Hey there every pony. I don't want to waste much time, so I'll make this quick. This chapter will be told in 2nd person. As in, the story will go as if it's narrating you, the reader. So guess what? You're the main character! Yep! And, you're in a Halloween Special! Isn't that great?!...
No?...Well, how's about I sweeten the deal by saying this chapter is based in a universe where ponies and humans live in Elements of Harmony?! (See what I did there?) But yes, you'll encounter all the mane seven, Spike, and something else tonight...
Will a murder take place? Is there a spirit? Will you die?...Probably not since you're reading this story now, but hey! Something's bound to come outta this!
Well, that's already enough explanation. You are the main character after all, so you should already know what's happening. And if not, don't worry. The narration will help clear that up! And if it's still confusing, just roll with it. It wouldn't be fun having to read about a main character who is confused about their own life in a fictional story, right? So anyway, let the story begin.
Disclaimer: I don't own MLP, or any of these story ideas. That belongs to the reviews who leave great ideas! All I own is myself, and Blitz. So enjoy!...Main Character...
As you walk into the hotel, you are greeting by the Lobby. Which had such a dull appearance. The room was bigger than an average hotel lobby and the ceiling goes up a whole two floors. A dusty, cobweb covered chandelier hanging from the top. It looked very old, some of the lights burn out while one or two flickered. Only around half of all of those lights on.
It wasn't too much of a problem though as the lights on the wall lit the room well enough. And while the wall lights looked well managed enough for a decent hotel, it still didn't hide the wall paper that had cracked and started to peel off behind the lights. Actually, all throughout the room the wallpaper was cracked and peeled. A mystery how they stayed attached to the walls.
Not even within ten seconds of stepping foot into the Embrujado Hotel, it already gave off a creepy vibe. Not to mention, there weren't any other humans or ponies within the lobby. It was only you, some furniture here and there that was gathering dust, and the front desk with it's own door that led to a back room. The front desk was the only place that had another living being. A unicorn
This unicorn had a white coat with a royal purple mane and tail to go along with it. She had uncaring, blue eyes, and had a frown on her face that showed how bored she was. She was wearing a simple black suit that looked a little fancy, but nothing out of the ordinary. She also had bags under her red eyes from the lack of sleep, although he just looked bored of all occasions. Not looking tired at all really. Finally, she had a name-tag pinned to her suit that read 'Manager: Rarity'
Not having much else of a choice between this hotel, or that storm outside that was suicide to drive in at this time of night, you had no choice but to choose the first option. So you adjusted your backpack from falling off your shoulder, and started to roll your luggage along with you as you made your way over towards the front desk. The manager looking at you as if you weren't even there. Like she was looking directly through you as if you didn't exist.
After standing in front of her, the manager still not recognizing your existence, you quietly clear your throat. Hoping to get her attention. But after doing so, you soon wished you hadn't.
Her eyes adjusted to you in an instant. Like she had been standing there the whole time and you suddenly appeared out of thin air. Her expression remained bored and relaxed, but her eyes were pointed directly at you. Silently judging as you stood there. Soaking wet from the rain. The manager didn't appreciate that at all. Both because you were dripping water, and because you had entered the hotel.
Nonetheless, she straightened up and cleared her throat. "Welcome to the Embrujado Hotel. Are you here to stay the night?" She asked, not having an inch of expression or emotion in her voice. In fact, she looked as if she couldn't care less.
Not wanting to say much to this strange mare, you simply gave her your answer. Saying that you did need to stay the night. Just. One. Night. No way were you going to stay here any longer than you needed to. Especially when you were in a hurry to get to your destination to begin with. Where you were going was your own business. You certainly didn't want some creepy hotel manager knowing where you were going. No good could come of that.
"Alright then. Give me just one moment please..." She said, using her magic to flip through a book that had the names of every pony that had stayed here. Within seconds, she finished looking and gave you a blank stare. Speaking with that same monotone voice. "I'm very sorry, but it appears that we don't have an open room for you." She said, not sounding 'very sorry' about it.
