In Ponyville:
All ponies were staring at the two new stallions walking down main street, amazed at how they looked. One was a dark brown, tan colored body with a short, snow white colored mane. His tail was long, straight haired with the same color. His body was tall and well built, the kind any young mare would want to be with. The piercing blood red eyes seem to have some of the ponies spooked. Plus his long black coat with red flames at the cut off bottom made the other ponies seem to stare more.
The other stallion was taller and just as well built. His light grey coat complemented his silver colored mane and tail, even though his tail looked more like a wolves. Sunglasses covered his eyes, which made him look mysterious, which made ponies talk about him even more. A long white, sleek coat with red lining covered his body that made him look almost like royalty.
The smaller stallion looked around and whispered to the other stallion, "They're all staring at us Issac."
"I know Laharl, just ignore it and continue to walk normally," whispered Issac.
Laharl looked around and saw a cafe with an empty table, "Let's go sit down over there and assess the situation." Issac nodded in agreement and they both went to sit down.
Issac looked down and said in a hushed tone, "We've been stared at before, but this is completely different... I feel like they're going to start a riot."
"Don't say that or it will happen."
Laharl could hear all the whispers, "Did you see those new ponies?"
"Yeah... they look so strange."
"Their clothing is kinda weird too."
"That ones eyes look so... bad."
"I think they both look hot."
"I wonder if they're single?"
After a while of sitting, a purple unicorn and a purple dragon approach them. "Excuse me but are you two new to Ponyville," asked the purple unicorn.
Laurel looked up and quickly responded, "Uh yeah... we're both... drifters travelling from place to place, learning about the world." He put on a big, sharp toothy smile which creeped the unicorn a little.
"Ha ha ha, I see," she said nervously, "If you want, I can show you both around Ponyville and to my friends."
Issac lifted up his head and said, "That sounds lovely, we'll take you up on that offer."
The unicorn put a hoof up to herself, "I'm Twilight Sparkle," she then pointed her hoof to the dragon, "And this is Spike."
The dragon waved at them and shyly said, "Hi."
Laharl Pointed his hoof at himself, "I'm Larharl."
Issac did the same thing and said, "And I'm Issac."
Twilight stood on her hind legs, lifted up both her front arms and shouted, "WELCOME TO PONYVILLE!"
Sugar Cube Corner:
The three ponies and dragon stepped into a big shop filled with wall to wall sweets from small cupcakes to huge wedding cakes. The smell alone was making the young stallions mouths water. They snapped back to reality hearing Twilights voice, "This is the Sugar Cube Corner. The best sweet shop in all of Ponyville."
"I'll say," Laharl said gawking at all the sweets around him.
Suddenly a bright pink pony came up close to his face, "HI," she squealed. Laharl yelled, fell on his back putting his right hoof on his chest.
Issac rushed over in a panic, "You alright man?"
"I... think... my... heart... just... stopped... ," he said through hyperventilating.
"Pinkie Pie, you need to calm down in front of new guests," Twilight said pointing a hoof at the pink pony.
Pinkie bounced around the room talking real fast, "Wow new friends to play with. This is so awesome Twi, You have new friends. I can't believe it. Two new guys to hang out with. You know what we should do. We should throw them a welcoming party. I think they would love that. So do you two want a party. Huh huh huh huh huh?"
Laharl got up and said quietly, "Sure, that sounds nice."
Issac nodded in agreement, "Totally."
Pinkie squealed with joy, "Awesome, hey Twi, can I borrow Spike to help set up cause it's gonna be a big one?"
Twilight gave a concerned at Spike who looked at her and said with confidence, "Don't worry Twilight, I can handle this."
She closed her eyes, shook her head and then looked at the two strange stallions, "Well, shall we continue the tour?" They both nodded and the three ponies left leaving Pinkie and Spike preparing the party.
Carousel Boutique:
The three ponies entered a very fancy looking building filled with exotic dresses and outfits. It looked too "girly" for Laharl to the point where it was starting to make him sick. Suddenly a pure white unicorn with purple, curly mane and tail popped out from around the corner wearing red glasses. She spoke in an elegant, British type voice, "Welcome to Rarities Carousel Boutique. Where fashion is… oh, hello Twilight darling. How are you?"
She gracefully trotted over and gave Twilight a hug. When she released, Twilight pointed her hoof in the mens direction and said, "Rarity, this is Laharl and Issac. Their new to Ponyville."
"Oh," Rarity said in surprise and trotted over to get a closer look at them.
She closely examined both young stallions, nodded some and hummed a little, "You two… must know some male fashion, am I right?"
They both looked at each other, "Uhhh…"
"Well you both have excellent taste. What do you think of my fashion style," she asked pointing at her display of dresses.
