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:-D Anywayzzzzz I posted a new story about…. DISNEYWORLDDD so plzz look at that… any ways back to this story, it's in _'s POVV! Twist time! Can we try to get 30+ reviews before the next chapter plz? Back to the story, cuz this is like SUPERRRRRR long note…. Hehhehehhehhehehehhe READ!

*Amanda's POV*

I hate him. I hate her. I hate both of them. They led him to destruction. They will soon lead me to the same.

I cannot trust them. I cannot trust them, but especially not her. She is evil.

She is weak. She will break.

I am not sure about him though. He look strong. He looks Dauntless.

The leader is mean. He is cruel. I like him. He is powerful. Power can overcome fear.

No fear can mean first in initiation.

I must play to my strengths. I must avoid them. They will be watching me. They will always be watching me.

They will watch my reactions. They will judge my fights. They are criticizing.

He is not. He will protest me. I hope he will.

I must stay strong. Being strong will get me places.

Being weak will get me factionless. I wonder if he considered being factionless over nothing.

I would rather be factionless than nothing…

I wonder if he felt the same… No. That is foolish. He did not think the same. He chose to be nothing.

I want to be nothing. I wish I was nothing. I wish that people didn't care.

I wish I was home. I wish I was still me.

I wish I wish I wish.

I wish he hadn't admitted to liking me.

I wish I has said goodbye.

So this was a new style of writing for me… Tell me what you think… love it? Hate it? I think its obvious who POV its in…. hmmmmm….. I gotzzz ideazzzz :D ~~~~Sarah~~~~