Still, it was bad news for you either way. This meant that you didn't have any place to sleep. There was always the car you were travelling in, but that wouldn't be safe. Especially since the storm looked like it was getting worse and worse by the minute.
You didn't give the manager another glance though as you started to turn back towards the front doors. Getting ready to make a mad dash for the only shelter you had to use. But right as you got to the front doors, your arm stretched out to open the door already, there was a splashing sound.
It wasn't very loud, but that was only because of the storm trying to block out the noise. The sound was clear enough to you though, and as you turned around to try and see what that sound was. You saw a pool in the back of the hotel. A large amount of water having splashed out it from something a decent size hitting it from pretty high up.
You weren't sure if it was your mind playing tricks on you or not because of how tired you were. So you slowly wiped your eyes to make sure you saw the excess water everywhere. not to mention something now floating at the top of the pool. Something that was about half your size. Something a bright pink color. It could've been one of those blow-up pool loungers, but that would never be enough to make a splash that big.
So to make sure you weren't the only one who saw it, you turned back towards the manager to question her. Although, it didn't look like she could care less as she just kept staring forward. Not even a twitch in response to the sound outside. And before you could try and investigate whatever was floating in the pool, a pegasus in a rain jacket flew down and landed just outside the back glass doors that led from the lobby to the pool. And going inside, she removed the hood to reveal her rainbow colored mane and blue face.
But she didn't even bat an eye at you as she went over to the front desk. A key in hoof. And putting it on the desk, she spoke in a calm, but annoyed look that she had to go outside. "Room 279, Ms. Pie's room, is now available." And without so much as another word, she went off to an elevator marked 'Employee's Only'.
After the manager used her magic on a sign next to the front door, as well as the sign out front that said 'Vacancy' in glowing letters. But with the storm, a lightning bolt struck the sign outside. Making the neon lights on it die out. Still, seeing the sign next to the door say vacancy, you decided that no matter how creepy this hotel was, there really was no other option.
So you hesitantly turned around, regretting your choice more and more as you made your way back up to the front desk again. The manager ignoring you exist once again. You just gave a frown, too tired to try and teach this jerk a few manners. But as you prepared to clear your throat again, he stopped you.
"So just for the night." She said, writing in the book at the desk. And with just a slight nod in agreement, she finished it all up. Giving you the key that the room service pony with the rainbow mane turned in. "Room 279. Feel free to ask for room service or any other services you may need. They're free of charge." She said, going over what said as if it was routine.
"Also, a bellhop will come in a few minutes to help you with your luggage. He will meet you at your room. Elevators are right over there." She explained, pointing towards the wall opposite of him lazily.
Looking over, you saw that the area around the elevators wasn't all that well maintained. Benches that had sat to both sides were rotted and falling apart. The walls around the elevators looked even more decayed than the rest of the walls. And finally, the floor had been ripped up from ware and tear. It was all off-putting, but as long as the elevators worked.
But as you went over and pressed the button to signal the door, you saw that the elevator was very wrong in an instant. It wasn't the usual metal box elevator with it's safe cables and pulleys that could hold thousands of pounds of weight. Instead, it was one of those iron gate elevators. The ones you always saw in the 'old elevator shafts' that were 'never used'. And most times they were used...
Bottom line was, you were NOT going on that death trap! This whole place was suspicious from the emptiness, to the decaying room. Not to mention, there was that still questionable problem with the pool out there. What was that even about anyway, what fell from the top of the building? It couldn't have been a...Body, could it?...
No... No, you decided not to jump to that conclusion. This place was questionable, but not that questionable right? There were tons of things that could've happened instead of that. And if it was a body, it could've easily been some crazy pegasus that was trying to do a cannonball...In the rain...
