Hello I hope you all enjoyed your weekend. I would like to take a second to reply to a couple of comments.

Alexbellefan- thanks for all your positive comments! And as for a wedding and kids, well you are just going to have to read this story to the end :P

ChibiRealm- thank you for taking the time to write that long comment. Sorry chapter 2 made you cry. I know how you feel and I think most of the readers feel the same way you do. And thank you for clearing up the Gd, Gp nonsense. I thought that too. And that's how Tobias feels. But Johanna seems to think that there may be something to it, and the former erudite can't help themselves sometimes when it comes to knowledge and experiments. I think what I'm really trying to get at in this fanfiction is that Tris was special. And that's all I'm going to say. :P keep reading though.

Everyone else- thank you for your support and I agree with you all when you say make this a happy ending. I will do my best.

On with chapter five. Now we are getting into the heavy stuff. Please don't hate me for what I did at the end of this chapter. It is a cliff-hanger.

After talking over what we saw on the footage I finally get to meet with George. He looks haggard, almost like what he saw on the footage actually disturbed him. I don't blame him.

'Four! You're actually someone I want to see.' He says unexpectedly.

'Me?' I don't know why he wants to see me.

He leads me to a small room and sits me down and shuts the door. He sighs a heavy sigh. 'Four where were you last night?'

I raise an eyebrow. Am I being suspected?

'I was at home.' I answer truthfully.

'Were you alone?'

'Yea, when you live by yourself, you tend to spend your nights alone' I retort not knowing where this is going.

'I only mean is there someone who could vouch for you being there all night?' he says apologetically like he is trying to be gentle.

'The doorman is there all night, and there is security cameras, ever since that break in a week ago, I'm sure if you look at the footage you will see me come home from work and not leave my apartment til the following morning' I say flatly, he knows all this.

'Ok yes of course. Hmm' he lets out another heavy sigh and his brow furrows.

'What is going on?' I'm a little annoyed now.

'Come with me Four let's take a walk' he says standing up.

'Not until you tell me what's going on!' I demand more urgently then I meant to.

George turns and faces me, 'I think it is best if I just showed you.'

George leads me to a room that I recognize right away from the video, and he has me put special shoes protectors on and gloves on so that I don't contaminate evidence.
He leads me right to the frozen tank.

'This is a cryogenic tank; it is where they freeze things to preserve them without them becoming contaminated and to keep them in an unanimated state. There was something in this tank last night, but we are still unsure of what that is. It was what the thieves were here to get. But it's gone. And no one can understand how.'

I think about what George is saying and let it register in my mind. The thing in this tank was frozen and unanimated. So how is it gone? Just like I saw on the screens, the lights went off in the tank and then all those strange things happened. And then when the lights came on the thing was gone.

I look around the room at the aftermath and wonder how I didn't notice all the blood stains around the room. These thieves were beaten senseless.

I look at the tank, now with the door open and it thawed out it just looks like a glass box. And I'm reminded one the case that Tris drowns in her fear landscape.

'What's any of this got to do with me?' I ask curiously.

'We discovered this when we opened the door this morning' he turns pointing to the glass of the tank.

And there on the door is something that makes my blood run cold, so cold that it hurts to pump it through my veins. There on the inside of the glass door is blood and among the blood scratched into the glass is my name "Tobias".

I can't help but just stand there with my mouth agape, a million questions running through my head.

After discussing things over with George I think I got him to believe that I had nothing to do with my name being there. And that I wanted to be informed as soon as he has any understanding as to why my name is painfully etched there. I also managed to ask George about the security for the council meeting and he assured me he would take care of it. He could tell I was rattled after what I saw and I think he kinda regretted showing me. He told me to go home and rest and said to contact him if anything strange happened and if I needed his help. I thanked him and was eager to get out of that building after that. Great! Another "Great" memory to add to the list of erudite "Fun times" Man I hate this building.

I wasn't looking where I was going because I knock some man right over and onto his face.

'I am so sorry!' I say helping him up. 'Caleb?'

Great just what I need

'Four!' he squeaks! I don't think I have ever heard him make that noise before. He seems alarmed at my presence, no he seems afraid.

'What are you doing here' he stammers, a little more evenly this time.

'I am on an errand for Johanna, had to see George' I say, he looks like he is going to wet his pants.

'Oh ok' he says nervously 'sorry I have to cut our conversation short but I must go' and he scurries off down into one of the corridors.

'Nice to see you Caleb' I shout after him.

That guy gets weirder and weirder

I finally arrive home and I couldn't be happier to have another shower and hop into bed. I actually believe after the stress I went through today I might sleep tonight.

I slide my key in the door, but it is already unlocked. I may not have been dauntless for a long time but my training pumps fiercely through my blood still, readying me for a fight. I can feel the adrenalin clearing my mind and rippling in my fists.

Something feels wrong! I cautiously step inside.

There I examine my apartment. Nothing looks disturbed, but I feel something out of place. I open the draw nearest me and pull out a gun I have concealed there. I may not live by the gun anymore but I'm not a fool to not have one in my house, not since the last break-in anyway. I scan the room once more and assure myself that the room is secure. I slowly creep towards my bedroom door which is shut and place my hand on the knob.

I recoil my hand painfully when I receive an unexpected static shock. What the hell?

I glance around the room again and that's when I notice it's different. Everything looks charged. My light bulbs glow brighter than usual, the plant in the corner that Christina bought me that is usually dead looks alive and spritely. The hairs on my arms stick up and the hair on my head clings annoyingly in places and is flying upwards in others. My ears pick up a slight electrical humming too.

I put my hand back on the door now and only slightly flinch when the shock comes again, but I keep my hand there. I turn it slowly and quietly. I can feel someone on the other side of this door. I can feel their breathing.

I take a deep breath before I burst through the door and take aim.

My hands tighten ferociously and I shoot.

The moment I shoot two things happen. The lights in the apartment explode and the electricity in the air is cut. The second thing is that I wish I hadn't fired my gun. I regret alot of things in life. I regret not spending every waking minute with Tris. I regret not trusting her. I regret not being there that fateful night. But in this moment my regret is a hundred times worse than any of those. I regret firing my gun, because when I shot I didn't miss. And when I shot I saw her fall to the floor. I shot where I always shoot, right between the eyes.

I look at her lifeless body on the floor and I crumble to my knees

Her grey blue eyes pierce my very soul, her eyes, once so bright now stare lifelessly at me and blood trickles down her nose and onto the floor.

I wheeze her name and it cracks on its way out.

'Tris!' I drop my gun. What have I done!

Sorry guys I'm really evil to poor Tobias! No haters please! Just hold out for the next chapter. –rionsremy