeth frowned, "But Feliciana is such a lovely name."
Feliciano frowned, "I just don't like it. It doesn't feel right."
"It doesn't feel right?" Roderich echoed, shaking his head and rolling his eyes, letting out a soft his as he said "Kids…"
Feliciano felt a strange tension rise in his chest, he felt like he was going to cry. He felt himself jump as something touched his arm, he looked down to Ludwig's hand on him. He swallowed hard, looking up at Roderich.
"You don't have to like my decision, but, can you do it anyway?" he felt his voice faltering slightly, "Please?"
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Sorry about the comment at the beginning but I just felt that I had to say something.