Cautiously looking towards the back once again, you saw that there was a pony flying just a little above the pool with a pool cleaner. Clearing it out. And as you kept looking to try and make out the form, a flash of lightning showed just who it was. A pale coated pegasus with a pink mane. In a dirty jumpsuit that was made for janitors. The only other thing you could note about her though was her blue eyes...That were Staring at you with such anger that even a vicious animal would probably be screaming like a little girl by now.
Not even wasting a second watching the janitor, you quickly turned your head the opposite direction. Seeing a doorway marked: 'Stairs' And with that being the safest way up to the third floor, you took it. And while the stairway might've been a little dark from the lack of around half the lights dead, nothing was wrong with the stairs.
Soon enough, you made it to the third floor and opened the door. Your hotel room just around the corner. And in front of your hotel door was a bellhop that was an Earth Pony. She had an orange coat with a blond mane and tail. She was also in a blue suit with a golden trim. That weird bellhop hat on top of her head too. The kind of stupid hat that you didn't think any kind of bellhop actually wore anymore.
"Hey there." She said with a calm voice. Just like all the others. "Here's yer bags. I was startin' to think that you uh...Checked out, earlier than most others did." She told me, that last part sounding a bit out of place.
Still, you weren't about to question her. Especially when she still had your luggage and could just take it at any moment. You might've still had the more valuable stuff in your backpack, but some clothes and other travelling stuff was important too.
"Don't talk much do ya?" She asked, not hearing a response from you. But as you opened your mouth to speak, she just cut you off without realizing it. "Oh well. It's better than those guests that go on and on 'bout how their vacation went. Or how 'crummy the décor' might be. Really, we're ain't a five star hotel." She complained. "Anyway, here's yer bag." She repeated, holding out her hoof to present it. Even though her hoof was facing towards you more than the bag. This making you see that she wanted some pay.
You couldn't blame her though. She was too short to roll that case, and it was pretty heavy. Despite how light you thought you packed. So you reached into your pocket and pulled out a fifty by accident. Which made her go wide-eyed in excitement about it.
Mentally cursing yourself for doing something dumb like that, you pulled out your wallet that was in your other pocket. And right in front of her, put the fifty in your wallet. This making her go from excited to dumbstruck in no time at all. And as you both stood there in utter silence, not even that quiet hotel music in the hallway playing, you both just looked directly at each other. Then, right before her eyes, she watched as you pulled out a five.
"Oh...Gee, thanks for the tip." She said, snatching the five from your hand rudely. Acting just as rude as the rest of the staff. Of course, it didn't look like she cared how you reacted to her.
She just glared at you for a few seconds more, the whole situation getting awkward and a little fearful. You were trapped in a small hallway with an angry pony after-all. "Well." She started. "Have a nice night." She said as she turned around. 'accidentally' knocking over your suitcase she stood up next to her.
You knew that you just ruined her week, but it didn't matter that much. At least now you could just go to sleep and get the buck out of here in the morning. So putting the key in the lock, you opened it up to see...
A perfectly normal room. It was all as average as any other room. The wallpaper wasn't peeling off like in the lobby or hallway. The furniture looked like it was just recently dusted off. And the lights worked perfectly. Everything looked just fine. Even a It all looked so comforting and normal for a change.
Sighing in comfort, you dropped your stuff on the edge of the bed and relaxed. It was all so great, you wouldn't really mind just relaxing for a while. After all, you had to leave as soon as you woke up. Might as well take this time to relax right?
So you grabbed the remote that was on the small table next to the bed and turned on the TV. And it turned on to just static. No connection whatsoever on this channel. You didn't think anything of it as you tried flipping to another channel. And another. And another. Clicking the channel button again and again to try and find a channel that worked. Only, you couldn't find anything. Not one channel that was something other than static.
You frowned a bit in annoyance and decided to try to call the front desk. The manager did say that they were free of charge of course. So picking up the phone, it had a number on the phone that called the office downstairs. And after dialing the number, a voice answered the phone.