Issac made a confused face, "I really can't see the fashion here."
Rarity rushed up to him and made a very angry face, "How can you not see my beauty here? Are you blind or something?"
He raised up his sunglasses to reveal golden eyes with no pupils, "Yes, yes I am." Rarity was shocked and took a couple of steps back. Twilight looked surprised at what she saw as well.
Rarity blushed, looked away and said in shame, "I... I… I'm so sorry darling... I didn't…"
Issac lowered his glasses, walked up and rubbed her head, "It's ok, you didn't know." She walked away getting back to work. Twilight urged the men to get out and continue on with the tour.
Sweet Apple Acres:
After visiting some other amazing places, Twilight took the both of them to a farm that had fields and fields of apple trees. There were many different varieties of apples, too many to count. They approached a barn where an orange pony in a cowgirls hat hauling carts of apples. Twilight waved over to the pony, "Hey Applejack, doing heavy work as usual?"
The pony stopped what she was doing, unhooked the cart strap from herself and walked over to Twilight and spoke with a southern drawl, "Hey sugarcube, wat's happin'in?"
"Oh, I'm just showing Laharl and Issac around," pointing in their direction.
Applejack gazed at them, "Howdy boys, welcome to Sweet Apple Acres."
Issac sniffed around, "Is that Golden Delicious I smell," then he started to drool.
Applejack giggled, "You go help yourself now." He charged forward devouring said apples.
Laharl put his hoof to his face, sighed and shook his head. "Wow, your a big fella ain't ya?" He removed his hoof, looked down to his right and saw a little light olive filly with a red mane and tail and a dark pink bow in her mane. "Hi," she said in same way Applejack talked, "Ah'm Apple Bloom, what's your name mister?"
"Laharl," he said in a monotone voice. She looked up at him with big dark orange eyes. "Well... aren't you just a cutie," then patted her head. She giggled, blushed and kicked up some dirt.
Applejack looked at Apple Bloom, "Why don't you go and play with Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo dear?"
She nodded and trotted off to play. "Ah see my sister likes you," Applejack said with a little smirk. He sighed a little, "Seems so. Well Twilight, thanks for the tour, now I'm going to take laughing boy home with me so we can get ready for the party tonight."
"Alrigh't, I guess I'll see you both tonight. It was real interest'in meeting you both."
He nodded, walked over and pulled Issac from the cart. He whined a little but started to walk out of the farm with Laharl. Applejack leaned over to Twilight and whispered, "Them boys sure is weird."
Twilight whispered back, "I know, but I like them." Applejack nodded in agreement.
Outside the Alchemy House:
Both boys were walking down the road until Laharl put his front leg out in front of Issac, stopping them both. Laharl looked at a nearby bush and said in a loud voice, "Hey, what are you two doing outside our house?" A blue pegasus with a rainbow mane and tail flew out and landed in front of them.
She scowled and yelled, "How did you know we were there man?"
Then a yellow pegasus with a pink mane and tail slowly walked out from the bush and said in a hushed tone, "Umm Rainbow Dash... I don't think it's right to yell at them for not going for the prank."
Rainbow sighed, "Your right Fluttershy. I'm sorry guys."
After greetings were exchanged, Fluttershy said in a hushed tone again, "I'm sorry our prank didn't work on you two... I mean I'm sorry we tried to prank you."
Laharl looked at her, "It's fine."
Rainbow spoke up, "How did you know we were there anyway?"
Issac spoke, "We're that good at knowing things," he motioned to Laharl, "Especially him. Very little gets by him." Laharl nodded in agreement.
Rainbow rolled her eyes, "Yeah, sure, whatever." When all the pleasantries was over, both pegasus said their farewells and headed to the Sugar Cube Corner for the party tonight. The men entered their house and got ready for tonight.
Sugar Cube Corner:
Both guys entered the sweet smelling bakery for the party. Suddenly the lights came on and so many ponies screamed in unison, "WELCOME TO PONYVILLE LAHARL AND ISSAC!" They all stared at them waiting for a response.
"What are we standing here for," Laharl said and then threw up his two front hooves, "Let's get this party started."
Everypony cheered and started the celebration. Rarity apologized to Issac for her outburst earlier and he accepted it. Soon the music changed to hip-hop and Laharl started to break dance. It was catching the attention of most of the ponies, especially the mares.
The party continued all night with so much fun, even Laharl and Issac enjoyed themselves for the first time in a long time. But somewhere in the back of Laharls head, he knew that tomorrow would bring work. The kind that both men are used to.
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Authors Note: The new format is good. If anyone would like to help, please pm me. Help with anything at all. But no changing characters, pairings or adding other oc's. Ciao!