"Hello. This is the Embrujado Hotel. My name is Ms. Sparkle. What can I do for you?" A mare's voice answered the phone, not sounding the least bit interested in talking to any pony.
But having gotten used to it by that point, you just told her the problem. And without even a moment to consider, she answered you without any change in her voice. "I'm sorry, but our cable's going to be down until the storm is over. Sorry for the inconvenience." She told you, not sounding all that sorry at all. And before you could even respond to that, she hung up. Leaving the phone to just leave that annoying tone since no pony else was on the other end anymore.
So putting the phone back, you went to your backpack. Looking for something to do for the next hour until you wanted to rest. And after ten seconds, the static of the TV was starting to get a bit annoying. So you stopped searching and picked up the remote to turn the TV off.
But what you saw made you drop the remote in shock. On the screen, the TV screen that didn't even have any cable, it wasn't showing static anymore. The noise was still there, but it's not showing it. So on the screen was something off putting. Something that was disturbing and made you feel was invading your privacy. On the screen was one lone eye. Staring right at you.
And it wasn't just facing directly forwards either. You were a bit off-center towards the left of the room. Yet the eye was looking directly at your face. It was a light mustard color and was shrunken to the point where it was not even close to being the normal size of a pupil. The eye filled up the entire TV, rounding at the corners so you could see every part of the eye. The pupil was too small to be the normal size for this eye, and it was directed right at you.
Still having a bit of skepticism, you walked to the opposite side of the TV, where the eye kept looking at you. Not breaking contact with your own eyes. Of course, there was still the idea that it could've been one of those tricks your eyes played on you. Like the eyes of paintings following you if you passed them. Only, it was a TV screen instead.
So you tried to make sure that was it by testing it. You went from one side of the screen to the other. Walking forward and moonwalking back. The eye not losing track of you. So you tried to pick up the pace. Going from one side and back faster and faster. The eye still following you.
Soon enough it was starting to get old. It was just a mind trick, simple enough. But as you stopped suddenly, the eye moved forward a bit before realizing that you had stopped in place. So in attempt to keep you from noticing, it tried to refocus on you. But it was too late. Because of the eye's little slip up, you knew that this wasn't a mind trick.
To test it out, you took off your shoe and gave an underhand toss towards the floor lamp that was in the corner of the room. And as it hit the lamp and caused it to rock forward an back a little, you saw the eye focus on it for just a millisecond before looking back on you. That was proof enough to turn off this TV right now.
So not daring to look away from the screen, you bent down and felt around for the remote. Picking it up and turning it towards the TV screen to turn it off. But instead, the opposite happened as you pressed the power button. The pupil on the TV got a little bigger. Almost like the power button was zooming in on it.
Thinking it was you pressing the wrong button, you made sure that your thumb was on that power button before pressing it a few times. Only for the pupil to get a little bigger each time.
After pressing the button five times, the pupil was half the size from being normal sized. And that only made it freakier. So you ditched the remote and went up to the TV for the manual power button. But since that eyeball was right in front of your face, it was unnerving to just stand near the TV as you put your finger on the power button and pressed it. Making the pupil grow to normal size now as it kept watching you.
Thinking that you'd eventually turn it off by pressing the button, you pressed it again and again as fast as possible. Hoping that it would turn the TV off eventually. You watched until the pupil grew larger and larger, to the point where it was too big to fit on the screen. It was a never ending loop as you kept pressing the button like it was a video game, not daring to stop or jump away from the power button until it made you stop by-
"RRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAA!" The television sounded off a deafening growl as it flashed from that oversized pupil to a disfigured pony face in an instant. Not even a second of fading or camera change, it was sudden. Like a horror movie or jump scares in a video game. Except this was real. The sudden appearance of that menacing face and loud horrible roar made you jump back from the TV since you were directly in front of it. Making you land on the bed behind you and tumble to the ground.
It was too much. This wasn't normal. The cable was useless in the storm, and there was no DVD or Blue-Ray Player connected to it. Yet after being scared onto the floor, you quickly sat up to see that, the thing on the TV was just standing there. It wasn't gone, but it wasn't attacking you or moving that much. It just stood there as you sat on the ground. Not moving whatsoever.
So as it didn't move, you started to make your way to your feet. Not wanting to just sit there if it somehow popped out of the screen. It was really unnerving too. It had only one eye in the top left, your left to be exact, corner of it's face. And it had a mouth the went vertical instead of horizontal. It's mouth was slightly opened, revealing its sharp teeth that were going in every direction. Some even curving backwards and forwards to go in even weirder directions.
After getting a good ten seconds to just look at it, the monster started to fade away as something else on the TV started to show. A video that looked like it was from this room. It had a pink pony relaxing on the bed, playing with her pet lizard or something. It was a little hard to tell with how small the picture looked and how far away you were from it. Still, you saw that much at least.
That's when she suddenly looked up, having heard something you guessed. The TV didn't have any sound, so you couldn't hear whatever happened. You watched the screen as she got up from her bed and checked the bathroom door. Moving it back and forth to see if it was working. At that moment, she turned around and looked towards the phone. Then towards the lamp at the side of the room as it flickered on and off. But she ignored the lamp as she went to the phone first, answering it.
At that moment though, she dropped it the second she picked it up. Making it hang off the side of the table. She didn't care though as she held her ears in pain, hearing something very loud from the phone. Even her pet lizard jumped into the pillow cover to try and get away from the sound. But that wasn't enough to stop the incredibly loud noise. So before it could go on, she hung up the phone in an attempt to turn it off. The look on her face told you that it didn't work. The sound causing her to try and stop it another way. So she pulled a small set of wire cutters from her puffy mane and disconnected the phone.
That made you stop the video though. If this was thee same room you were in right now, then...How did you call the front desk?
You went over to the phone and picked it up. Tugging on the chord the pink pony in the video had supposedly cut. And surprisingly enough, the chord was still cut. The phone was never connected. Not now, and not when you were talking to 'Ms. Sparkle' over the phone.
You went back to the screen to see what was going on now. Only to see that the pony was trying to open the door to her room for her and her pet to escape. That loud sound still playing apparently. But even after trying to kick the door open, she wasn't able to get it open. She was trapped in her own room and it looked like she was coming to tears about how loud and inescapable the sound was. She couldn't get away, and was trapped inside the room. With how bad it seemed, you could tell it had to be torture.
But that wasn't even the worst part. As the music kept going, she went from trying to block out the sound to getting desperate. She tried to take the phone and stuff it under the mattress of the bed. She ran to the bathroom and came back out with a plunger. Trying to bust the glass window to try and get out. And when that didn't work, she tried the lamp in the corner of the room. And in one other attempt to break the window, she somehow managed to pick up the big TV in the room and throw it at that window. Only for it to just hit the window and fall to the ground. Not even leaving one scratch on the window.
The look on her face showed just how angry and desperate she was getting. That noise getting to her very quickly. Not to mention, it started to get to her lizard as well as it started clawing at the wall. Pinkie did the same ripping the table lamp off the table and throwing it at the pile of stuff by that window. She then jumped on the table and started to pound on it. Yelling out in hopes some pony would hear her. But when no pony answered her, she tried to forced her way through. Trying to ram into the wall in an attempt to bust out.
She didn't dare stop though. She kept hitting the wall with as good a running speed. But going head first was starting to show some strain on the pony as her head turned a little red. Then started to drip a little red too. That's when she stopped and turned around. Bucking the wall to get out. But it still didn't work. And to make it worse, it didn't make one dent.
At this point, she had given up. Sliding to the ground and covering her ears one last time. Her lizard still starching more and more at that wall to get out. She didn't care as she started to shake violently on the ground. Almost as if some pony else was shaking her like crazy. She went on like that for a good minute until...
She stopped. She stopped squirming and holding her hooves as she just stood there. Emotionless and without any kind of caring for what happened to her pet, her room, or her own injury. Seeing the look on her face, you could tell it was just like the staff workers.
Next, she stood up calmly, going over to the bed for a few minutes. At this point, you didn't want to see anymore and tried again for the power button. Only, it still didn't work. Thinking it might be something from the chords in the back if anything else, you turned the TV to look at the chords in the back. But there was only one chord that was attached to the back of the TV. The power chord. One that was unplugged and broken.
You quickly turned back to the TV and see the screen still going. It was all still working despite it all being unplugged. On the screen it only got worse. The pony was now trying to smash the phone with her own head. Apparently going insane by the sound to the point of trying to destroy the phone as quickly as possible, not even caring anymore. What the weird part about it was that she looked completely calm. Not angry, agitated, scared, worried, nothing at all. It was like all her emotions and personality had disappeared. Leaving her to look calm, but still with the intent of stopping this sound no matter what.
Suddenly, you watched silently as she stopped in shock. Seeing something that was out of view of the screen. She took a few steps back in utter fear as she kept her eyes on the corner you couldn't see. And as she made her way to the door, she jumped over to it and tried to force it open before whatever was in the corner could get to her. But sadly for the pony on the screen, a sudden black figure jumped towards her. Moving so fast, it looked like a blur to you. But the instant that blur got the pony, the screen shut off. Finally following the laws of logic since it had been unplugged this whole time.
Piecing it together quick enough, you realized that the pink pony in the video had to be what had fallen into the pool below. Whatever attacked her must've thrown her out the window and into the pool below. And if the pink pony was in this exact room, and the figure appeared here, you had to get out now. So not even caring if you left your stuff here or not, you made your way for the door. You still had your phone and keys in your pocket, so that just left you getting out of here.
So getting to the door, you turned the door handle and swung it open. Immediately jumping back in fear as you saw what was on the other side. "Hello there. Is there any trash you would like me to take care of for you?" The pony on the other side asked.
She stood right in the doorway, almost as if she had been waiting for you to open the door. And when you did, she was right in your face. But that wasn't what made you jump back in fear. It was just who the pony was in front of you. It was the same pink pony that you just saw get attacked on the screen. The same one you saw fall into the pool below.
She now had a calm and uncaring look on her face as she was dressed in a blue shirt, a hairnet, gloves on her front hooves that were specially made for hooves, an apron. She was dressed up as a hotel sanitation mare. A maid basically. She had a cart of cleaning supplies next to her, which her pet lizard, which getting a closer look you realized was a baby toothless alligator, was standing on top of.
She couldn't have been here. She was killed, wasn't she? By that figure you couldn't see right? And for that matter, what was she doing as the maid of this hotel?! All these questions weren't being answered, and they weren't going to be. So as you got up, you told her firmly to get out of the way as you tried to get out of the room. Desperate to leave now.
"I'm afraid you can't do that." She then got in the doorway and tried to push you back into the room. Refusing to let you leave. And as you started to overpower her, you were able to see the outside of the hallway.
Outside was more of the 'staff' gathering at the doorway. The bellhop from earlier was out there, as was the manager you met at the front door. There were also three others standing there. A black coated pegasus with a yellow mane, dressed as the hotel's maintenance stallion with a tool belt. A baby dragon dressed in a small blue janitor jumpsuit with soot and sludge on it, and his scales looking like he had never seen the sun before. Showing that he probably worked in the basement or the boiler room. Finally, there was a purple unicorn with a simple suit like the managers with a nametag that read, 'Assistant Manager: Sparkle'
So you stopped trying to push the pink pony as you started backing back into the room. Knowing you couldn't take on two earth ponies, two unicorns, a pegasus with tools, and a fire-breathing dragon.
As you backed up, they started to come into your room. So as you got to the middle of your room, you remembered the window. If the pink pony went through it and lived, then you'd live too. Landing in the pool so you could run to your car. But turning around, you stopped as you saw two pegasi waiting by the window. The room service rainbow colored pegasus from before, as well as the pale coated pegasus janitor you saw cleaning the pool. They were both dressed up as room service and a janitor respectively, but they also had cloaks with hoods on to keep dry.
You were trapped between two groups of hotel staff that weren't about to let you leave. And as you stood in front of the TV, it started to turn on again. And on the screen was that monster you saw before. Pure black coat, one eye in the corner of its face, no mane or tail, and a mouth the went vertically instead of horizontally. Teeth sticking out of it violently even though its mouth was closed. And as it started to open its mouth to show the rest of his teeth that went in every direction possible, you started to back away from the TV. Going in between the two beds of the hotel room.
The ponies, and dragon, from the hallway were now in and standing at the only doorway out of here. Guarding it so I couldn't escape. The pegasi outside the window were doing the same thing with the window. Not coming forward, but not letting you leave. That's when the monster on the screen started to move. Out of the screen.
First, its hoof took a step out. Going from being a picture on the screen, to a real hoof. The rest of him followed, his head still disfigured when it came out. That one eye on its head never blinking as it looked directly at you. Almost as if it was looking directly through you, but knowing you were still there. Scared about the sight of its face you never noticed that as you were backing up, you stepped on the remote you threw behind you. Tripping over it and falling forward. Your face only a few feet away from the monster in front of you.
It opened it's mouth wide enough to look like it's head was splitting into two. Its teeth sharp enough to eat anything. And knowing that you weren't getting away, no matter whether you wanted to just sucker punch it and run away, or just use magic to teleport away, you couldn't. You had no way to get away and just got ready for it to get you. Probably making you one of its mindless drones like all the others that were watching you in this room.
And right as it jumped forward to eat you, right as you flinched at the sight of that monster, right as you accepted your lose. You woke up from your nightmare of the Embrujado Hotel. Or as it's better known as, the Haunted Hotel.
And this is where we conclude the story! Well, I know that it was scarier and not as light-hearted as the rest, and I guarantee that this will be the only one in this special like this (need some scary/creepy story in a Halloween story) Still though, I don't think it was that bad. But I guess that's all up to you to decide.
Also, the idea of this story was given to me by: gakuseiakira. He gave me the idea for a haunted house story! But if by any chance you didn't like this chapter, blame me. I am the one who wrote it of course. Same goes for the other chapters.
Plus, this is the first time I've written a story in 2nd Person! And I have to admit, I kind of like writing like this! Making the audience the mane character helps create a cool outlook on the story! Of course, that means that I have to progress the story in a way where there's only one option/choice or I have to guide the thoughts. Which may get a little unrealistic since not all of you would have those thoughts.
So I guess I hope that you all thought the story was realistic and good enough!
Also, sorry it took me two or three days to put this up. My computer kept messing up on me, and our washing machine in our garage has caused some flooding. So much water we had to sweep out, I thought we were on a boat! Oh well, the rest of the special we'll be trying up some loose ends. And I bet you can all guess what I mean.
Sadly, with October almost over, that means that I won't have time to accept anymore short story options. Sorry every pony, but there is some good news too!
I plan on focusing three months on every year to special events! You already know what one of those months will be. The Halloween Fest! The other two will go like this!
February will be focused on, I bet most of you already figured it out, pairings! Yep! On February I'll make a special like I did with this and ask you for a one-shot pairing you want me to do.
And on May I will do Video Game month! Where you can all send in a video game universe and an MLP character you want to see a short story of! And why May? Well, May is when the game Scooby Doo Night of 100 Frights was released! And that was the first ever video game I got on a GameCube! My first actual Game System! Aw memories!
Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed this chapter, and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the chapters! Until next time every pony!
